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GRE梦想之帆

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Against the backdrop of the economic globalization, communications of peoples from different states and regions have become more frequent than ever. At the same time, the emergence of most persistent social problems no longer due to one nation but the whole world.

Supporting the development of a global university which is designed to engage student in the process of fixing out those global issues might be one of the ways to handle the world social problems.

However, the feasibility of the construction and affections of such university is still need to be further deliberated.

What’s more, education is not the only role to play in the process of solving those problems. Strengthens from politics, society, economy and culture are all the sine qua non for the solution of these social problems.

In a nut shell, all nations need to endeavor to settle the world’s social problems in the common ground through the efforts of all fields.

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Against the backdrop of the economic globalization, communications of peoples from different states and regions have become more frequent than ever. Presidents of different states visit each other’s countries and attend all kinds of international summits to exchange ideas from different nations and governments about the global economy and social problems. Numerous entrepreneurs have been established and have combined resources, labors, management, technology and ventures of different states around the world. As a result, the emergence of most persistent social problems belongs to no longer one nation but the whole world. This can be figured out absolutely through the establishments of countless international associations like the United Nations, the World Trade Organization, the Asia Pacific Economic Cooperation, Association of Southeast Asian Nations and so on. Es decir Is to say, solving the global persistent social problems, such as the anti-terrorism, AIDS prevention and protection, global warming and world economy depression, need efforts from all nations world wide.

Supporting the development of a global university which is designed to engage student in the process of fixing out those global issues might be one of the ways to handle the world social problems. As a university is a kind of tremendous think tank with the well-educated sapiential scholars and young people in some instance, chances for it to provide the most effective solutions for those harsh social problems are good.

However, the feasibility of the construction and affections of such university is still need to be further deliberated. To begin with, there might be dozens of difficulties for the construction which might not be conquered, such as the barriers might emerge from different managements belonged to different nations; interests beyond common grounds may lead to some potential conflicts for students and faculties of different countries; without a state belonging to, how could leading principles be fixed. In addition, it is really a great challenge for newly graduates of this university to handle such huge issue in such complex situation. What’s more, education is not the only role playing in the process of solving those problems. Whether a university is powerful enough to take this responsibility is still need to debate and in the task of solving the world’s persistent social problems strengthens from politics, society, economy and culture are all the sine qua non for the solution of these social problems.

In a nut shell, all nations need to endeavor to settle the world’s social problems in the common ground through the efforts of all fields. To set up a specific university might help, but is undoubtedly not enough.
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Against the backdrop of the economic globalization, communications of people(people是集合名词,不用加S) from different states and regions have become more frequent than ever. (这句话感觉很中式)Presidents of different states visit each other’s countries and attend all kinds of international summits to exchange ideas from different nations and governments(有点重复啰嗦了) about the global economy and social problems. Numerous entrepreneurs(这个词 是企业家的意思,你想表达的该是大公司吧?enterprise) have been established and have combined resources, labors, management, technology and ventures of different states around the world. (这句话有点儿离题呢)As a result, the emergence of most persistent social problems belongs to no longer one nation but the whole world.(persistent 的意思是existing for a long or longer than usual time or continuously似乎不能用emergence来形容吧~) This can be figured out absolutely through the establishments of countless international associations like the United Nations, the World Trade Organization, the Asia Pacific Economic Cooperation, Association of Southeast Asian Nations and so on. Es decir is to say(这个说法我第一次见~查了一下才知道的呃~西班牙语么~), solving the global persistent social problems, such as the anti-terrorism, AIDS prevention and protection, global warming and world economy depression, need efforts from all nations world wide.(这个论据怎么好像有点勉强)

Supporting the development of a global university which is designed to engage student in the process of fixing out those global issues might be one of the ways to handle the world social problems. As a university is a kind of tremendous think tank with the well-educated sapiential scholars and young people in some instances, chances for it to provide the most effective solutions for those harsh social problems are good.

However, the feasibility of the construction and affections of such university is( is应该去掉) still need to be further deliberated. To begin with, there might be dozens of difficulties for the construction which might not be conquered, such as the barriers might emerge from different managements belonged(belonging?) to different nations; interests beyond common grounds may lead to some potential conflicts for students and faculties of different countries; without a state belonging to, (这个不通顺,要表达什么意思?)how could leading principles be fixed. In addition, it is really a great challenge for newly(new) graduates of this university to handle such huge issue in such complex situation. What’s more, education is not the only role playing(being played?) in the process of solving those problems. Whether a university is powerful enough to take this responsibility is still need to debate (needs debating 或者needs to be debated)and in the task of solving the world’s persistent social problems strengthens from politics, society, economy and culture are all the sine qua non(本文出现的第2个让我去寻求百度帮助的词组~) for the solution of these social problems. (这句话好纠结……)

In a nut shell, all nations need to endeavor to settle the world’s social problems in a common ground through the efforts of all fields. To set up a specific university might help, but is undoubtedly not enough.(in a nutshell 后面是跟总结自己的观点,这样写的话有点不够突出主题,论题应该强调是否建立这样一个大学,而不是社会性问题是否需要多国家的联手解决)

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