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106. You need to travel from your home to a place 40 miles (64 kilometers) away. Compare the different kinds of transportation you could use. Tell which method of travel you would choose. Give specific reasons for your choice.




I usually go to school by bike , but in the rianing day i would like to choice the school bus. My mother told me , next year , near our house there will be build a subway station and it will be finished among 6 or 8 monthes, so from next year I will have a new method to go to school. so those three ways are all very good to travel from my house to a place which is 40 miles away , and they are all very safe.



But in my mind , my favourite method is riding bike. When i was a child, my grandfathrt teached me how to rid a bike, and bought me the very fist bike . Its a red one. I like the colour , because its  made me feel very warm and happy . Also , my grandfather is the person who i most admiar. He has influenced me greatly ,bucause he has so many good qualities. He is well educated and keeps an open mind. His thinking is very modern . He is able to understand people from different generations. In addation , he is a good lienster. His person values set a good example to me to follow in my own life. The way he treats people and thinks makes me want to become the best person I can be. I love him very much.When he was young he is rider, so it makes me have a very different feeling with bike.



School bus is ok . Good choice for the rainning day , but there is too many people on it . Every morning, people alway eating breakfast on the bus , it make very bad smell on it . If Iriding a bike to school , may be it will spent a lot of time , but the air in the morning is very fresh outside, it makes me feel happy.



So ,it's easy to conclusion that bike is the method of travel i choose from my home to a place 40 miles away.
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不太会用难得词。。 不知道这样写行不行。。

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