【口语小组】mrholiday作业贴（10.26）

zyd8100UID：3475286

一般我觉得讲个小故事会内容充实一点，结构也比单纯地说道理要更容易组织一点

Angela_YangUID：3496934

1,lz的音质可能有点小问题，听着有点嘈杂，语速如果可以快点就更好像好
2,语音语速非常好，内容也不错，非常有条理，学习了，其实楼主的口语很不错，由于我是第一次做也不敢乱评论，所以不好意思，我会慢慢学习跟上你们的节奏的
谢谢

havrlUID：2814564

T1;
1.finish ?还是另外一个词，
2.例子没有体现出那个leave much time to solve the problems that robots can not solve. 不知道是我没听懂还是什么，专业名词有吧。
T2
1.VERY 用得稍多，pretty 也不错。
2.最后morning 什么的?没听懂。

syda00UID：3474615

mrholiday 发表于 2014-2-26 20:17
第一题例子是不太好，我是想说老师对我帮助很大，他的学术精神影响了我………………有点扯远了。。我会再 ...

(⊙o⊙)…原来是he呀。。我听的以为是she呢。。我听力不太好的说。。嘿嘿

hj1313UID：3476105

hi~方便的话请把考试时间在帖子标题里标一下？谢谢~

SYNCIAUID：3130718

2.28
task--tasks.
Play some movies--watch movies.
Use two "so". ---- so.... Therefore...
Your sole reason is about your major. Seems not so convincing.If you use only one reason to support your view, please make your example more vivid.   

less effective---less effectively
can't stand talking and talking (little confused)
Add a "But" to contrast the first choice and second.
Say more about the benefits about self-study.

SYNCIAUID：3130718

NO.1
1.Not fluent.
2. Unnecessary repetition.
3."drive too much"?

You almost lose the clear clue to follow and your example is actually confusing. So, I recommend you to try writing something down and memerize your points before  recording.


NO.2

The content is OK. But personally, i think the example is too long, you can just use the not-concentrated part to illustrate your point and then add another reason. Your view will be better supported then.

SYNCIAUID：3130718

mrholiday 发表于 2014-3-2 22:38
多谢大神批改！

2.28号的那个，我觉得我的major就已经挺好的了啊，至少我不用再用现学一些东西才能教他 ...

For 2.28 NO.1, If you insist, then use one or two specific examples， such as teach them how to use e-mail, be specific. Dig in.

For 3.1 NO.2, it's okay if you want to contrast "before and after", but try not to repeat and to use some new alternatives.  

huuugh1221UID：3504501

第一次互改，有说的不对的地方lz包容啊~

3.3
task1：我觉得楼主时间掌握的很好，大半时间都用来详述原因，逻辑和条理都很清楚，有一点吹毛求疵的地方是in wartime 和in modern time 好像没有并列的关系，可以考虑把后者改为in peacetime

task2:楼主说得好快，两个原因都有时间阐述~膜拜一下先~有一个问题，是你的第二个原因我没太明白，为什么big and new place就distraction跟noisy呢？好像没有太直接的联系？或者是那个“like..”我没听清楚造成的。

楼主说得很不错，讲得很快内容又丰富，逻辑也清楚，要向你学习~