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发表于 2006-12-23 23:48:04 |显示全部楼层

认真作文互改小组(群号:34548345)

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1 f_ding
2 taro
3 wang984
4 wangchangxiao(组长)
5 LV
6 NORMAN
7 RUBEN

写在前面的话:
作文作文，多写多改才是硬道理，这就是我们建立小组的目的，希望大家在这里能怀着认真负责的态度，对待作文，对待自己的战友，对待自己.需要特别指出的是,我们小组只是一个互相帮助和分享信息经验的平台,实际的操作还需要靠自己去努力,作文组不是目的,考好G才是目的,废话少说,大家加油!!!

作业:

第一次作业:I176
The function of science is to reassure; the prupose of art is to upset. There lies the value of each.
12月26号晚10点前交

第二次作业
（必做）96"Although, critics who write about the arts tend to deny the existence of any objective standards for evaluating works of art, they have a responsibility to establish standards by which works of art can be judged."
（选作）85"Government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts."

第三次作业:
大家写了两次艺术类作业,有不少的问题有待提高,所以我不想急着往下走,留出1月1号,1月2号两天作为对艺术类的调整和总结.
然后我们开始ISSUE题库中题目数量最多的教育类的复习(共花7天)
130(必做),"How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."
154"Both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools. Education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators."(选做)

32,34,39,52,53,55,67,78,90,94,98,100,102的提纲(必做)
题号对应的题目可以看这里,不要写错了哦
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-139480-1-1.html
5号晚10点前交

第四次做业
51"Education will be truly effective only when it is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student."
(必做)
50"In order to improve the quality of instruction at the college and university level, all faculty should be required to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach."(选做)

106,128,132,134,158,191,201,213,214,222,223,228,230,232的提纲(必做)
9号晚10点前交

第五次作业
61"High-profile awards such as the Nobel Prize are actually damaging to society because they suggest that only a few people deserve such recognition."

68"People make the mistake of treating experts with suspicion and mistrust, no matter how valuable their contributions might be." （选做）
15号晚10点前交

第六次作业:
ARGUMENT 50
"As Earth was being formed out of the collision of space rocks, the heat from those collisions and from the increasing gravitational energy of the planet made the entire planet molten, even the surface. Any water present would have evaporated and gone off into space. As the planet approached its current size, however, its gravitation became strong enough to hold gases and water vapor around it as an atmosphere. Because comets are largely ice made up of frozen water and gases, a comet striking Earth then would have vaporized. The resulting water vapor would have been retained in the atmosphere, eventually falling as rain on the cooled and solidified surface of Earth. Therefore, the water in Earth's oceans must have originated from comets."
21号晚10点前交

以后开始都是一天I一天A咯,大家加油.(有建议赶快告诉我哦,Q和PM都行), ARGUMENT 打算写20篇,15篇基本题加5道难题.

第七次作业:
ISSUE 185"Scandals—whether in politics, academia, or other areas—can be useful. They focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could." (必做)
152"The only responsibility of corporate executives, provided they stay within the law, is to make as much money as possible for their companies."(选做)

ARGUMENT
147 关于WHIRLWIND游戏公司的.
ISSUE 23号晚10点前交,ARGUMENT 第二天(24号)晚10点前交.

第八次作业:
ISSUE
56"Governments should focus more on solving the immediate problems of today rather than trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future."(必做)
12"People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by any internal characteristic.(选做)

ARGUMENT
17 关于垃圾收集的.
ISSUE 25号10点前交,ARGUMENT26号晚10点前交.

第九次作：
ISSUE：
7、"The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records." （必做）
38"In the age of television, reading books is not as important as it once was. People can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books."（选做）
提纲：28，73，164。

ARGUMENT：
51（关于肌肉损伤的）
31号晚上10点前交。

第十次作业：
ISSUE：
47"Society does not place enough emphasis on the intellect—that is, on reasoning and other cognitive skills."（必做）

226"People are mistaken when they assume that the problems they confront are more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors. This illusion is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience."（选做）

ARGUMENT：
2（关于社区房价的）
2号晚上10点前交

第十一次作业:
208"The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people." (必做)
121"At various times in the geological past, many species have become extinct as a result of natural, rather than human, processes. Thus, there is no justification for society to make extraordinary efforts, especially at a great cost in money and jobs, to save endangered species."
ARGUMENT47
7号晚上10点前交

43"To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards." (必做)
160"The most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives. Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little."
ARGUMENT117
9号晚上10点前交

83"Government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state, even though these areas are often extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people."必做
ARGUMENT140
11号晚上10点前交

50"In order to improve the quality of instruction at the college and university level, all faculty should be required to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach."（102）必做
ARGUMENT38
13号晚上10点前交
然后休整两天.

大家对作业的布置有甚么意见或建议可以与我联系。

要求:把文章和完成此题目时有用的资料(文章,例子,名言...)同时放在自己的座位下.

以下是我对ISSUE 的总体时间安排,这样总共要50天左右,留出20天作为调整计划或是应付突发情况的缓冲时间,加起来有70天左右,我们可以全面的复习完ISSUE,然后将近20天留做冲刺用
(I题目的17大类)ISSUE分类
1，Attitude and methodology: 182 192 206 211 212 225 231
idealism V.S.pragmatism;present V.S. future: 99 148 186 210 236
process V.S. result 118 216(4天,3-4篇)
2，National and international:105 116 170 197 11(2天,1-2篇)
3，Law:174 178 180 17(2天,1-2篇)
4，Media : 29 60=103 74 109 161 215(2天,1-2篇)
5，Traditional maintenance V.S. innovative development : 26 27 84 147 173 188 217 227 238(2天,2-3篇)
6，Philosophy: 25 35 62 64 92 115 126 137 138 159 179 200 (3天,2-3篇)
fact: objectivity V.S. subjectivity: 127=157=181=239

7，Leader: 24 46 70 75 89 165(2天,2篇)

8，Arts: 85=101 96 131 143 144 176 190 218 243

9，History: 48 54 81 103=120 110=127(有歧义)=157 125 139 189 221(3天,2-3篇)
10，Culture: 49 63 72=10 104 111 207 6 13(2天,2-3篇)
11，Impact of technology 23 30 66 88 107 114 124 129 135 150 151 166 196 219 233 16(3天,2-3篇)
12，Individual study and technological advancement 28 86 183 205 226 14(5天,3-4篇)
EQ V.S.IQ 47 112
Imagination 73=164
Mode of study and research:tradition V.S. new technology: 38 155 237 7
Theory V.S. practice 57=117=204
Agreement V.S. diagreement: 122 209 1 18
13，Sotial phenomenon: 33 37=2 56=3 58 65 133 140 146 152 163 185 193 203 15 20(4天,3-4篇)
initiative V.S. physical environment; inner V.S. outer cause:22 91 93=162 136 156 12
Insularity of age 36=241 76 172 244
14，individual V.S.others, group and society:21 59 60=113 71 77=171=40 123=208 145 194 198 230=234 235 228=240 19
Individual V.S. group 42 95 141 175=199 (3天,2-3篇)
15，Scientific research,learning, subjects: 40=171 41 61 44=69 119 177 181 184 229(5天4篇)
Investment on science: 31≠44
Perspective and attitude of scientific authorities and experts: 68 87 142 168
Academic specialism V.S. generalism and intersection: 220 4 9
16，Education :39 51 53 55 =100 102 128 130 132 134 214 222 228 230 232 (7天4篇)
Skeptical:52 153=52 213
Education participant 32 50 154 223
Curriculum, over-all education ,employment consideration(education goal):34 67 78 80 90 94 98 106 158 191 211 5
17，Politics& government : 43 82=224 97 108 123=208 167= 8≈169 195(4天,3-4篇)
Ego principle, judgment V.S. mass inclination: 45=79=160=195=202, 145=160
Environment protection ：83 121 149 242

大家注意哦，下面的回复帖是用来放作业的,一个人有且仅有一个就够了哦,不要多哦,加油,呵呵.

[ 本帖最后由 wangchangxiao 于 2007-2-5 22:33 编辑 ]

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发表于 2006-12-24 04:41:01 |显示全部楼层

我可以加入吗？

我原来【南智小组 Norman】自从组长南智考完，走人后，就2个还在坚持！
现在的速度一直提不提来！想参加，可否？

第一次作业 Issue176(Science and Art): 是我第一次有想写“完全反对型的I”的冲动，因为功力有限，感觉很困难（语言和逻辑上），所以做了点让步，望大家多提点建议！
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=584935&page=1&extra=page%3D1#pid1769470989

明天出差，周5回来！有新的作业，请组长用短信通知： 13983971298 ，谢谢！！

第二次作业 Issue096(Critics and Critical standards):
http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=587398&page=1&extra=#pid1769497158

第三次作业 Issue154(co-operation on children's education between Parents, communities and professional educators )
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=590865&page=1&extra=page%3D1#pid1769533691

第四次作业 Issue050(Academic field & Professions relevant to the courses)
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=591536&page=1&extra=page%3D2#pid1769539353
Issue051(Individual-oriented Vs General)
http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=562617&page=1&extra=page%3D1#pid1769314536

第五次作业
第六次作业

第七次作业 Issue185(Are scandals useful?)---已修改，“第2版”在#10楼！
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=583665&page=1&extra=page%3D1#pid1769459185
(组长：最近工作较忙，更重要的是对I没有什么感觉了，所以在看“A”---今完我想了1小时的I61---Nobe Prizel，哎...争取明天补交5th作业)

有兴趣的朋友，可以讨论一下我的问题（不知道跑题没有！我的文章已经写好，就是敢乱发）！
http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/thread-586799-1-1.html

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