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10. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


Nowadays, many parents and teachers hold such a strange idea that playing computer games is a waste of time. Because they thought it could not benefit teenagers absolutely. The truth is contrary to the template view, playing computers games could enable children become cleverer and get deep understanding about several aspects, for example group working. So I do not agree with the point, basing several advanteges of it and I will present my explanation.

First, as a excise of brain, playing computer games could make children' brain receive running more. These children have to use their intelligence to work out any problems they met in the games. And every kind of computer games would be settled different tasks by administrator of it. That means, they must learn to hold these complicated conditions and every problems they met, using the limited tools or arms to solved problems by themselves absolutely. Basing this fact, I believed that it could make children cleverer.

Then, playing computer games ensured children get deeper understanding about group working. In most of electricity games, player need to fighting with others for working out problems such as killing monster or escaping from danger. Children usually get information about group working from lecture of teacher. But most of them were too young to understand how to accompany with others and how to fighting for success as a team. Due to this issue, playing computer games could give them vital experience. I do believe that it would not be forgotten forever.

Final, playing computer games beneficial for extending children's social net. No one could deny the fact that children's social net is limited, because almost of their daytime was spent on campus and they could not related with these people settled different ages. But, playing computer games means they could gain more chance to chat with different people and they can easily get the key of communication within this process.

In all, there are so many advantages in playing computer games, not to mention that it could relax children's pressure. So why not supports this idea? If anyone denies my idea, this essay is my answer.

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8. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In the media improvement society, I believed that no one could deny the fact that television advertising directed for many people. The perfect pictures and videos of products always motivating individuals want to having a good as same as the actor of advertising for enjoying the seemingly comfortable feeling spared by it. As everyone young children are too young to distinguish these stories from screen and true. So I do agree with the statement that television advertising directed towards young children should not be allowed.

First, many advertisement on the screen usually have dangerous actions, just like some cute little girl standing on the edge of roof and breathing the fresh air. In little angles' view, they may consider that doing like this could fall into the amazing feeling like the little actors of advertisement. It could motivate them to do the same thing absolutely and it is so dangerous for young children. Take a example, when I was young, once tried to touch with the electricity power because having watch a advertisement that a little boy was so excited because of some excellent cakes and he touch a electricity power, final became a hero. Sure, I was been stopped by my mother, even I could not tell my story now.

Then, it would be avoided at parents always be asked to buy some products which are they do not needed. Nowadays, many parents could met their little angles' quests, even though most of them were unsuitable and most of these goods that be asked by young children were not useful. Take my experience, I once wanted a piano affected by YAMAHA’s advertisement when I was five years old. But my mother known I could not kept seating on one place and practice every day so she rejected my quest. But it could not remain that every mother could reject unsuitable quest from children, so it would make waste undebtly.

I have told that it could make waste for met some unnecessary quest from children above, but give a deeper understanding about this issue. Even though parents could reject these unreasonable quest, but their young babies could not realized these keys but blazed their parents. No one could deny they would hate their parents at that time! So, It is necessary to stopped allowed these advertisement directed towards young children.

In all, I do agree with the view that this kind of advertising which directed towards children should not be allowed.

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0919作文：Patience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later.

Contrast to the point given by statement, I do not agree with the unreasonable opinion that patience is usually not a good strategy, and I don't believed that it patience means people couldn't focus on action now rather than later. In my opinion, patience actually is a nice characteristics for anyone and having this quality always means you could step to the success easily. I will present reasons below.

First of all, Patience means someone who having this quality could stick to do anything, no matter learning new knowledge, doing with their tasks, solving some annoying things on their career or common life. For example, in fact I have no talents on math and always get 'B-' from professor on this subject. But in my country, math is necessary for the exam of entering university. It means, I have to get excellent grade on math if want make my dream which is entering the top law school come true. So I received suggestions from my father and decided stick to learning knowledge about math and even adding time to doing math practice questions. In the end, I got 'A' in both high school's union test and GAOKAO, in fact, this kind make sure I take my attentions both on my lack strategy and other subjects, it makes my dream come true.

Also, no one could deny the fact that working hard is such an important issue for stepping to success, because in some extend, having patience is just able to making people stick to do something along basing on the reason given above. Basing on a investigation by a team lead by Professor King of Hong Kong University, 50 percent of Japanese, 67.6 percent of Chinese and the overwhelming 83.4 of Thai hold the point that patience and working hard could not be separated in common life, and the quality, patience is necessary for young to get their goal.

In a word, patience is such an excellent quality that it makes people stick to do with their working and working hard in common life. If anyone denies the fact, this essay is my answer.

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0919作文：Patience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later.


Contrast to the point given by statement, I do not agree with the unreasonable opinion that patience is usually not a good strategy, and I don't believed that it patience means people couldn't focus on action now rather than later. In my opinion, patience actually is a nice characteristics for anyone and having this quality always means you could step to the success easily. I will present reasons below.

First of all, Patience means someone who having this quality could stick to do anything, no matter learning new knowledge, doing with their tasks, solving some annoying things on their career or common life. For example, in fact I have no talents on math and always get 'B-' from professor on this subject. But in my country, math is necessary for the exam of entering university. It means, I have to get excellent grade on math if want make my dream which is entering the top law school come true. So I received suggestions from my father and decided stick to learning knowledge about math and even adding time to doing math practice questions. In the end, I got 'A' in both high school's union test and GAOKAO, in fact, this kind make sure I take my attentions both on my lack strategy and other subjects, it makes my dream come true.

Also, no one could deny the fact that working hard is such an important issue for stepping to success, because in some extend, having patience is just able to making people stick to do something along basing on the reason given above. Basing on a investigation by a team lead by Professor King of Hong Kong University, 50 percent of Japanese, 67.6 percent of Chinese and the overwhelming 83.4 of Thai hold the point that patience and working hard could not be separated in common life, and the quality, patience is necessary for young to get their goal.

In a word, patience is such an excellent quality that it makes people stick to do with their working and working hard in common life. If anyone denies the fact, this essay is my answer.

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alexcui 发表于 2012-9-20 13:44
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改好啦

你十九号的独立改好啦
另外，提醒一句，好像你忘记了单开作业贴。。。。
这样按版规是不行的哦 = =
要单独开个帖子，然后把你的作文都放进那个帖子才行的。

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0919作文：Patience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later.


Contrast to the point given by statement, I do not agree with the unreasonable opinion that patience is usually not a good strategy, and I don't believed that it patience means people couldn't focus on action now rather than later. In my opinion, patience actually is a nice characteristics for anyone and having this quality always means you could step to the success easily. I will present reasons below.

First of all, Patience means someone who having this quality could stick to do anything, no matter learning new knowledge, doing with their tasks, solving some annoying things on their career or common life. For example, in fact I have no talents on math and always get 'B-' from professor on this subject. But in my country, math is necessary for the exam of entering university. It means, I have to get excellent grade on math if want make my dream which is entering the top law school come true. So I received suggestions from my father and decided stick to learning knowledge about math and even adding time to doing math practice questions. In the end, I got 'A' in both high school's union test and GAOKAO, in fact, this kind make sure I take my attentions both on my lack strategy and other subjects, it makes my dream come true.

Also, no one could deny the fact that working hard is such an important issue for stepping to success, because in some extend, having patience is just able to making people stick to do something along basing on the reason given above. Basing on a investigation by a team lead by Professor King of Hong Kong University, 50 percent of Japanese, 67.6 percent of Chinese and the overwhelming 83.4 of Thai hold the point that patience and working hard could not be separated in common life, and the quality, patience is necessary for young to get their goal.

In a word, patience is such an excellent quality that it makes people stick to do with their working and working hard in common life. If anyone denies the fact, this essay is my answer.

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坏绿的眼睛 发表于 2012-9-20 15:56
0919作文：Patience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later.


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修改好了，谢谢你给我的评价，太中肯了

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alexcui 发表于 2012-9-20 19:56
修改好了，谢谢你给我的评价，太中肯了

谢谢你的修改，真的好认真。
这是我很久没有碰英语之后写的第一篇独立，毛病多多。。。
哈哈 即使以后不和你一组有机会也会去围观你的作文的，语言用的很是得心应手。

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不好意思 这么晚才改上...

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0920作文：Do you agree or disagree:
The most important investment of a company is to improve the skills of its employees.

What's the most important issue for a company's improving?  Even employees is the significail elements for a corporation, however, concerning a variety of factors effecting a company, as abilities of staffs, quality of productions, expanding plan and so on, I would not choose the first reason  and put this factor on the top place. I have several reasons will be presented blow.

First of all, Just as Chinese marketing professor Chen Anzhi says "quality of productions and services always is the most important." No one could denies the fact the running way for company is that consumers brought products or services and company benefits from this. The more substances a company sells out, the more bonuses the company got. What's more, these funds putting into market expanding, research new generations or more kinds of goods for improving. As we all known, no one would want get easy broken folk or any inferior goods. For example, Apple corporations received mounts of abjections during they put iphone2 into market. And iphone2 having fashion looks and top technology apps. But its antenna was detected some trouble matters, scitists even tell people that the running of antenna would be bad for healthy and the Antenna itself is easy broken. This case even leave inferences on next generation iphone3GS's market. So in my options, company should take attentions on quality mostly.

Also, making a reasonable marketing plan is even important. It means a company have to do mounts of research and development working for learning needs of market, basing on these working, company could make a suitable selling and future expanding plan. Last year, Nokia fallen into deep water. But they didn't make one mistakes on production or service. However global market changed every day, and youngers prefer fashion and interesting Apple rather than one stable and easy Nokia. This year, we could surprisingly find Nokia display their new Lumia920, a fashion and cute phone for us, and got really much satisfaction from youngers. So I believed a reasonable marketing plan is even important as other aspects.

Admittly, no matter marketing plan or services, they could not be separated from abilities of employees. But I do believed that these most important issues is not only related to abilities, but also thanks to staffs' working hard or even those flashed inspirations from them. So even though I believe it is necessary to improve staff's skill on different aspects, but don't considered put this issue on the first place.

Basing on these explanations above, I do not agree with the statements. If anyone doubts my view, this essay is my answer.

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done!

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TinaWang1 发表于 2012-9-21 16:08
done!

谢谢！确实是。。。拼写和时态频繁地错，一掐时间写就避免不了这个问题。。。
以后会注意检查，谢谢你那么耐心地改正各种错误

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