Yuki的作文贴

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164# longxue26

The reading material asserts that nowadays people read less literature and the culture has received unfortunate impacts.(impact有3个方面) However,the speaker in the lecture challenges the assertions as below.
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First, the reading discusses thatliterature provides the best intellectual stimulation but the reading has declined. This point is attacked by the speaker, arguing that there’re manyhigh-quality reading materials such as science writing and history. They allencourage people to exercise imaginations and offer intellectual stimulation. Thus,books except literature don’t mean they are not good to read.这话有点别扭

Second, the article talks that people spendless time in reading literature and divert（divert有娱乐的意思，但不能这样用） much time in entertainment forms,leading to lowered level of culture. The speaker casts her opposite opinions onthis theory and point out that there’re so many beautiful songs and excellentmovies worth appreciating. They might be more influential on我没听到 the public than literatureis. Besides, the form of culture has changed and there’re other valuable formsin contemporary culture.
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Finally, the reading material criticizes thatreaders’ standards has decreased and talented writers today lack audiences. Butthis theory encounters adverse discussion from the speaker in the lecture; she explainsthat current literature is too difficult for people to understand. So it’s notthe audiences’ fault.
点都差不多说到了 会不会说的有点简单？ notice about the details

JulianlodUID：2688193

额 YUKI姐 偶然路过 发现你28号的作文写错题目了

独立小组的题目和以前特训组的题目是有区别的 昨天的是讲VACATION RATHER THAN JOB SECURITY

longxue26UID：2687755

167# Julianlod 谢谢你哦 我好像是把题目搞错了 最近比较2

JulianlodUID：2688193

你都写了这么多篇了 我觉得你写的差不多了 该总结以前的习作了 背背机经题目的好习作什么的 我考试前都这么干 VACATION这篇作文可是911的重点机经哦

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169# Julianlod

是吗...我还是害怕自己写不好 考试的时候时间不够用 什么的

毕竟以前太差劲了

也应该整理了  但是最近有很多事儿 心烦意乱的...

哎

JulianlodUID：2688193

考试时间肯定够用的 我以前也都担心自己写不完 后来考试才发现俩次都写完了 考试的环境很紧张你会不停的往下写的 而且我都是430+字数

你考过T了啊 据说911很可能是新题 我也在拿911的竹子预测再准备 我912的说

没事 你是实力型 加油没问题的

longxue26UID：2687755

171# Julianlod

你才是实力型!
你的竹子机经是买的吗

JulianlodUID：2688193

就在GTER下载的啊 找找 是一个好人上传的

我明显是华而不实型 6G每考到理想成绩 T的听力口语也不好 马上就到申请了 也很不安的说

longxue26UID：2687755

173# Julianlod

嗯 彼此彼此

大家一起加油吧 我911的 你912的 都省不到两周了

哎

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已修改

utdreamerUID：2793080

164# longxue26
几乎不用改的好文啊

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写的好诶~！@#￥%……&*（）——+


改晚 了 不好意思哈

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164# longxue26  
几乎不用改的好文啊
utdreamer 发表于 2010-8-29 21:03

楼主要注意了，这篇“几乎不用改的好文”有很多需要修改的地方，比如首段就有很多。
没有时间，现在就不明指了哈。如果有时间，一定来拍

longxue26UID：2687755

178# lghscu


:L  您赶紧来拍哈

longxue26UID：2687755

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Some people think making sure that others (influential people or potential employers) know about your strengths and accomplishments can help you succeed, if you do not do this, you won’t have a successful life.

Some people eager to make sure that their strengths and accomplishments are fully exposed to others, especially to those influential people and potential employers, hoping this effort can help gain a successful life. However, they tend to be confused with the true conception of successful lives and overstate the weight of self-presentation. In my opinion, I totally disagree with the vain idea.

It’s too assertive to conclude that without projecting himself/herself on strengths and accomplishments, one won’t have a successful life. Primarily, we have to figure out there’re various standards to define a successful life. Many professors had worked in famous areas before teaching students, but they resigned the decent jobs and converted their career route because of the different belief in life success. They are more willing to devote themselves in education, concealing former splendid achievements and reacting with students as familiar as a good friend. In this sense, can we call them the life losers? Apparently, they’re living a life filled with respects and admiration, harvesting more meaningful success.

In addition, some people take showing merits and feats to influential people in company for the vital access to life success by mistake. As a matter of fact, people need to cooperate with other factors that are more effective and essential to achieve the goal, such as hardworking, consistency and honesty. Successful scientists win accomplishments and reverence not by spending a lot of time representing themselves to others but by devoting as much as possible to study and research. On the other hand, wise employers never value company staffs merely based on the strong points and past accomplishments. The spirit of dedication and innovation turns out to be more significant criterion for managers to select talents.

Admittedly, one can make deeper impression on others by introducing strong qualities; nevertheless, whether it is helpful and beneficial really depends. Purely offering positive demonstration to leaders or mangers might stir up peers’ misunderstanding or even averseness. How could people succeed in life without healthy interpersonal relationship? What worse, once failed, people can hardly gain trust and confidence from others again. They will naturally be considered as big boasters, not to mention any further promotion or achievements in life.

In sum, according to the arguments above, I never agree that if we don't make others know our strengths and accomplishments, we won’t have a successful life.
   
我自己没改 懒得看了 使劲拍吧