作文贴

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revised

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2012.2.28 独立 限时就悲剧了，555

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我呆会儿晚上给你改啊！

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唉，现在没时间写了！

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2.28日作文修改 不知道你看不看得清楚，我不能上传附件！
It’s very common for us to move from a place to a new one, because we need to continue our study or work in the strange environment. If you get a position-promotion, which you have pursued for many years, but you have to leave your teammates and go to a new company, would like to move? This choice may be very easy for some people who are more caring about their development, and difficult for those who pay more attention to their friends. For the latter, losing friends will be painful, and they will try to avoid that, and I also agree with them. My preparation will be detailed as follows.
First of all, if we move to a new place, we will lose the chance of communicating with our friends face to face, which will undoubtedly influence the relationship among us. Although there are many advanced means of chatting, they can’t be as effective as talking face to face. For example, it’s nearly impossible for someone to keep in touch with their friends all the time, what’s worse, if he is busy with his work, it is very unlikely for him to make a communication, which would create an understanding of from his friends.这句有点没表达清楚！ So moving to another place will decrease the emotion between you and your friends.
Second, if someone couldn’t receive his friends’ comfort in time after being depressed by something, he will feel helpless and lonely, which would make dramatically bad effect on him. Due to the long distance, friends don’t know what has happened and can’t provide any help in time. At this point, how would you feel? You must be very sad but find no one to pour out of your sympathetic suffering(这个用得很好！). So many people would choose not to leave their friends in case of such problems.
Last but not the least, it’s also difficult for us to make real friends if the culture gap is too huge. If two persons have different culture backgrounds, customs and such, how could we communicate with each other easily. For instance, when talking about the clothing, people from different countries have different viewpoints, and they can’t reach an agreement in this question, which I think will be an obstacle of the further conversing.
To sum up, from my point of view, I think it’s not a good thing for people to move to a new place because he will lose his friends.
理由比较充分，举例比较恰当！加油！

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改了

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又开工了，加油！！!

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2012315 独立

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作文已改，LZ也帮我看下我的哦~https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1345187-1-2.html