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发表于 2012-2-29 20:37:22 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
这是我准备托福考试写的第一篇独立作文,希望能有高手提点,两个月之后就要考了,现在还在慢慢复习中。


题目:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It's better to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a good sense of humor.


People always debate whether to make friends with intelligentpeople or people who have a good sense of humor. To some extent, intelligentpeople can give you useful advice when you have difficulties. However, a friendshould share your happiness or console your sadness rather than that. Therefore,making friends with people who have a good sense of humor is a better choice.
First of all, it is easier to get along with people whohave a good sense of humor. As an old proverb says, smile is the best way tocommunicate with others. In fact, smile is always on the face of humorouspeople, with whom we will feel comfortable, and then joy and laughter will bealways among us. However, if you make friends with serious people you may feelnervous and anxious for that you really don’t want to talk with them. Thus, peoplewith a good sense of humor are more popular in making friends.
In addition to the preview point, you will become morehumorous and make more friends if you have friends with humorous sense. Forexample, if your friend likes to tell jokes, it can give you a good impression,and in your mind, your friend is a funny one. Next time when you use this skillto tell jokes to others, probably the same result will occur, and then you canmake new friends. Actually, funny ones always hope to make friends with funnyones.
In sum, it’s better to make friends with people who have agood sense of humor. We can get along with these people easily, and at the sametime, we can enjoy ourselves more. Moreover, you can learn the skill of tellingjokes from these friends which can help you make more friends.
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