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What makes a good roommate?



In many cases roommates are the people with whom you communicate oftener than other friends or teachers. Keeping healthy relationships between roommates is very crucial for one's growth in the college or university. Generally a good roommate should have a good habit, be considerate and be tolerant



Students are usually influenced by people near them whose behaviors and habits can have an effect on their decisions that what they will do or not do. The influences of living with a roommate who has a good habit or a bad one can be totally different. For instance, you resist the temptation to watch a movie when you see a roommate reading attentively. However, you might do the same if a roommate is also watching a movie; You are often motivated to do exercise by a roommate who loves sports or you become unwilling to get up early every day just because your roommates wake up late.



Additionally, it is important for a roommate to be considerate. Suppose you have a sick some day, it is your roommate who send you to the hospital and make up notes which you have missed. Or when you have other troubles, a considerate roommate can alleviate your anxiety. Although living far from home, you feel warm and comfortable.



Finally, a good roommate should also be tolerant. Since we live close with each other, some inconveniences are unavoidable that originated from people's different habits and characters. A more tolerant roommate often ignore those unpleasant trivial things and preserve your friendship fresh and long-lasting. We need to compromise so as to make the mutual living atmosphere more friendly and harmonious.



In a word, I believe that having a considerate and tolerant roommate with a good habit is most enjoyable. It allows students to get along with each other in a healthy environment and concentrate on what matters most.
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发表于 2009-7-15 15:29:57 |只看该作者
全文已经改过,写中文地方自己推敲。
In many cases, roommates might be the people with whom you communicate more frequently than other friends. To keep good relationship between one and one's roommates is very crucial(这个词不合适,太重了)to become mature in college. Generally speaking, a good roommate should have good habits, be considerate(这个词也感觉不对,但是没想到要换什么) and be patient.
Students are usually influenced by people surrounding them whose behavior and habits probably have effects on(这个词组大多指好的影响,不合适在这里用) their decisions about what they would do or not. The influence of living with a roommate who has good habits or bad ones could be totally different. For instance, you will resist the temptation to watch a movie if you notice that your roommate is reading attentively, (这里没有明显转折关系,说的都是他做什么你会跟着做,不用用However), while you might want to watch movie if he or she does so; You are likely motivated to do exercise by being with a roommate who loves sports; or you will become unwilling to get up early every day just because your roommates wake up late.
Furthermore, it is important for a roommate to be considerate( ). Supposing you are sick one day, it is your roommate who send you to the hospital and make up notes which you have missed. Or when you have other troubles, a considerate roommate can alleviate your anxiety. Although living far from home, you feel warm and comfortable.
Finally, a good roommate should also be patient. Since we live close to each other, some inconveniences are unavoidable that originated from people's different habits and characters. A more tolerant roommate often ignore those unpleasant trivial things and preserve your friendship fresh and long-lasting. We need to compromise so as to make the mutual living atmosphere more friendly and harmonious.
In other word, I believe that having a considerate ( ) and patient roommate with good habits is very enjoyable( 这个词。。。毕竟roommates是帮你成长的,用这个词不贴切并且不严肃). It allows students to get along with each other in a healthy(这个词一般在英语里面都不会用来形容出来不生病健康的以外的东西,不像中文) environment and concentrate on what matters most.

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