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发表于 2010-11-16 12:58:52 |只看该作者
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1116 Visiting museums is the best way to learn about a country.

When traveling to a foreign country, visiting museums is absolutely a good way to learn about this country. However, the museums
just display some aspects of the country which are mostly about the nation's history. Therefore I opposite to the opinion that visiting museum is the best way to learn about a country.

It is admittedly that the museum is a miniature of a country. In museums, people could have a quick review of the development of the country and learn about the country's culture. For example, when foreigners visit the museums in China, the unique crafts and paintings will endow them a general impression of the traditional culture of China. However, great changes have taken place in China. Chinese people are no longer wearing the dresses of Qing dynasty, or they do not
make a bow with one's hands clasped to greet people any more. For modern people living in China, they have adapted a new style of life and developed new culture from the old one. If some one want to know more about modern China, the museums will fail to show them the contemporary life of Chinese people.

Another important equipment which has weakened the effects of the museums is the Internet. It is widely acknowledged that the Internet has become the most effective way to get information. People could learn whatever they want through the Internet just by clicking the mouse and keyboard. There are highly detailed information on line, which the museum cannot provide. When I took an English class and got an home assignment of presenting something about Poland, I searched a wealth of information about Poland on the Internet, including its festivals, traditional food, literature and music. I used the WIKIPEDIA to learn about different aspects of Poland.  If I paid a visit to a museum of Poland, I did't think I could have a deep understanding of Poland but just glancing the items on display hurriedly. Thus I think searching information through the Internet is a better way to learn about a foreign country than visiting museums.

Moreover, the way to learn things varies from person to person, as well as the things people want to learn are different. For these tourists, who travel to a foreign country for the purpose of sightseeing, museum might be the best place for them for the reason that they just want to see something unique and interesting. But for some scholars who study the culture of the foreign countries, visiting museums cannot be the best way to study what they are specialized in. In terms of the discrepancy of different people, it is a one-side conclusion that visiting museum is the best way to learn about a country.

From all above, we can safely draw the conclusion that it is irrational to say visiting museum is the best way to learn about a country. People should choose the way they learn according to their own conditions and purpose.
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发表于 2010-11-17 17:54:29 |只看该作者
1116 revised by Fletch to S
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本帖最后由 S酱 于 2010-11-20 15:10 编辑

嗯~今天被一位作文30的同学拍了~于是偶还有很多要加强的地方!然后让夕落同学帮我挑错误中,发现自己N多弱点,嗯~作文果然是最难的- -还有一周考试了水平提不上但是就少犯错误吧!

1.注意开头一定马上表明观点不说废话!
2.注意时态!单复数!
3.注意一定要理直气壮语气强硬!
4.作为一个不咋写插入语的人一定要在考试里写出1句以上插入语!
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发表于 2010-11-21 19:29:49 |只看该作者
172# S酱
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It is more important that a government should spend money on education of young children than on university?


的写作帖子上线呀。。

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发表于 2010-11-26 22:38:45 |只看该作者
11月25的 改好了
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发表于 2010-12-4 13:58:15 |只看该作者
S,你觉得写成故事可以么?
就是不是这种普通的八股文,而是那种通过一个有血有肉的故事,说明观点。

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