【DriftKing】总结经验教训，再战托福日志

奔跑蜗牛UID: 2579189

今天无意中又看到一个工科版版主 发牢骚了
就业不容易 找不到老婆 害怕失业 2等公民
这又何尝不是我担心的。。。
心情又到谷底了。。。
DriftKing 发表于 2009-9-30 21:26

1.国内就业就一定容易吗？？
2.找不到老婆，是不是不找，自身的问题多方面吧。比如自私自利不愿为他人着想，比如不愿意相信别人，找国外的怕嫌弃，找国内的爬f2。
  要相信幸福是给争取的人。你自己都放弃了你自己，还指望谁施舍你
3.失业就当跳槽，找到薪水更高的
4.公民 对这些没概念

DriftKingUID: 2664045

46# 奔跑蜗牛

是啊 到那都不容易
这个岁数的都是奋斗来着
恩
谢谢蜗牛

DriftKingUID: 2664045

我可不是自私自利不愿为他人着想，比如不愿意相信别人，找国外的怕嫌弃，找国内的爬f2。。。的

奔跑蜗牛UID: 2579189

坚持向前看，让腐朽的思想靠边站

发现DK有章子了~~~~

DriftKingUID: 2664045

49# 奔跑蜗牛
总是你顶我
你是大好人

DriftKingUID: 2664045

There are more and more people in Shanghai→The population of Shanghai is rapidly increasing
A is harmful to B→A brings harm to
A endangers B→ A poses a threat to B
A enables B to do sth→A makes it possible for B to do sth→B is now able to do sth thanks to/ due to/ because of A......


条件：unless, supposing, assuming, provided, on (the) condition that
让步：despite, in spite of, even if, even though, no matter..., however, whatever, notwithstanding
转折：nonetheless, nevertheless, whereas, while
转折：however, but, although, instead, rather than
因果：because, result, in result, from
递进：furthermore, too, also

一些连词和连接性副词
   如afterwards, later, then, firstly, secondly, next, besides, moreover, likewise, but, however, though, for, hence, accordingly等，(OG P30)
一些介词词组、非谓语动词
   如since then, for example / instance, in other words, on the other hand, for that reason, in addition, in that case, in brief, in conclusion, to sum up, what is more 等。

minqi_zhuUID: 2445029

楼主好用功啊，学习ing...

DriftKingUID: 2664045

TPO9 integrated writing

The reading section says that the Fuel-cell engines have some advantages over internal-combustion and would replace them, but the professor does not agree with this idea.

First, the lecturer says it is difficult to utilize this technology. For people must produce pure liquid state at first, and save it in a very cold atmosphere. It is very hard to fulfill. so the idea of the writer that fuel-cell engines utilize easily is wrong.

Secondly, the teacher recognizes that the fuel-cell can not solve the pollution problems.
It is correctly that fuel-cell's byproduct--water--have litte bad effect on the environment. However, the program to produce fuel-cell will harm the nature because it needs to consume oil and coal.

Finally, it is ecomical to use fuel-cell engine is not right. Because the teacher says it is really expensive to manufacture the fuel-cell engine. Such as the mental is really expensive which is necessary to produce it.

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

DK加油加油哦~

我现在主要是用的纸笔复习托福，就没有再把详细内容放在我的帖子里面。

有什么问题及时问我哈，我可以问我的老师，老师对我都超好的~

DriftKingUID: 2664045

54# taoyukun-daidai
非常感谢呆呆一致的支持和鼓励 好人有好报的
你一定能进康奈尔的

DriftKingUID: 2664045

52# minqi_zhu

真让人惭愧
一起努力吧

DriftKingUID: 2664045

10.14 it was easier to make a success in the past than people now

好囧的题目，写完以后照照镜子，感觉老了不少。。。

Some people always complain about the period they live in, because it make them less easily to success than the ancient people. Nonetheless, I do not agree with this statement, since it is not reasonable. In my opinion, whether it is easy or hard to make a success by people is depend on the situation they meet, if we must compare the folks nowadays with others in the past, I recognize that they have the same opportunity.



I want to concept the meaning of success at the very beginning, that is your dream coming true. If your goal is a normal one and not hard to realize, you have the same opportunity to achieve it with the olden people. For example, people who want to get the admission to study in the graduate school in US must have 3.0 of the minimum GPA at first and pass the TOEFL and GRE test... No matter the students in the past or nowadays, they have the same chance to study abroad.



However, if the dream is a huge one and hard to achieve, we really need to work hard and wait for the chance that god give us. Such as Jim want to be a hero like MacArthur, his brain is more smart and he also pay more attention on his soldiers than the American hero, but he can not get the accomplishment like MacArthur, because it is a peace world nowadays, that is to say the god do not give the same opportunity to him.People can also to be a great person from a normal one now. Like Markopolos who accuse the crime of Madoff in the economic crisis which is the chance god gives him has to be the hero of United States in the economic area. That is to say, good plan and hard work can not bring us good result, but a certain social environment is the most important so we also have the same opportunity to success as ancient people.



After all, we can not the most important factor which influence people to accomplish their goal is not the period lived in. No matter people in the past or nowadays they have the same opportunities to make their dream come true.

lupiscesUID: 2231942

Some people always complain about the period they live in, because it make them less easily to success（success是名词） than the ancient people. Nonetheless, I do not agree with this statement, since it is not reasonable. In my opinion, whether it is easy or hard to make a success by people is depend on the situation they meet, if we must compare the folks nowadays with others in the past, I recognize that they have the same opportunity.+ X7 }3 i9 }: L% g4 o
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I want to concept the meaning of success at the very beginning, that is your dream coming true. If your goal is a normal one and not hard to realize, you have the same opportunity to achieve it with the olden people. For example, people who want to get the admission to study in the graduate school in US must have 3.0 of the minimum GPA at first and pass the TOEFL and GRE test... No matter the students in the past or nowadays, they have the same chance to study abroad. （我觉得这个例子举得。。不是特别好）/ T( z! J' l2 w; f

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However, if the dream is a huge one and hard to achieve, we really need to work hard and wait for the chance that god give us.（这个感觉不地道，Chinglish，上天给的机会。不如就说luck，inspiration等等） Such as Jim want to be a hero like MacArthur, his brain is more smart and he also pay more attention on his soldiers than the American hero, but he can not get the accomplishment like MacArthur, because it is a peace world nowadays, that is to say the god do not give the same opportunity to him.People can also to be a great person from a normal one now. Like Markopolos who accuse the crime of Madoff in the economic crisis which is the chance god gives him has to be the hero of United States in the economic area. That is to say, good plan and hard work can not bring us good result, but a certain social environment is the most important so we also have the same opportunity to success as ancient people. （这一段用了3个god gives channce；你想说时势造英雄对吧？但是结尾突然说机会一样，没什么根据）)

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After all, we can not 。。。the most important factor which influence people to accomplish their goal is not the period lived in（这一句我没看太懂）. No matter people in the past or nowadays they have the same opportunities to make their dream come true.

有些语法错误（主谓一致什么的）我没标出来，我觉得考场上能检查还是检查一下吧
有些例子我觉得可以再想想，组织一下
语言上没什么大问题
一起加油！

smtyuanUID: 2608721

赞下 自己再过几天也要考了 没底啊···

DriftKingUID: 2664045

59# smtyuan

平常心 不要紧张
紧张只会失常
冷静有可能超常
你会成功的