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922 It is more enjoyable to have a job and work long hours for three days in a week than to
work shorter hours for five days in a week.

For me, a travel enthusiast, it is seemingly not difficult to choose from working long time every day and lasting three days in a week and working for a few time every day but coming to office five days in a week. I prefer first choice rather than another, because of long and lasting time is easier for any arrangements of having a trip. And I do believe that having traveling frequently is the most enjoyable thing in my common life, also it is good for my health.

First of all, as the reason gave above, picking up few days for long hours working will be more easier for travelling arrangements. I could have more time which could spending on journey or shopping as long as these substances is wanted for me, I rarely could be free absolutely on the way. Last year, when my grandma invented my parents who are travel enthusiast too to having a oversea trip, my parents have to rejected this attractive idea just because of their work schedule system is working long hours and have no elastic spaces. Every time my parents disappoint faces appearance in my brain, I always want to write a letter to chairman or any other national leader to blazing this depersonalization work time system.

Also, Put more days into vacations, it is not only meaning I can staying at some magic countryside or hot spring, but also could supporting a deeper traveling thought a large stronger city or even tasting a new folk craft. Take my experience for example, once I kept working for 15 days for gaining four days’ vacation, thus, I came in original mountains with friends on the plan, we spending two days on the train and two days on learning a excellent and unique plangi technology for native nationalities. After ending this journey, I found that I have fall in love with these beautiful colors and even tried to make a kind of blue by myself. All of these solutions would make my common life enjoyable.

Admittedly, maybe working shorter hours for five days in a week would be easy for companies to controlling their staffs. It suggests that leader could make sure everyone could in their place when facing some exigency conditions.

In my opinions, I do believe that giving more days to staffs for relaxing would be more hommization.If anyone denies my view, this essay is my answer.

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922 It is more enjoyable to have a job and work long hours for three days in a week than to
work shorter hours for five days in a week.

For me, a travel enthusiast, it is seemingly not difficult to choose from working long time every day and lasting three days in a week and working for a few time every day but coming to office five days in a week. I prefer first choice rather than another, because of long and lasting time is easier for any arrangements of having a trip. And I do believe that having traveling frequently is the most enjoyable thing in my common life, also it is good for my health.

First of all, as the reason gave above, picking up few days for long hours working will be more easier for travelling arrangements. I could have more time which could spending on journey or shopping as long as these substances is wanted for me, I rarely could be free absolutely on the way. Last year, when my grandma invented my parents who are travel enthusiast too to having a oversea trip, my parents have to rejected this attractive idea just because of their work schedule system is working long hours and have no elastic spaces. Every time my parents disappoint faces appearance in my brain, I always want to write a letter to chairman or any other national leader to blazing this depersonalization work time system.

Also, Put more days into vacations, it is not only meaning I can staying at some magic countryside or hot spring, but also could supporting a deeper traveling thought a large stronger city or even tasting a new folk craft. Take my experience for example, once I kept working for 15 days for gaining four days’ vacation, thus, I came in original mountains with friends on the plan, we spending two days on the train and two days on learning a excellent and unique plangi technology for native nationalities. After ending this journey, I found that I have fall in love with these beautiful colors and even tried to make a kind of blue by myself. All of these solutions would make my common life enjoyable.

Admittedly, maybe working shorter hours for five days in a week would be easy for companies to controlling their staffs. It suggests that leader could make sure everyone could in their place when facing some exigency conditions.

In my opinions, I do believe that giving more days to staffs for relaxing would be more hommization.If anyone denies my view, this essay is my answer.

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已改。
PS:  楼主真心爱旅游，哈哈...

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SYNCIA 发表于 2012-9-24 21:52
可参考。
已改。
PS:  楼主真心爱旅游，哈哈...

谢谢版主，给的建议都很中肯很有价值！

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9.24作文：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement：It is easier for parents to raise
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About this our times, I do agree with the words gave by Dickens, “It was the best of times, it was the worst of times. But for raising children, I tend to choose the first view, basing on the higher level economy, education, medicine and others condition on the occasion. As time gone, society having so much improved on economy, medicine, and other aspects. These cases happen all over the world, parents having more money could be putted into raising children and these youths would have better treating when they got sick.

First of all, the fast development of society brings more choice on education. More and more people could choose sent their children to one nice personal school when their child was very young. Not only young children, in fact every time I walked through the main street of my city, I could find more than 100 education agency's sighs. Nowadays, when children grown up, they could choose to entering university or go abroad. However it is rarely impossible in the past. My grandma once told me that mostly people have to working early, no matter he or she became adults or not.

Also, this time have higher quality at several domains just like medicine, farming and other aspects related closely to children's common life. Take my experience for example, last year I was sent in hospital because of esoenteritis. At there, I got really careful treating. My doctor, Mr. Levis gave me useful suggestions about choose curing and diet arrangement. Thus, I was cured soon. Compared with the past, that is a time when children becomes sick and were sent into hospital, they could not have large space at choose remedy way. In fact, these boys and girls could be sent into hospital were so lucky that they have had not much influences by the war and part clash. Due to the investigation made by a team lead by Mr. King of Hong Kong university, in the past, 34.5 percent of Thai young children, 54.9 percent of Japanese young children and the overwhelm 60 percent of Chinese young children could not get good treated.

Admittedly, old time have advantages yet. In that time, food is natural, chicken have no hormone, TV was not popular and PC could not invented. That means children always eaten natural food and they are good for health. Even without the development of technologies about TV and PC, few children got myopia. But I still believe that our time have more advantages rather than before.

In a conclusion, it is the best of times which improved time for raising children. This higher level education, medicine and other conditions could make children grown up healthy and happiness.

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2006201652 发表于 2012-9-27 17:18
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谢谢 :D

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9.26作业：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement：Compared with people who live in urban areas, the people who live in rural areas can take better care of their families.

With the rapid development of society, countries and regions all over the world face the challenge of urbanization. Urbanization expanded over the decade and a lot of people face the choice between go villages and stay in city. In this condition, someone support previous view comes up with such an point that compared with citizen, the others who live in countryside can take better care of their families. But I disagree with the statement basing on these reasons blow.

Initially, people could look after elders in urban areas, and most families consist of middle-aged couples, children and elders. Normally, in urban area, there are numerous professional hospital can be choose from rather than in rural areas. When family members need to rush to hospital, living in city really ensure people could getting aim place by fast speed. Especially for these families which contain sickly elders or children, short distance between house and hospital confirm the level of health of family members.

Also, education plays a important role in all the aspects taken in to account when people choose place to live in. For these families contains children which was described above, the quality and number of schools mostly have become the principal issue. Due to a investigations made by a team lead by Mr. Swan from Hong Kong University, the overwhelm 70.4 percent of Chinese and 60.3 percent of Korean wants equip their sons or daughters could with a good education and tend to choose desirable school district for live place. Living in cities always means there are many private schools nearby and even maybe when children come to high school, they still are not far away from home. Hence, more choices on education and shorter distance between school and home or parents' office undoubtedly are better for taking care of their children.

Finally, even if the air in countryside maybe more fresher and the environment maybe more quiet, but no one could deny the importance of reasons above, thus I always love living in city rather than in rural areas. However, if anyone denies my view, this essay is my answer.

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10.6作文：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person's job has more effects on his or her happiness than this person's social life does. Use specific reasons to support your answer. （Happiness)

In my view, I disagree with the statement that someone's career would have more influrences on his or her quality of live.  As we all known, friends were choosen and required in our common life, we always recharge ourselves from them and receiving charming and comfort. At contrast, the staff of my office they are just accompany with us in weekdays and they may have not same interseting and could not sharing happiness and sadness with us.

Initially, as the words said that "friends are wealthy." In my view, friends, that is a group of people whom choosed and required by ourselves in common life from social activities. It means that they always encourage me, comfort me and admire me. These people living in every corner within my common life except for the working time that people within it have no ideas about choosing working partners, spending mostly free time with their friends and other relationships. From this view, these individuals have more time to effect on his or her quality of life; they have more changes to bring in happiness.

Also, basing on this issue discussed above, these individuals of person's social life have unique change to effect friends and this kind of emotion always means warm, power and love. So I believe they could bring in real happiness. Take my experience, when I fall in my first exam of entering university, one of my friends named lily always stand by my side and comfort me. Furthermore, she even helped me to find my week point in a variety of all my subjects and motivating how to solve problems just like do these annoying guide lines in the solid geometry. Finally, I got the higher grade in my second exam and find this one gives me happiness would be my friends.

Finally, these person related in social life could became friends always have same interesting with me, because they attracted each other by this point at first, but working partners have less possibilities at sharing the happiness from doing the same tasks you interested in. For example, if I could dating my friends for fishing at any time, because I know we have same tendency, but if I asked my boss if he would want to fishing with me, I believe he tend to doubt if I got to crazy.

Due to this discussion above, I believe that social life have more changes to bring in happiness from friends by different ways for us.

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