作文求拍

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第一次写...第一篇写出来了全文。求拍！
自己觉得词汇少得可怜，不知道背来的单词什么时候才能会用...囧
拜谢~希望版上大牛们能指出问题！
看的是许轶的那本书，打算先写例文评论那一部分的题目，也是为了能多对比rating 6的文章。
但是觉得如果能得到牛人针对我的指点应该会进步得更快。不胜感激！

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Teachers should make learning enjoyable and fun for their students. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

I strongly agree with that teachers should make learning enjoyable and fun for their students. Generally speaking, people who prefer an interesting learning process believe interest, which can be brought about by enjoyable learning, is the best teacher. However, it is admitted that others deem that it will cost too much energy for teachers to create a fun learning process. As a result, they pay less attention on teaching, which brings negative effect.

Considering the advantages and disadvantages, I prefer an enjoyable learning process for several reasons.

First and foremost, while the characteristics are being considered, a fun learning process is required in most cases. Let us do some calculation: if one go to elementary school at 6, graduate from college at 22, he/she will spend 12 years in elementary school and middle school while just 4 year in college. That is, in three quarters of his/her education, he/she is a child. Seldom does a child know the importance of learning. But what will always be attractive to a child? Game! Therefore, if a teacher makes learning as enjoyable as those games were, students will spend more time and energy on studying.

Another advantage brought by interesting learning process is that students will learn by themselves if they find fun from learning, just as the saying goes:” Interest is the best teacher.” Obviously, in most cases, one will search for more information about something he/she find appealing. In other words, interest initiates curiosity, which makes one active to learn, think, and attempt. This process release those who are afraid that teachers pay too much attention on making learning enjoyable since a fun process will induce students to learn by themselves. In college, teachers often do not need to make learning interesting, but it does not affect how much attention will be put on studying. The main reason is that college students who have choose their major have interest and curiosity about their major, which can inspire them enough.

Finally, considering teachers themselves, making learning enjoyable is adorable. Generally speaking, most of teachers are professional enough to teach text knowledge, especially elementary school and middle school teachers. After several years teaching, it is doubtful that they always enjoy teaching the same thing all the time. Consequently, making learning enjoyable is making their job enjoyable to some extent. Meanwhile, it can improve the relationship between teachers and students because they try to make class more active together.

After above discussion, we may see that the benefits of making learning enjoyable overcome the harm of it. Thus I believe teachers should make more effort to make learning enjoyable and fun.