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The lecture from the professor refutes（这个词不错） three possible reasons caused （the）decline of yellow cedar trees , and says these three ways are all not responsed（responsible）, as discussed below.
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First of all, according to the passage, one way is to reestablish yellow cedar trees in the place they used to live is insect parasites （这句话是不是主干有问题？）. However, the professor disagrees with it by pointing that only the（不要） only the sick and damaged cedar are attacked by the insects,
that is, the reason is not suitble （suitable）for yellow cedar's decline absolutely.# [! x$ C5
  
; ]9 {7 O$ C: W5 W5 [+ c* c7 mSecondly, the writer suggests to
the decline of yellow cedar trees in northward because of clawing from bears (这句话是不是 主干不通的感觉). Whereas, the lecturer expresses his point that the decline is not be caused by  clawing from bears absolutely. And he metions （mentions）an example, in such an island including yellow trees has no bears, that is no clawing, faced (the?)decline too.
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2 m% F3 B6 H" ZFinally, about the climate, speakers advocates this fact(这词不错) that most kinds of trees dead for warm climate, then quotes yellow cedar trees could not be infulced(influenced) by the colder weather.

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The lecture from the professor refutes（这个词不错） three possible reasons caused （the）decline of yellow cedar trees , and says these three ways are all not responsed（responsible）, as discussed below.
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First of all, according to the passage, one way is to reestablish yellow cedar trees in the place they used to live is insect parasites （这句话是不是主干有问题？）. However, the professor disagrees with it by pointing that only the（不要） only the sick and damaged cedar are attacked by the insects,
that is, the reason is not suitble （suitable）for yellow cedar's decline absolutely.# [! x$ C5
  
Secondly, the writer suggests to
the decline of yellow cedar trees in northward because of clawing from bears (这句话是不是 主干不通的感觉). Whereas, the lecturer expresses his point that the decline is not be caused by  clawing from bears absolutely. And he metions （mentions）an example, in such an island including yellow trees has no bears, that is no clawing, faced (the?)decline too.

Finally, about the climate, speakers advocates this fact(这词不错) that most kinds of trees dead for warm climate, then quotes yellow cedar trees could not be infulced(influenced) by the colder weather.

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T22

独立
students are more influenced by theirteachers than by their friends.

Asked who will act the more important rolewith students between teachers and friends, the response in modern society which emphasis on education have aboilerplate answer under little seeming：the greatest contribution from teacher will be to keep its their have higher levelquality.But I do think friends would give more impact for students which ismade up of youngers mainly.

At first, as already told, students is such an group which is consist of youngers, and most teachers of their had thegeneration gap between them.This caused a dailyspectacle which most students do not choose their teacher to chat ,even thoughjust tell their story.Take my experience to aexample, I asked my close friend for suggestions about how to choose my major in various specialities offered by different departmentsof the college, even if I known that suggesstions from my dean would be moreprofessional.But who cares which is more practical , expacially I just was 17 at thattime.My close friend know my all,so she can help me to choose the major I desired mostly.But my dean hasseveral handreds of students, he known less about me.
As a result, the short of communicationg do not make teachers make much influenced on their students.

Also, friends always company with thestudents, so this group have enough room and time to effected these peoplearound them.According to a general investigationconducted by a recent research team led by Professor King of Social Departmentof Hong Kong, discovers that 44.8 percent of the Chinesestudents, 32.0 percent of the Thai students, and an overwhelming 61.7 percentof the Japanese students admitted that they would spendingtheir whole daytime in weekdays with friends.So I tend to hold this point , the more time persons  company with each other, the more influencemaked on each other.

Admitly,the teachers always be the mostrespected person for children,so when they were under-age the group of teachermay make some influended on them. However, at the sametime, they would spend more time on play with their playmates ,which can becalled friends as adults, the process played and chat with others madeform their quality and character. As children grows ,infulence grows.My littlecoasin sisters who is just five years old have learned asked for bonesform parents as her little boyfriend.

From what has been discussed above, I dothink that students effecting more by friends.If there is anyone out there whostill doubts if  little girls or boys can effected others,who still wonders if the gap between teachers and stuends , this essay is myanswer.

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21综合
两种燃料的斗争 = =
In listening materials, the man agree with the point of reading passage that ethanol fuel is not the good replacement for gasoline , but refutes three possible reasons  as discussed below.

First of all, according to the passage, using Ethanol fuel is not good at sloving global warming which caused by using gasoline. However, the professor disagrees with it by pointing that every plants would relase the CO2 during they are growing. So bedded the plants for production of Ethanol fuel just means remove source gas from this kind of plants to the others. The speakers mentions the fact that every kinds of plants could absorb CO2 and release O2 ,in fact, when CO2 is absorbed by the ocean, it reduces the amount of greenhouse warming. That is ,It would be helpful for reducing global warming.
  
Secondly, the writer points using plants which used feed animal for producing ethanol fuel would reduce the substantial source  of  food for animals. Whereas, the lecturer expresses his point that the great amounts of  consumed plant for production of Ethanol fuel called XXX, was not eaten by animals at all. That is consuming will not cause sources of food for animals disappears abusolutely.

Finally, about the price, speakers agree with the point given by writer that the price of ethanol fuel couldnot complete with goseline. But, professor advocates this fact that price of ethanol fuel would go down 40% in future and became valueble, because the needed increase more and more.

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TPO19 综合 4月1日
According to the reading passage,the new tactic of advertisement called "buzzing"is harmful  basing on three reasons.But the lecturer casts doubt on the reading.

Firstly, in the listening, Bill advocates the fact that many buzzers who used a conduct and really thought it is good,so the company hired them to tell the truth.
But the author thought buzzers who have motive for misleading because they are being paid.In fact,payment is not a question for misleading.

Secondly, the lecturer holds the opinion that consumers will ask many questions about this conduct.Then,consumers will not buy it,if they cannot give a safisfated answer.
On the other hand, the reading passage contends that consumers shuold believe everyone is buzzer,this is the second part the lecturer denies.

Lastly,compared the point of reading,the speakers asserts that buzzling will not reduce trustful society.If someone misleaded by buzzers trys a terrible conduct,he will spread this experience to more people.

In conclusion, the lecture runs counter to the reading passage from the three aspects presented above.

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19. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.



As we all known, a  well-informed person should be one who knows every things happend all around the world. Comparing with rechieved news from one type of  ways, it is better to get informations from differents ways. So from my perspective, i agree with the statement that in order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.

First, for reaching the aim that  to be well-informed, having quick access to information is neccessary. To be quick access tothe truth is the key to a real world, espacially in such an fast-paced society. I have a friend named Jolin who is working for aweekly magazine as a internship journalist  , and she in charge for collecting messages about economic crisis of chinese  fund Industry for making one series special report. Asked what a journalist will do to collect informations, the response in this fast-paced socity  have a boilerplate answer：check all the archives establishments which is such an nice chioce beacusethem always have all the newspapers and weekly magazines, then collect all the clip about an issue.However, in fact, economic crisis changed as soon as possible so that one internshinp journalist cannot  find enough clips.Due to this situation, Jolin with me came to liberary and spend all time of a shine afernoon to suffer every news posted before about economic crisis. We had done the  series special report. So, I do agree with the statement beacuse well-informed means knowlege and fast ,in my view.

What's more,the more tools of media  you can make used for youself , the more information you will gain. Every things changed all the time, so learn something by diffirents ways can make issue accuracy.Take an experience to an example,last summer a eqinping scandal happend in Chinese, Guo Meimei who is it girl showed her bags and marten coat in"weibo"-that is Chinese twitter,  some proof shows her father brought these articles of luxury by misappropriation of public funds of  the Red Cross. Public want learn the truth, but no one newspaper in location report the scandal. Due to the situation, persons was eager for truth seach news for out of provice, then every one known this thing and the evidence was confiemed true and effective.Thus, truth of the scandal comes out. But it could be impossible if everyone learn from it by one newspaper.

Adimitly,  it is essential to take a glance at the argument on both sides.Learn about these things happed all around world by the same media may be easier  for using in normal live.  But it is not helpful for our issue-be well-informed.

In a conclution, we should thanks to these diffierent ways which we can used to make ourselver well-informed and these ways such as internet  are never as handy in the past.

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TPO18综合
According to the reading passage,three ways to address the decline of Torreya,
But the lecturer casts doubt on the reading by arguing that if it does work.

Firstly, in the listening, the professor advocates the fact that this solution will not have surfaced unlikely.
Because the specific microclimate is different from surrounding,effecting by many factors as the globel climate.
Then, the author maintains that reestablish Torreya in the same location in which it thrived for thousands of years
and mentions scientists have been working to plant Torreya seeds in the coolest.Thus,the professor challenges the author’s point.
     
Secondly, the lecturer holds the opinion that moving to another place will damage the new systems of there.
According to him,take the black locos trees' experience to an example,their protection moving prompted many native plants' decline.
On the other hand, the reading passage contends that to move Torreya to an entirely diffenrent location.
Hence, this is the second part the lecturer denies.

Lastly, the professor asserts that the population of Torreya trees that can be kept in the centres will probably not be able to resist diseases.
Also, research centers would simply not have enough capacity to keep a large an diverse populationg of it.It refutes the point in the reading
that preserve Torreya in research centers.

In conclusion, the lecture runs counter to the reading passage from the three aspects presented above.

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谢谢你嗷！
我每次都是用TXT写  然后因为最近都是大半夜才写   就很不负责任地直接粘上来了
以后应该先在WORD里面检查一遍语法错误= =
58# 可他媽學點習吧

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