小组作业~Amanda_qinyy暧暧的作文帖

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对不起 对不起 请问怎样发链？

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74# amanda_qinyy

Nowadays, an increasing number of people tend to go abroad for travelling or higher education, and people in the world are more likely to get in touch with the foreigners through the international trade or even the msn? (Are you talking about the MSN 'messenger' software?). So that, Therefore the first thing people would like to do is to have a better understanding of the foreign country. However, as to me, I don't believe newspapers and magazines are the best way of learning about a foreign country, with for the following reasons.

To begin with, the information and resources in the newspapers and magazines are limited. Not only because of the pages of the published papers are too few to show us an all-rounded view of a foreign country, but also the world is changing in every second that the newspapers and magazines cannot update its their information as soon as the changes happen. Last semester, I wrote a paper about the England (If you're referring to the country, try to use 'the United Kingdom', or 'Britain'. Using 'England' to refer to 'United Kingdom' is still acceptable but outdated. Unless, of course, you're REALLY referring to 'England', which is the southern half of the big island.)'s culture and history, and the Internet and the school library are my helpful origins of all the information I got. Nobody will ask me why I didn't search for the information on the newspapers and magazines. (A library can and often do archive newspapers and magazines, so they are not mutually exclusive.) So that (You seem to be using this phrase in place of 'therefore'. 'So that' cannot lead a sentence.) it is clearly to see, the information in the newspapers and magazines cannot satisfy our great needs.

Secondly, the newspapers and magazines that introduce the foreign countries are not always available for to us. We know that the newspapers and magazines which are sold in the book stores are mainly about the current news. It may be hard for us to find a professional magazine introducing a foreign country, not to mention the newspapers. While, when we want to know about a country, it will be great if we come across a foreigner and can have a nice talk with them him. What's more, the most effective way for us to search for the a country's information is just browsing in its website or google what we want to know. (Not the most effective way..true, but 'not the most effective' might not necessarily be the same as 'not the best'. You seem to be talking about effectiveness, which is one aspect of quality, rather than an overall idea of quality in both paragraphs. What you write here is good enough per TOEFL standard, but in case you wish to make your arguments fully relevant, you'll need to fully address the question's issue about 'best' in each paragraph.)

To sum up, when we want to have a better understanding of a foreign country, the Internet, the library, and the foreign friends and so on so forth will be our perfect guides to that new country, which are far better than the narrowed-down newspapers and magazines. So that's why I don't support them as the best way to learn about a foreign country.

总结：

总体来说没有太大问题，语言和论述都不错，复数名词作主语前面不必要加the这个需要注意一下。其他的是一些小的语法错误，还有就是可以继续加强论述对问题的回溯。

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改作文
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77# 轴轴
在论坛开个新帖就行啦
要不你发我这里别人也不好给你回改

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3.30

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4.9
Universities should give every member of the team the same grade when the team finishes a project.

Nowadays, working in a team or a group instead of working alone is becoming increasing popular, especially in universities. However, whether or not every team member should be given the same grade when the team as a whole finishes a project has been a hot debate among students. Personally speaking, I would disagree with the point that every member get the same grade. I firmly believe that every member should be given the grade due to his own contribution to the team.

To begin with, free-riders, more or less, will come out because of the same grade. Free-rider is the team member who does not do the job but waiting to get the same grade as other diligent members. When we are free-riders, we may find it seems great to get a free grade without doing anything. But if we are the hard-working members except the free-riders, we may be angry and feel unfair to share the same grade with them. As the old saying goes, no sweat no sweet. The free-rides should not get the same grade, what's more, they should be seriously blamed.

In addition, the same grade to every team member would reduce the passion of those highly devoted members. Although the team is organized as a whole, every team member is doing a different job. I admit that the project cannot be finished without anyone's contribution no matter whose job is more important or whose seems easy to do, however, if everybody gets a different grade, all of them will be more enthusiastic and the working efficiency will probably be improved. Last summer, I joined in a group to make a survey, before we started, the professor told us that the team would be given a high grade if the job was perfectly finished, what's more, the member who contributed more would got a higher grade than others. As a result, everyone in the group did his or her best and we finished a week earlier before the deadline. Finally, we were highly praised by the teacher and each of us got a higher grade according to our job. Therefore, a different grade leads the team member doing a better job.

To sum up, a different grade due to every member's different job and contribution is not only more reasonable and fair, but also can greatly improve the working efficiency. So why not change the traditional pattern that giving the same grade to the team members into a different grade?

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加油~

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83# amanda_qinyy

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4.13
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students who keep their rooms neat and organized tend to be more successful than students who do not.

There is no doubt that everybody desires to be successful in his or her own life. While, some people, who ignore the simple things and only do the seemingly arduous tasks, will probably fail. Most of the outstanding persons always suggest the freshmen to improve their abilities from doing the simple things. Therefore, I firmly believe that students who keep their rooms neat and organized tend to be more successful than students who do not.

To begin with, keeping rooms neat and organized helps students form a good habit in life, which is quite beneficial for them in future. Although keeping the room neat and organized seems an easy job, I guess many students still cannot do it well all by themselves. When we clean our rooms and make everything in good order, we are developing a good habit that can benefit us in many aspects. For instance, when we write an article, we put the words,scentences, ideas that appear from our brain in a logical order, and then write them down with carefully consideration, so this process in writing is the same as the process in cleaning up rooms. Besides, if we keep everything in order, we are less likely to be forgetful. If everything in my home is organized, I won't forget to bring the important document to company next morning because I would have put them on the table and leave a note on my board writes "Don't forget the document!". Therefore, it is impossible for us to ignore the important things which more or less will determine our success.

In addition, keeping rooms neat and organized is a prerequisite when we do other challenging work. I have heard from a freshman in a company, who owns a high degree and is skillful at designing computer programs, his work is to do the typing and even cleaning. While, the reason is that he has once lost an important flash disk with a newly designed program in it because of his orderless work table. This mistake seems not worthy of mention, however, to most of the bosses, a simple thing shows the personality of a worker. Thus, the job that keeping rooms neat and organized seems an easy task, it will benefit us in the future. What's more, only we do the simple thing well, can we be able to organize the challenging tasks.

To sum up, we should not ignore the advantages that keeping the room tidy and organized brings us. For we are dreaming of being successful, why not try to keep our room tidy and organized from now on?

超时作文又一篇~

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by stefanie299

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4.13 修改 by speedzshaw

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4.17   09.12.5
Do you agree or disagree the following statement? Modern society has become more complex, so it is essential for the young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

It is a common scene that the upset students don't know how to face the increasingly competitive society and some of them turn to suicide instead. Indeed, in this complex society, people are suffering much more pressure than before. Thus, I think it is essential for the young people to have the ability to plan and organize, which can lead them in the correct way to success and bring them an amount of benefits.

To begin with, a reasonable life plan will instruct the young people directly to success all the time, especially when the get lost in their lives. Do we remember our dreams when we step into the university? Such as reading over all the books in the library, taking part in the social or professional practices as more as we can, studying hard to get the scholarship and so on so forth. However, no to mention our dreams that getting a nice job or salary after graduation, we can hardly achieve our dreams which are easy for us. Looking back to the current situations, some are addicted to the Internet, some are pasted on the beds and others may fall into to love. Thus, dreams are only dreams, if we don't take action. What we need is a detailed plan that helps our dreams come true. Imagine that, if a person follows his plan step by step and finishes everyday's work, it is less likely for him to distract his attention on the way to success.

In addition, we will benefit a lot from the ability to plan and organize. Lacking of work and social experience, a freshman in the complex society will easily get lost. Usually, a higher education or a nice payment is hard for them to choose. While, if we have the ability to plan and organize our life, we can make a objective choice with no hesitation. Set myself as an example. I do hope to have a better career as a lawyer, and I know that abundant knowledge is of great significance. Thus, I will go abroad to get a master degree which will cost so much money instead of finding a job now that can bring me some money. What's more, if we can plan our career, we will have a clear mind of what to do or what we should not do. For example, whether to quit the job with higher salary but we are not satisfied with, or whether to ask the boss for a promotion instead of waiting for it? All in all, the ability to plan and organize makes us consider things in a far-sight.

To sum up, the ability to plan and organize is just like a commander in our future life. It not only helps us move forward in a right way but also brings us power and energy on the way to success. So that I firmly believe young people should acquire this ability.

从那个论坛再粘过来，哎，不想抛弃这里~
一战的作文，纪念一下~

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4.22Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Daily homework has accompanied with students for quite a long time already. The students have complained about the troublesome homework as well at the same time. While, we have to admit that daily homework has brought a lot benefits to both students and teachers. Thus, I deem that it is necessary for teachers to assign homework to students every day.

To begin with, daily homework plays an important role in the learning process for students. When we do homework after a day's studying, we can identify which part of the lessons we have clearly understood. Usually, the faults on our homework show us the weakness of learning, and they also warn us to go over the books in order to understand all. What's more, when we come across with the problems that we couldn't solve ourselves, we may turn to teachers for help next day. Therefore, the obstacles on our learning process will be wiped out. Besides, daily homework is only a little quiz for a day, if we finish everyday quiz well, we will not be afraid of the final exams any more.

In addition, daily homework benefits teachers as well. Students always envy teachers who assign a lot of homework to them but the teachers themselves do not need to do. However, students fail to notice that a teacher assign homework to almost 50 students in a class, and he or she has to mark 50 pieces of homework alone next day. It seems that daily homework is a heavy burden to teachers but not the students. In fact, this heavy burden brings valuable information to teachers. From students' homework, teachers come to understand whether students grasp the key points of the lessons and which part omitted to analyze deeply. And form the questions that students asked, teachers may have a new idea in changing the teaching method. My teacher Mr. Li is welcomed by the whole class because he lead both the students and himself forward through interacting in homework process.

To sum up, though daily homework is a seemingly pressure to both students and teachers, its benefits far more outweigh the burdens on them. Thus, students should perfectly finish it instead of countless compliments.

好几天不写作文，特选了个简单的题目，结果，不仅超时，还没什么质量~纠结死我。。。
请狠批吧！！！