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坏绿的眼睛UID: 3138294

太感谢了~！其实我语法小问题很多的  因为上大学以后就再没碰过语法  所以急需大家给我挑错  非常感谢你！让我很收益
30# iBT20120304

坏绿的眼睛UID: 3138294

2月6日  综合 TPO20_森林大火
According to the reading passage,the “let it burn” policy should be abandoned,basing the 3 kinds of demage to forest.  But the lecturer casts doubt on the reading by arguing that this policy is right at mostly condition.

Firstly, in the listening, the professor advocates the fact that vegetation could grow better after burning.But the author persent Yellowstone fires cause tremendous damage to the vegetation.Thus,the professor challenges the author’s point.
     
Secondly, the lecturer holds the opinion that the population of animals will recover,and the food chains will be stronger. .Then, the speaker take trees,rabbits and hares to an example.The reading passage contends that the fires damage food chains and make it impossible for the animals that survived the fire to return.

Lastly, the professor asserts that Yellowstone fires is a very unusual combination of factors and it would not happen every year.It refutes the point in the reading that fires compromised the value of the park as a tourist attraction.

In conclusion, the lecture runs counter to the reading passage from the three aspects presented above.

shibin11UID: 3228029

嘿嘿 你晚上独立写好了站内M我一下 我怕忘记
According to the reading passage,the “let it burn” policy should be abandoned,basing the 3 kinds of demage to forest.  But the lecturer casts doubt on the reading by arguing that this policy is right at mostly（个人觉得用most） condition.

Firstly, in the listening, the professor advocates the fact that vegetation could grow better after burning.But the author persent（presents?） Yellowstone fires cause tremendous damage to the vegetation.Thus,the professor challenges the author’s point.我觉得这个有点多余

Secondly, the lecturer holds the opinion that the population of animals will recover,and the food chains will be stronger. .Then, the speaker take trees,rabbits and hares to an example.The reading passage contends that the fires damage food chains and make it impossible for the animals that survived the fire to return.

Lastly, the professor asserts that Yellowstone fires is a very unusual combination of factors and it would not happen every year.It refutes the point in the reading that fires compromised the value of the park as a tourist attraction.

In conclusion, the lecture runs counter to the reading passage from the three aspects presented above.


听力听挺全的 羡慕下LZ的听力^^。

坏绿的眼睛UID: 3138294

2月7日 综合 基因树好不好
The lecture doubts the point mentioned in the reading material that Genetic modification is beneficial for natives and economy, because its three disadvantages. The explanation will be presented below.

First , the reading suggest that these genetically modified trees are designed to be hardier, even if they all was in deep water of ringspot problem. But, the speaker came up with another case that genetic modification tree is mostly died, facing difficult condition.

Secondly, the reading mentioned genetic modification could bring in more economic benefits, basing the fact they grow faster and provide more products. Comparing to this point, this professor believe that it is utopian idea, because their owner have to pay for company offered them for using.

Lastly, the speaker asserts that these trees also absorb resources like water which belong to the native trees before. It refutes the point in the reading that genetic modification trees grow more faster, so that they can prevent overexploitation of wild trees and meet the need of timber, save the native trees.

In a conclusion, the speaker challenge the points made in the read passage basing the reasons above.

shibin11UID: 3228029

（话说LZ 6号的独立还没写好。。）

The lecture doubts the point mentioned in the reading material that Genetic modification is beneficial for natives and economy, because of its three disadvantages. The explanation will be presented below.

First , the reading suggest that these genetically modified trees are designed to be hardier, even if they all was in deep water of ringspot problem. But, the speaker came up with another case that genetic modification tree is mostly died, facing difficult condition.我赶脚这边主要是说树的多样性的问题，如果一直种这种tree，如果哪天这种specie无法生存了，所有的树就Die、out了。但是如果是另外一种情况，即使一些die out，另外一些也是继续生长。不知道我有没听错。

Secondly, the reading mentioned genetic modification could bring in more economic benefits, basing the fact they grow faster and provide more products. Comparing to this point, this professor believe that it is utopian idea, because their owner have to pay for company offered them for using.我记得听的是要plant就要pay。

Lastly, the speaker asserts that these trees also absorb resources like water which belong to the native trees before. It refutes the point in the reading that genetic modification trees grow more faster, so that they can prevent overexploitation of wild trees and meet the need of timber, save the native trees.我感觉这边主要是说native和这个树之间对recourse的compete。

In a conclusion, the speaker challenges the points made in the read passage basing the reasons above.

小的语法错误尽量避免下^^。

shibin11UID: 3228029

对了你8号的写好站内M下我 我怕忘了~

坏绿的眼睛UID: 3138294

2月8日综合
The lecture do disagree with the point of reading passage that ethanol fuel is not a good replacement for gasoline.Then,he cast doubts three disadvantages of Ethanol fual which is presented in the reading material.Actually,the professor believed that Ethanol fual is beneficial for environment and society rather gasoline.

Firstly,in the listening,the speaker advocates the fact that the ethanol fuel have more positive impact for environment.The reading passage mentioned ethanol fuel is made from plants,so the more increased use of it ,the more  growing plants planted by producters could sbsorb carbon dioxide.Thus,it could remove the globle warming.

Secondly,the lecturer suggets that people can produce ethanol flue by XXX which most of them is not eaten by animals.That means we can made ethanol flue from apart of plants,and feed animals others.Thus,production of ethanol can not damage the food source of animals.

Finaly,compared the point of reading,the speaker asserts ethanol fuel could be cheaper than gasoline.When producters bring it into operation widely,its price will go down.Also,the production can be more valueble.

In a conclution,campared to the point of reading meterial,the professor do believe that ethanal fual is a applicable replacement for gasoline,basing on the reasons above.

MELODYSKIINGUID: 2841950

改好了……才发现不是一组的= = 不过没关系啦...^^

shibin11UID: 3228029

The lecture do disagree with the point of reading passage that ethanol fuel is not a good replacement for gasoline.Then,he cast doubts（casts doubt） three disadvantages of(on) Ethanol fual which is presented in the reading material.Actually,the professor believed（我觉得这个全文都一致下时态比较好） that Ethanol fual is beneficial for environment and society rather gasoline.
Firstly,in the listening,the speaker advocates the fact that the ethanol fuel have more positive impact for environment.The reading passage mentioned ethanol fuel is made from plants,so the more increased use of it ,the more  growing plants planted by producters could sbsorb（absorb） carbon dioxide.Thus,it could remove the globle(global) warming.

Secondly,the lecturer suggets that people can produce ethanol flue by XXX(。。。？) which most of them is not eaten by animals.That means we can made ethanol flue from apart of plants,and feed animals others.Thus,production of ethanol can not damage the food source of animals.

Finaly,compared the point of reading,the speaker asserts ethanol fuel could be cheaper than gasoline.When producters bring it into operation widely,its price will go down.Also,the production can be more valueble. In a conclution,campared to the point of reading meterial（material）,the professor do believe that ethanal fual is a applicable replacement for gasoline,basing on the reasons above.

额额不是TPO22吗。。好像我给写错了。。。

坏绿的眼睛UID: 3138294

谢谢哟~！！
虽然不是一组的 可是我有在学习你的作文
遣词造句很厉害的说~~
再次鸣谢
38# MELODYSKIING

坏绿的眼睛UID: 3138294

220 独立
Asked what parents will do to improve their children, the response in modern society is allowing their mistake and making them learn from it. As we all known, everyone will make mistakes. And, If one person want growing up, first of all, he/she have to learn that how to improve themselves from force. Basing this fact, i do agree with the statement , because the mistake a suitable teacher for children, and they can make children acquired more experience about one issue. The exblorate explanation will be presented below.

First of all, children could acquire more experience in the summary process after making mistakes. It is said that mistake is the best teacher. That is, comparing with having classes in campus. people always acquired more experience and knowledge from mistakes. It is suit for children, too. As a report, produced by a team of Mr. King from H.K, 22.8 percent Japanese, 35.0 percent of Chinese and 45.6 percent of Thai hold this point that parents should allowing their sons and daughters making mistakes because they believed children can acquired more from them.

Secondly, parents and teachers cannot guide teenagers all the time. They truly need one teacher could motivate themselves in everywhere of life. So, as parents allowing they making mistakes and encouraging they sum morals from force, children could have a most suitable teacher for them.

Finally, many rules and standards always are summed after making mistakes on their own. That means, they could remember every stuffer and making right choice when facing next seemed challenge.
In summary, basing on these reasons, I do agree with the statement that parents should allow their children to make mistakes and let them learn from their own mistakes. I do believed that every mistake should be make used of a sword, a mirror, and a shield for youngers.

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已改好~
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坏绿的眼睛UID: 3138294

TPO23 in today's world,it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.


In this age and time,a lot of people have stood at the intersection of this problem and pondered about which one is a better
choice,check everything quickly while risk making mistakes or to take care of all slowly and make sure that they are correct.
In my case, when it comes to taking care cases from my  job or family, slowly and make sure everything is okey have more
powerful magnets. As far as I am concerned, the quality of  public life can be proved in following aspects.

First, perhaps no issue affecting fast-paced  world  as significance to people in working as efficiency.
Just nice work gonna be a good tip.Thereby,work quickly is hard for standing for good performence.
According to report 20.8 percent of the Japanese employees, 17.0 percent of the American employees,
and 30.0 percent of the Thai employees hold this point that a efficiency work performance is worthy of
raises.

Also,I believe that  the most important issue arrecting our society today could be solved within our lifetime
if everyone hold the heart which keep their duty things go around slowly and well.It means, people cleared every
task for fall back on easier solutions is  is not responsible

Finally,I believe that check everything quickly is important, to some extend. And I believe that no one boss,
no one professor glad to discover error for another. That is, everyone will hope-their students hand assignment which is
wonderful ,their employees finish cases well. Due to this,the functions of slow-paced work are aimed to help make people's
lives better.

There is anyone out there who still doubts slowly work is good,who still wonders if other factors can restrain these problems,
this essay is my answer.

坏绿的眼睛UID: 3138294

T23倒霉树的灭绝
The lecture from the professor refutes three possible reasons caused decline of yellow cedar trees , and says these three ways are all not responsed , as discussed below.

First of all, according to the passage, one way is to reestablish yellow cedar trees in the place they used to live is insect parasites . However, the professor disagrees with it by pointing that only the only the sick and damaged cedar are attacked by the insects,that is, the reason is not suitble for yellow cedar's decline absolutely.
  
Secondly, the writer suggests to the decline of yellow cedar trees in northward because of clawing from bears. Whereas, the lecturer expresses his point that the decline is not be caused by  clawing from bears absolutely. And he metions an example, in such an island including yellow trees has no bears, that is no clawing, faced decline too.

Finally, about the climate, speakers advocates this fact that most kinds of trees dead for warm climate, then quotes yellow cedar trees could not be infulced by the colder weather.

idealibtUID: 2667256

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