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74# 坏绿的眼睛

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【2012年4月21日 星期六  TPO 6独立写作】  
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.

Before starting discussion about if life nowadays is better or not, let take a glance at some aspects which is effecting our lifetime mostly. First of all, the peace time make sure every improvement could be possible. Then, higher level educated and others improve our living quantity of people.  Thus, I do believe we have a easier and more comfortable life than when my grandparents was young.

In my point of view, policy environment impacts mostly toward people living quantity in a time. When my grandpa was young, that is , while the war time every one of the main land Want to escaping the war and poor.   In fact, my old grandpa ever tell me her story which is about these days during her families moving to another province for avoiding the inter war. Within the process, my grandpa almost died for hungry for several time. So, this age of time seems be uncomfortable  absolutely . Compared with that age, nowadays , my country stopping war for several decades. No one could deny the fact that this kind of life which is could not moving to one place to another  for  prevent throwing into the war is more relaxing and comfortable.

Then, as everyone known, some amazing inventions was found and many technologies got higher level during the past days. For example, internet, PC, planting technologies and so on. Take my experience to an example, when I was 17, I entranced a high school and achieved the professional and training education within the law major.  But, when my grandpa was 17, he have to go to one small factory and working for little bones.

Final, the society at the passed days settled in a mass time. Maybe I can carry on telling something about my grandparents. Sixty years ago, nobody cares about if factories could have quantity to achieved children as worker and even if  themselves  is legal. Children went to factories instead of school, many little boys and girls don't know how to spell their names. It is turely poor!

Basing the discussion above, I do agree with life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. If anyone deny my view here, let watch any picture exhibition about the old time of  China ,or this essay is an answer ,too.

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前几天GTER好像出问题一直进不来  向你致以晚来的谢意
作文改的十分负责  提了很多中肯的建议 谢谢~！盼共同进步
76# 秋雨荆州

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今天的写了·~一会就给你改去~~  楼上那位仁兄和你 是我在GTER见过的最细致的人了。。。 77# idealibt

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TPO24  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
one of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life
is to encourage them to take a part-time job.


I believed no one could deny the fact that if anyone want to be a successful adult, he or she had better has talents on manage money and time, which is the most important substances in lifetime. In my point of view, the best way to motivate children learned them is encourage youngers to take a part-time job, so that their teenage children would get a deeper understanding about different aspects which including how to manage their after school's time and bones from Part-time job.

First, taking a part-time jobs means a teenagers have to making balance between assignments and job. It's pretty beneficial for them, because it would be the first chance for them to learning about how to manage their part time. Before, most of them have no idea about separating times for different duties. After, he or she would having a new realization about manage themselves. Take my friend's experience to an example, when Jack chooses to do a part-time job, which is a kind of poster in our society, he is digging into a video game named Wow. Thanks to the encouragement from his parents, taking up this job, he have to manage everything such as route and posting scholar in the early morning and putting them into practice. Sooner, he became such a boy who is so clever that made tasks forms and left enough time for everyone. I

Then, children could gain vital experience about how to spending their salary. First, these things gained easier are always no meaningful. From this understanding, take a part-time job and get limited payment on their own would make sure these children became adults who would not waste money. What's more important, it could be spending on something they really interested in; it is beneficial to make sure they could learn how to struggling at what valuable and necessary issues for living. Once, I can spend more than 200 dollars on a dress, but when I attend a educated activity organized by my high school, spend more than 10 hours every week on teaching project to these poor children with math and English and got just 50 dollars. The action before would not replay for me.

Final, it is duty for parents to motivate their children to be a nice adult who has responsibility to themselves. That is, parents should not avoid this work, even though encourage their sweets to taking part-time job, some of them may be hard, could making parents and teenagers both feel comfortable, but it still be reasonable and valuable ways.

In a conclusion, I agree with the statement absolutely basing discussion above.

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TPO23 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Before present my standard, I want to take an glance at these accidents of project and bad impacts. As everyone known, early years of development astronautically technology, several rockets failed in their launching ceremony. I could remember one rocket of U.S, named Columbia, busting after launched then it fail. All the peace men could not survive from this case, not to mention it wasted several million on working on 'Columbia '. Whereas, when I watch news on TV, I noticed that all about this case came from a little mistake, that is, one engineer summed records in wrong way. Maybe many accidents had passed away from us, but I could not forget these nightmares caused by some annoying little mistakes and they are could be avoided absolutely. So I do agree with the statement that everyone should to work slowly so that make sure everything is correct for avoiding unnecessary mission.

First of all, as I concerned as these science accidents, I believe no one risky is worth to taken up for checking out itself quickly. In my point of view, attending into some working, the first aim is making sure everything could run without mistakes, so that the project could be successful in the end. That is, in any works, a little mistake could cause huge mission and failure in the end. And no one could deny the fact that nobody can make sure he or she would not makes anything wrong. Due to this condition, I do believe it is unnecessary to improve speed but risk facing final failure and it is more important to work slowly and make sure everything running rightly.

Then, due to report in The Mirror Newspapers, the faster people cleared tasks, the more mistakes we made. Take my little brother's funny story to an example, he always want to clear all the math tasks as soon as possible for stepping out of house and stumbling with his little girlfriend. In fact, his parents made this rule for making sure he can doing his school working faster and higher quality. But compared with the ideal view, he make more simple mistakes within  his assignment because of he could not finished school working sooner and better with bearing eager  for walking with his sweet girl. In fact , due to one investigation for a team led by professor King of H.K.U, the overwhelmingly 70.8 of individuals would make more incorrect things with higher speed to clear working tasks.  In my mind, gain these fruits is more important to spearing how speed one individual got them.

Admittedly, speed is important for making sure doing tasks efficiency. But it is not worth anyone to gain with affording the pressure that making mistakes at some time. I'm so sturdy that believed everything running in its pace and route, people could making them more efficiency but risk blowing it.

In conclusion, I believed it is necessary work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.

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TPO22. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

More and more students attending classes for receiving professionaleducation and preparing for their career in the future. Due to this fact, I doagree with the statements that teachers should not make their social orpolitical views known to their students. In my point of view, it would make puttoo much time into these issues without straight connection to the aim thatpeople came into classroom. What ’s more important, it would affect students anddriving students view into the teachers' way, and I believed the views at thisdomain should been made on their own by their rules which would produce in along proceed.

First of all, teachers' explanation would cost too muchtime. As everyone known, the time of class is limited. Take my experience foran example, as my major is law science that means I have to touch with several hundredcases and law lines in classrooms. Almost every one of my teachers is carryingon teaching plan in hurry, because he or she have not enough time to introducethese cases on the textbooks, they could not have time to talk about somethingwithout my major and class. Even though teacher should make us to get a deeperunderstanding about this society, but I do believe the first and the foremosttask is making sure they could clear all the teaching tasks at the end of term,hence we students could receive the quality education and prepared for futurecareer.

Then, I don't think these personal views should be affectedby others. In fact, we should to judge everything by our value rules, and theserules would grow up during our lifetime. In my opinions, it is unreasonable todrive students view at social or political views by make them learned teachers'points. Especially, almost all of freshmen and many ordinary students were tooyoung to judge the news of social and political. And their teachers could notmake sure their ideas always be right. In this condition, it is necessary to motivatingstudents at these issues.

Final, admittedly, teachers have duty to introduce theseproblems and news has connections with their class to students. But I believe agood teacher should not try to make students known all parts of about theseissues such as their personal views. Teachers should to guide these young guys tofind the way which everything running on and find themselves.

In conclusion, teachers should not make their social orpolitical views known to students in the classroom.

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TPO22综合作文  燃料啊燃料

The lecture discusses three reasons of ethanol could be good placement of gasoline, which differs from the view and three reasons in the reading that it could not be good over gasoline.

The professor made the point that ethanol fuel burned and released CO2 is moving these releasing from planting into the atmosphere. Because plantings would conserved CO2,so they releasing them into atmosphere in fact kept the balance of nature.

Another important reason showed in the listening material is that produced ethanol fuel would not decrease the food of animal. Even though the fuel is made from plant. But the professor mentioned that it is reflected from these parts which could not be fed to animals. So the idea that presented in reading is reasonable.

Finally, even though it is true that the price of fuel is not competitive nowadays. But the professor stated that more and more people choose to buy them, in this condition, the price would drop later. As far as he concerned at the three dropping before, the price of ethanol fuel could drop 40 percent.

In general, the professor discussed the problem of ethanol fuel could be replacement of gasoline that the reading viewed in a contrary angle

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TPO 21. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I believe that the aim which we students entrancing colleges for receiving professional knowledge and experience. They are the most important things in college life for students because it could make us performance well in future career. But which way has access to them is better? In my opinions, communication is more important rather than studying hard in school because touching with people would let us get more experience and extending social net. That is, the ability to relate well to people is more beneficial for us. I will present my explanation.

First of all, almost every student could done their school working but not every younger own such an ability to make excellent conversation with others, that means if someone could communicated easily with others, he or she would gain more advantages because this person has more chance to get valuable experiences from others, and as far as I concerned, at the beginning of career, someone’s performance is up to his or her experience. Take an example, someone can done communicate easy and confortable with his or her boss, could have more chance to get suggestions rather than these guys who are always working out some academic problems within library.

Then, owning this kind of ability means this one could extend his or her social net easier and I believe that no one can deny the importance of social net, it could bring more clients and customers| for career men. I saw a famous story in a business textbook that is about the sale king of "Ford” named John Landed. He noticed that social ability and net is the most important things in running business when he is doing for his first big case. At that time, he tried to talking to with his and finding same interests between them. Then he found them both interesting in a infamous orient ancient book called 'Dao De Jing'. Hence, they communicated well and he gets the big case finally.

Finally, the ability to touching with others could make sure people expressing their good qualities and abilities. I mean, someone who really has talents on career should to express himself, but not waiting for his boss find his talents. I believed it is difficult and stupid in the fast-pace business society.

In conclusion, owning ability to relate well with others is beneficial for students rather than studying hard absolutely.

这次注意了论点，写成一边倒了，但是字数下来了，才四百。我赶脚怎么的都要500左右吧还需要锻炼

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20. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In my point of view, success is up to us. The fruit is that everyone could receiving by their experiences and knowledge at differ aspects within lifetime such as career and family life. Due to this point, I do believe that individual who always could try new things and take risks has more advantages to get access to success. I will present my explanation.

First of all, these individuals who touch with fresh things would gain more experience and deeper understanding about many issues in modern society. That means someone had transformed to abroad school could know more about different cultures. When he or she wants to starting career, it is beneficial for running business of overseas market and related to foreign clients well. I have a friend named Lisa, she transformed to the broad high school as a students of journalism major from thirteen years old. She attended different activities and known different people in college life. In fact, when we traveling abroad later, I found she could connection with American gays, French dancer and Japanese Youngers easier. Even though my major is law and I need to learn how to touch with people well. But trying fresh things as more as possible makes her has overwhelming advantages than me. I believe no one can deny the fact that it is beneficial for career absolutely.

Then, these guys try more new substances always become good at extending their social net. As we all known, the more fresh things you tired, the more people and substance newly you have to dealing with. From this view, doing more new working ensure people relating others and adjust the new environment well rather than people have not stepped out of their city. What's more important, they more chance to making friends with different people. That means these persons could receive more reasonable suggestion and help from a plenty of people.

Finally, people could gain more acknowledge. Try more newly things at differ domain, get more understanding. Even though maybe no one knows if them could be used in common life. But study is always well and it could be hampering for you. So why struggling about trying new things or not? Trying or not, this is not a question for youngers living in modern society.

In conclusion, if anyone denies these new things is not beneficial for us, denies these risks could only harm for our passion or whatever substance, this essay is my answer.