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930 独立 People benefit more from travelling in their own country than travelling in a foreign country.

When choose which destination of traveling, modern people always confront too options, one is travelling domestically, the other prefers travelling abroad. Actually, both of them have advantages and disadvantages. Hence, I think it is too irrational to claim that people benefit more from travelling in their own country than a foreign country. In my opinion, people could benefit from both travelling domestically and abroad for the following reasons.

To begin with, I would like to exam the advantages of travelling in one's own country. Initially, It is undoubtedly that travelling domestically is convenient for people who are not able to speak foreign languages. There is no obstacle in communication with the local people, so people would not encounter troubles when they buy souvenirs and ask ways when they get lost. For example, when I came to Hangzhou, one of the most beautiful city in south of China, I felt quite confortable to be there and had a good impression with the citizens. When I have troubles with how to find the destination, I just went to ask someone around and would definitely receive warm-hearted replies, even they gave me extra suggestions about the view spots and the sightseeing route, which was really helpful to my travelling. Then another relevant merit of travelling in one's own country is that one doesn't need to be worried about money exchanging . The only thing one need to do is packing up all the things and taking enough cash, then one can enjoy the trip without searching for the exchange station in an unfamiliar place.

On the other hand, there are also myriads of advantages about travelling aboard. Since going abroad could provide individuals a change to learn from the foreign culture, the foreign scenery is always attractive to them. No one could deny the unique and compelling figures the foreign culture has , travelling in a foreign country would be a fascinating experience to the travellers.

Another advantages of travelling abroad is that young people could broaden their horizon from an oversea tour, and this is bound to benefit their further development. My friend Joe is the case in point. Joe is a young man considered as "successful" in the society today. He earned 50 thousands dollars in his first year after graduation. However such a boy told me that he is not so confidence with himself before, until an opportunity changed him. He participated in an exchanging project and went to Korea to have a visit at the third year of college. Then, when all the students were rushing around to find jobs before graduation, he had already went to an investment company, because he had met the company's manager in Korean and left him a good impression. The experiences of travelling to Korean not only bring him a new angle of view to the world but also a valuable opportunity to his vocation. From his story could we draw the conclusion that the experience of travelling abroad could benefit people in a long term.

However, travelling in one's own country and in foreign country have each disadvantages. For in one's own country, people would not find so much surprise in travelling because of the same cultural background people share which make the cities and sights quite the similar. For in a foreign country, it is not so convenient due to the languages barrier and difference of custom.

From all above, both travelling in one's own country and in foreign country could give one unparalleled experience which would never fade away from one's memory.

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930 Is the ability to read and write more important today than in the past?

Whether the ability to read and write is more important today than in the past?  Some people might argue that the ability to read and write in the past is as important as today, because in the old period there are only books and papers for people to read and write so indisputably the ability to read and write seems much significant for people in that time. However, in my view, the reading and writing ability do play a more important role in our life today than in the past for the following reasons.

Undoubtedly the new technology has bring us tremendous changes to our life, especially on our  reading and writing manners. Since the technology of information and computer have provide a deep impact on our world, It is common that children could manipulate the mouse before they could write, adults could write in the computer better than on the paper. It seems the morden world requires less demanding for their reading and writing abilities, but actually, the ability to read and write is more important for these people who are used to using computer than pen and paper. Firstly, with the exploring of information as well as the efficiency of Internet, people would receive flood of information everyday whatever that are useful or not. In order to distinguish this information, one should have an excellent capacity of reading, which could help them to get a quick understand of the information and select the most useful ones. For example, a human resources workers would receive a huge amount of emails everyday, especially in the season of graduation. How to pick out the most suitable candidate from the sea of emails? To achieve this, it require the reading ability, which could help the HR to get a general and quick glance of each emails. If the HR doesn't know how to get the main point and neglect the rest, he will suffer from exhaust and low working efficiency.

On the other hand, the ability of writing also becomes much more important than in the past. Since the myriad of information and variety of media, people would only choose a little part to read, or they don't stop too much time on one certain content then shift to another one. In order to make our ideas much more acceptable and attractive, individuals should obtain more skills of writing. Taking job-hunting as an example. When the student want to get a job, they always write a numbers of emails to the HR. But due to the lack of writing skills, they fail to catch HR's eyes then their mails could not escape from the fade of being deleted directly. Since on no account could we deny the competition today is much severe than in the past. In order to survive in the society today, one should pay more attention on the capacity to write. From the discussion above, we could safely draw the conclusion that the ability to read and write is much important than in the past. As a consequence, should we take a more severely concern with the cultivation of our writing and reading abilities.

From the discussion above, we could safely draw the conclusion that the ability to read and write is much important than in the past. As a consequence, should we take more severely concern with the cultivation of our writing and reading abilities.

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我凌晨上来给你改哈~~~抱歉~~~
现在有事

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1001 独立 感觉这话题没话写啊...憋出了点自己都不忍目睹的超级大白话
letting a friends make a mistake is better than saying or doing somthing that may destroy the friendship

According to the speaker, letting a friend make a mistake is better than saying or doing something that might threathen the friendship. However I don't think it might be a good way to maintain the friendship. In my opinion, we should prevent our friends from making mistakes, which would not merely harmful, but useful to the friendship.

Firstly, no one could deny the importance of honest in the friendship. Since honest is the base of friendship, without that character, people could not become true friends. So it is better to tell our friends the truth, even though that take some risks of destroying the friendship. But from my view of point, the real friendship which could last long could not be destroyed by simple cases,  especially when one person tend to prevent another from making mistakes. Take me as an example. When I was a middle school student, I got along well with a girl named Jane. Jane was a warm-hearted girl who were always ready to help the others. But she always talk with the others in a quite straight way, and these always led to misunderstanding of the others which made other friends felt angry with her. As her best friends, from the begining, I felt aquite embarrassed to tell her the wrong manner that she spoke to others, because I did not want to make her lose face, which would do harm to our friendship. But finally, I made my mind to tell her my feelings and gave her my advices in a modest way. To my suprise, after listening to my words, Jane looked into my eyes sincerely, and I could even see tears in her eyes. She Thanked me for my kind words, and she really appreciated my consideration of her . From then on, she took much more concerns about her behavior, and our friendships  become more and more stable.

Secondly, as a fact, letting a friend make mistakes could not be profitable to the friendship. It might defeat the origin purposes in the long term. If I did not tell the truth in the story above, I don' t think it is benefical to Jane in the long run. If no one went to point out her flaws straightly, she would never refine herself but probably made things even worse in the future. Since true friendship always serves the purpose of favoring each other, It would be better to tell the mistakes a friend made in favor of his or her own good.

After all, I would prefer to tell a friend his or her the truth when he or she make something wrong. The characters of honest and sincere are essential to good friendship so there is no need to be worried about that such a behavior would destroy the true friendship.

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这是9月30的。 S酱.doc (24.5 KB, 下载次数: 13)

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虽然。。。我上次交作业交的比较晚。。。不过，，，也帮我改一下吧。。。呵呵

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51# chenyyalex

thx 阳阳~
关于这句~
because of the same cultural background （background 是because of 后的词组）people share（background的定语从句 ）which makes the cities and sights quite the same. （background的同位语从句）

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改好了，详见WORD

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改好了。 101
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54# lynn27

thx~~这几天去外地办事所以没效率~~晚点给你改

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1002独立 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Spending time alone is the best way to relieve stress

It is quite common that modern people are more or less suffering from stress due to the fast rhythm of life. In order to relieve pressure, some people prefer to stay alone. In my viewpoint, there are other options for one to relieve stress rather than that, and spenting time with other people is a case in point.

When depression attracts. from my perspective, it is not a wise choice to trap oneself at home or sit in a bar drinking shot after shot, that would merely not help us feel better, but contribute to our depression. On the contrary, people should go to their friend for help. Indisputably a good friend is always ready and willing to help you. After a good talk with friends, people would usually find the depression has gone away, which could turn them become full of vigour again. Take me as an example. When I am under pressure and feel bad, I always call my friends to eat out. When staying with my best friends, I feel free to share my happy and unhappy experience with my friend, then she will tell me hers. The delightful talk and the fine food always sweep my bad mood away. So I think having a free talk with friends is one of the best method to release pressure.

Another good way to help is doing sports. Since sports could not only built out physics body, but also could strengthen our heart and mind. When playing sports, individals will not able to spare any time on his worry but just concentrate on playing. I recommend people to do team sports for the purpose of relax. For instance, One of my best friends Joe is used to playing basketball with his classmates every afternoon. He said that the sweat just takes all his pressure away, and leave him a good mood. It seems the same with my older brother, he always play badminton in a gym at Satuday in order to relieve stress from work. He said that playing badminton with his colleagues is not only helpful to release pressure, but also keep them in form at work in the next week. Moreover, another relevant merit of team sport is that the accomplishment a team achieves together could contribute to our self-confidence, which would definitely enhance our ability to defeat the stress.

Even though some people would choose to stay alone to release stress, such as going to movie theater or listening to music at home. However I think it is more effective to hung out with the others. Since there is a saying that a trouble shared is a trouble halved, it is better for people who are under pressure to relieve stress by playing with the others.

From all the discussion above. I strongly recommend that people should spend time with the others in order to release pressure.

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1002 独立which is more important for students， to understand ideas and concept or learn facts

it comes an option that what is more important for students, one is to understand ideas and concept, while the other is to learn facts. In my opinion, both of them play an important role to student’s development. But in my opinion, I think students should attact great importantence to ideas and concept in their study for the following reasons.

To begin with, let me exam the advantages of  ideas and concepts. First, no one could deny the fact that ideas and concept are essential to education, it is fundametal for students to learn the basic ideas and concept. Take mathematics as an example, children who learn this subject often begin with the concept, which could not only help them obtain knowledges of mathematics, but also contribute to their logical thinking.

Besides, children would gain the ability to solve problems independently by understanding the ideas and concept. The reason is that ideas or concept always stern from the practice., so they are able to direct children to solve problems they encountered in reality. My little nephew Joe, who is a middle school student, has won a prize in a model-make competition. By learning about the concept of physics from classes, he developed an interest on flying machine. Then he started to make models of planes himself in the assistance of books. He did learn a lot from books and finally a prize rewarded his hard working. So it is more beneficial for students, especially little children, to understand ideas and concept in their early education.

What is more, understanding ideas and concept could enhance the creative thinking of our students. That is because learnning about the ideas and concept would broaden children's horizon. For students who study science or art, to propose new concept and ideas is the essential to make achievement in each realm. Since the inovation is based on the existing ideas and concept, it is highly significant for students to understand ideas and concept.

However learning facts is also important to students. From my perspective, I think we can leave students to learn facts when they set foot into society. Time is precious, so impossible it is for student to possess all the knowledge in school, we should choose the most necessary part of knowledge to teach our students, which is the ideas and concept.

From the discussion above, it is safe to draw the conclusion that students could benefit more from understanding concept and ideas. Since our education serves the purpose of developing the creativty of our students, it is more important for studends to understand ideas and concept.

米爆爆UID: 2892134

S酱你写得很好哇。
55555555...我写得那么混乱。。
佩服你阿。改不出错的。

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58# 米爆爆

谢谢哦~你写的也很好哇~
那啥attack great importance to是一个短语，重视的意思

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写的不错 细节挺好