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SammyfeishiUID: 151939

120 decisions can be made quickly, or they can be made after careful thought, do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The decisions that people make quickly are always wrong.

I fundamentally disagree with the assertion that decisions which people make quickly are always wrong. Whether decisions are right or wrong depends on several factors. The judgment that quick decisions must be wrong is arbitrary. We should recognize that sometimes there is a desire for quick decisions.

Admittedly, some decisions which are made at a high speed are inaccurate. Without careful consideration of the key to success, it is very likely that a whole issue would suffer from loss. Take purchasing stocks for example, large amounts of capitals are merged into the sea just due to lack of careful analysis. People only expect to earn money as much as possible, therefore, they neglect some important elements that would influence revenues, like the financial conditions of companies, and national policies related to the fields of stocks. In a word, we must pay attention to careful thought before making decisions.

However, a right decision rests with several other factors, except for the speed. The sharp insight, high intelligence and plentiful experiences can all contribute to accurate decisions. Thus even considered carefully, decisions still have the possibility to fail, without giving any idea of elements mentioned above. What is more, sometimes, a quick decision is the necessity of success. It is easy to tell that generals must make decisions rapidly in battles. If not, the outcome would be disastrous-deaths of thousands of soldiers and the loss of millions of dollars. In that case, determining whether troops proceed or retreat would be a significant issue for the whole war.

In conclusion, being fast or being careful is not the mere standard for the validity of decisions. A good decision also depends on other impacts. Moreover, quick decisions sometimes, are the key point to success.

掐时间写作文 确实感觉不一样 我发现自己在规定时间内只能写出四段 想用三段来论述时间不够用 而且字书也少了 连三百字都不到55555555

mingi 你也吧你的法上来嘛 大家都夸你写得好 让我也拜读一下

lxhstcUID: 171155

不看你们回后悔的哦
No.130
呵呵,我的新作,大家帮忙看看

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? University should give the same amount of money to their students’ sport activities as they give to their university libraries. Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

There is much debate over whether universities should give the same importance to their students’ sports activities and their university libraries. Different people with different experience may have dissimilar attitude, as far as I am considered, the two events both play an important role in enriching students’ study and spare life. Thus, we should devote the same resource, such as the money to develop those programs.

On one hand, the most significant advantage of supporting students’ sport activities is that it can improve our students’ body condition both in physical and mental aspects. After all, as the saying goes: the body is the basis of doing everything. Under the huge press of universities study task, I cannot image how a student in a weak healthy condition can get significant achievement,

On the other hand, the library also do plenty of benefit to students, it not only provides an opportunity to students to expand their acknowledge scope but also can be used as an entertainment. How wonderful is that reading an interesting book with a cup of coffee under the sunshine? An addition profit of the library is that it can give students an academic atmosphere that can protect students from the bad impact from the outside.

Thus, for the different essence of the two events to the education, both of them can bring about benefit that the other cannot. Therefore, the development of both is indispensable except more concrete information that can demonstrate one of them take precedence over the other can be provided.

风灵UID: 157795

我也贴一篇，恳请指点。

Topic 180  Movies are popular all over the world. Explain why movies are so popular. Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

Why movies become so popular throughout the world in our time? As far as I’m concerned, there are several major reasons for this phenomenon.

For one thing, the movie is a wonderful form of entertainment for most people, no matter they are young or old. Children enjoy cartoons such as “ The Lion King”, while girls are deeply moved by romantic stories, for example, “Titanic”. The young may be involved in a action movie like “The Matrix”, and the old are still love the classical film such as “Gone With The Wind”. Movies create fictional lives full of passion, excitement and love, which we unlikely experience in our own. We can easily escape the stress and pressure of ordinary life – at any rate of short periods – just by spending one or two hours in a cinema.

Another reason is that people can learn a lot from movies. For instance, we are able to acquire much knowledge of events hundreds of years ago through a historical movie of our country. Additionally, the movie is the bridge of different cultures. Films reveal a lot of information of the country where they were made, such as its natural scenery, history, custom, social problems and language. For example, we can improve listening and speaking skills of English by watching movies in English.

Last but not the least, the popularity of movies owns much to its cheap price. This is especially true in the developing countries and rural areas, where people are unable to afford Television Sets or DVDs. To have a good time in cinema, people only need to buy a ticket, which usually costs less than a meal.

In summary, movies are popular mainly because of the exciting stories they tell, the knowledge they provide and the cheap price.

eveningboatUID: 157918

从笑来应急作文选的，其实写的第一篇的说~~ 汗-_-|

还好写过G作文，思路不成问题，不过好像用笔写比较困难，先谢过大家了
42. What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

The success of one person not only owing to one or two important skills, but the basic and most important skill that one should learn is to persuade or convince others and ourselves.

When we were children, we should persuade our parents to buy some gifts which we wanted; when we studied at school, we should convince other students in order to win the election. Also, through persuading or convincing others, we could make a lot of friends, and some of them may come to be our loyal friends, who would be a great wealth for our further developments.

When we start to work, the problems that one person can solve are limited, because one person’s ability is limited. When we meet a big project or a good but hard to achieved opportunity, we should persuade and convince others to help us. It is the cooperation and convincing can create huge energy which could solve any tough problem. Otherwise, without persuading and convincing others, we could do few things by ourselves.

However, one should not only to persuade or convince others, because we should also be convinced by ourselves. When we do some tough work, to reach a high goal, which will take a long time and occupy most of our energy, it would be very hard to keep up with it, especially when there is no light for the project, even very slight. In such condition, we actually need to persuade ourselves to stick to it and convince ourselves that we would succeed at last.

All in all, though it is not all, but we must learn to persuade or convince others and ourselves, because it is the most important skill to be successful.

雪花菲儿UID: 167661

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? University should give the same amount of money to their students’ sport activities as they give to their university libraries. Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

There is much debate over whether universities should give the same importance to their students’ sports activities and (as to) their university libraries. Different people with different experience may have dissimilar attitude, as far as I am considered, the two events both play an important role in enriching students’ study and spare life. Thus, we should devote the same resource, such as the money to develop those programs.

On one hand, the most significant advantage of supporting students’ sport activities is that it can improve our students’ body condition both in physical and mental aspects. After all, as the saying goes: the body is the basis of doing everything. Under the huge press(pression) of universities study task, I cannot image(imagine) how a student in a weak healthy condition can get significant achievement,

On the other hand, the library also do plenty of benefit to students, (.) it(It) not only provides an opportunity to students to expand their acknowledge(knowledge) scope but also can be used as an entertainment. How wonderful is that reading an interesting book with a cup of coffee under the sunshine? An addition profit of the library is that it can give students an academic atmosphere that can protect students from the bad impact from the outside.(感觉论证不太充分)

Thus, for the different essence of the two events to the education, both of them can bring about benefit that the other cannot. Therefore, the development of both is indispensable except more concrete information that can demonstrate one of them take precedence over the other can be provided.(?语言有点中式化)
条理清晰,结构合理,用词准确，加油

mengliwangUID: 137853

Do you ever devote yourself to an interesting job like making a sculpture in a whole vacation? Do you ever feel reluctant from a short vacation? If you never experienced them, your life is an adequate one. As far as I am concerned, I prefer to arrange a long period of vacation rather than a short one in the school year.

The first and formost reason is that we can cultivate an interest in a long-period vacation. It is no doubt that the cultivating of interests is not a one or two day work. Suppose one student who is enjoying a short-period vacation. He is impressed by the forth symptom, the famous piano piece of Beethoven, thus certainly drive him to play the piece himself. And then he starts to practice the fundamental finger skill. We can imagine that the vacation is over when he just makes a little progress. This will not happen in a student in a long period vacation. For him, a detailed plan is devised. And he can patiently practice step by step until considerable progress he has made. When the vacation end, all of us are fascinated to find that he already can play some simple pieces. The example clearly point out the advantage of long-period vacation and the disadvantage of the other.

Long-period vacation, on the other hand, has an impressing effect on building confidence. We still take the two students we just said as an example. When another vacation reached, they want to continue their practice. The first must be disappointed by the fact that he has to practice from zero since only a poor progress he has obtained. What a big shock is! What had happened to the other? He was confident confided by his super progress and has kept on his practice during the study. In another long vacation, he surely continue and even harder than before to practice. Ten years later, the first student has forgotten what the piano is, while the latter has become a famous piano player. What a big difference is!

Admittedly, short-period vacation has its advantage. Students in it can cover more fields than those in long-period one. But glancing in a long range, we certainly make the conclusion that the advantage of long-period vacation outweighs that of short-period vacation.

loreleiUID: 156467

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer
狂艰难的一篇，希望大家多拍拍！
Clothes vary in materials, designs as well as styles. Different clothes tend to build different images of the wearer. Correspondingly, wearers mind their behaviors to fit the clothes they wear. I do agree that, in general, clothes have subtle impacts on the wearer and they behave differently while wearing different clothe.

As people dress according to various situations, different types of clothes seem to rule wearers’ behaviors. For example, in formal situations, a man in a clean suit and polished shoes reveals more his gentleness and maturity. The same one, however, dressed in a leisure sports T-shirts and sneaker is comport to be more outgoing and active.

Moreover, apparels help others to build all sorts of impressions on the person. Generally speaking, we are more likely to appreciate people with fine clothes than ones that are awkwardly dressed. A more specific example is how our first impressions are built according to the color of the clothes when watching a far off figure. Warm colors usually present us a friendly image while cold color indicates distances. Matching colors give us pleasant feelings and awkward colors lead us to doubt about the dresser’s taste.

No only does apparels help to determine people’s first impressions upon meeting, they also define their wearers’ personality. The style of the clothes a person wear gives signs about what type of person he or she is. I can think of no better illustration of the idea than a man wearing a Louis Vuitton suit. This sexy, luxurious style of this brand depicts a charming, Italian man like image of the wearer.

In conclusion, even though the effect of the clothes on a person may not be so dramatic as to be recognized in an instant, I insist on agreeing that clothes influence the way people behave, for they are the best advertisement for ones image and personality.

loreleiUID: 156467

TO Sammyfeishi, 一直在拜读你写的作文，写的真好。限时能写到这个水平真是让人羡慕呀。论证清晰，语言流畅，pfpf
不好意思，由我班门弄斧一下 :)
No.137
120 decisions can be made quickly, or they can be made after careful thought, do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The decisions that people make quickly are always wrong.

I fundamentally disagree with the assertion that decisions which people make quickly are always wrong. Whether decisions are right or wrong depends on several factors. The judgment that quick decisions must be wrong is arbitrary. We should recognize that sometimes there is a desire for quick decisions.

Admittedly, some decisions which are made at a high speed are inaccurate. Without careful consideration of the key to success, it is very likely that a whole issue would suffer from loss. Take purchasing stocks for example, large amounts of capitals are merged into the sea(这个表达，没什么把握，metaphor么？) just due to lack of careful analysis. People only expect to earn money as much as possible, therefore, they neglect some important elements that would influence revenues, like the financial conditions of companies, and national policies related to the fields of stocks. In a word, we must pay attention to careful thought before making decisions.

However, a right decision rests with several other factors, except for the speed. The sharp insight, high intelligence and plentiful experiences can all contribute to accurate decisions. Thus even considered carefully, decisions still have the possibility to fail, without giving any idea of elements mentioned above（这句话不知道要表达什么意思，可以只用前半句即可，这样句子的长短搭配也要好些）. What is more, sometimes, a quick decision is the necessity of success. （It is easy to tell that 大概是什么意思，有些redundant ）generals must make decisions rapidly in battles. If not, the outcome would be disastrous-deaths of thousands of soldiers and the loss of millions of dollars. In that case, determining whether troops proceed or retreat would be a significant issue for the whole war.
In conclusion, being fast or being careful is not the mere standard for the validity of decisions. A good decision also depends on other impacts. Moreover, quick decisions sometimes, are the key point to success.
向你学习开头与结尾，每一次都很好。
如有可能，能帮我也改一下么，多谢了

eternalUID: 160693

Do you agree or disagree the follwing statement?People behave different when they wear differenr clothes ? Do you agree that different clothes influnce he way people behave? Use specifiv example to support your answer.


  I do agree that people behave different when they wears different clothes .Just observe the people around us, I can see many funny coincides that they do exactly the same type of things when they have the same coat or dress. But I think it can't prove that different clothes influence the way people behave.
  Most people today have distinct clothes in the different place or at different time because those clothes have been one of the tools or functions to express yourself and communicate with others .I’ll take myself as an example. Every day, I go to class with my ordinary coat and normal jeans I'll choose to wear sports clothes and shoes for running  in my basketball class. Once in a while, you could also see me in a brilliant dress and a modern shoes in my friends' birthday. we always wear certain clothes that fit the work we are going to do .Both working and entertainment  have the clothes belonging to each of them. So it is totally right that people behave different when they wear different clothes.

  And there is another phenomenon we shouldn't ignore that the colors you are in color influence your emotion. we always say that red makes you passionate ,blue brings blue ,while means clean and you'll feel horrible to see black. Scientists have concluded it by experiment. They divided people that are almost the same into several groups and dress them in different colors. After a few hours, you'll find they do change .

  We can conclude people in different color act differently. And it is normal for us to wear different doing different things. But the most important thing is that it is ourselves that decide what to wear and what to do , but not the clothes. So it is still not sensible to say that different clothes influence the way we behave.


就是那篇关于衣服是否影响人的文章 我写完后看了新东方的范文 发现观点和他不一样  不知道这样算不算自圆其说 第一次写 超时3分 字数好像还是有点少 现在到这时候了 同学说新东方的老师说现在的作文提高可能性已经不大  像我这样的文章 能有几分呢？甚是担心

ilovemouseUID: 174190

Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or disagree? Use
specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

   Teachers are gardeners cultivating and nourishing the students. It goes without saying that teachers are essential and critical for the society. But in recent years, there is debate over whether school should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Some people agree with it. Others argue that it is ridiculous. As far as I am concerned, I believe that there are advantages for evaluation to the teachers by their students.

   To begin with, evaluation will stimulate dramatically the improvement of teachers, and enable them to have an idea of what students need. Although there maybe compliments, suggestions, or even criticisms, with all these teachers can make progress, aware of what they are good at and what they are poor at. Obviously, in turn, it will benefit their students. Take my mother as a good example. My mother, a senior high-school teacher, as she told me, likes the opinions from all the students. She is eager to know the result of her classes and the demand of the students. She said,” thought sometimes I feel pressed, evaluation is a catalyst for my better work.”

   In addition, student, the direct counterpart, not anyone else, like collegues, directors, or the principal, can only make evaluation, estimation for teacher’s work. How can they score the teachers without exactly knowing their performance. Teaching is also a job. To some extent, students are the people they serve. Due to the importance of the work, the quality becomes very vital. Have you ever been taught by some irresponsible teachers? Have you even been treated like useless one only because of bad grades? Have you ever been kicked out of the classroom as penalty? I have such unpleasant experiences. It did affect greatly my study or even cause some incurable wounds in spirit.

   In conclusion, I believe that the evaluation of the teacher by their students is significant, not only because it will push the development of teachers, but also because students are the only right persons to do this. And there is no doubt that both students and teachers will benefit from it.

SammyfeishiUID: 151939

Clothes vary in materials, designs as well as styles. Different clothes tend to build different images of the wearer. Correspondingly, wearers mind their behaviors to fit the clothes they wear. I do agree that, in general, clothes have subtle impacts on subtle 表示微妙的关系 这里涌我觉得观点就不强了 用significant profound 代替都可以 the wearer and they behave differently while wearing different clothes. Wearer 时表示穿衣服的人吗 我觉得是人都要穿衣服 直接用people 就好

As people dress according to various situations, different types of clothes seem to rule wearers’ behaviors. For example, in formal situations, a man in a clean suit and polished shoes reveals more his gentleness and maturity. The same one, however, dressed in a leisure sports T-shirts and sneaker 我觉得衣服应该加上量词is comport to  是什么意思我不懂be more outgoing and active.

Moreover, apparels help others to build all sorts of impressions on the person. Generally speaking, we are more likely to appreciate people with fine clothes than ones that are awkwardly dressed. A more specific example is how our first impressions are built according to the color of the clothes when watching 这里应该加上we are 从句主语和主句不一致时从句主语不能省略 a far off figure. Warm colors usually present us a friendly image while cold color indicates distances. Matching colors give us pleasant feelings and awkward colors lead us to doubt about the dresser’s taste.

No 是not 吧 only does apparels help to determine people’s first impressions upon meeting, they also define their wearers’ personality. The style of the clothes a person wear gives signs about what type of person he or she is. I can think of no better illustration of the idea than  我喜欢这种举例的方式a man wearing a Louis Vuitton suit. This sexy, luxurious style of this brand depicts a charming, Italian man like image of the wearer.

In conclusion, even though the effect of the clothes on a person may not be so dramatic as to be recognized in an instant, I insist on agreeing that clothes influence the way people behave, for they are the best advertisement加上s for ones image and personality.
总的说来 思路还是听清晰的 就是很多小细节应该注意 有时表达有些不规范 eg This sexy, luxurious style of this brand depicts a charming, Italian man like image of the wearer.

也谢谢你帮我该作文啊it is easy to tell 是很容易看到也是举例的一种方法 作文写得好不好我也不知道 我对自己的作文水平其实听没信心的 原来考过一次 分很低 有考了g 结果aw还是很低 所以我都不知道什么养的文章ets才喜欢 这次利用暑假的时间静下心来写了几篇 有背了几篇新概念 应该有些效果吧 所以看到大家说我写得还说的过去  我感到听欣慰的 也让我有信心写下去 一起努力吧 坚持到最后 才会笑得最美：）

cheerfulmaizeUID: 166778

Some famous atheletes and entertainers earn millions of dollars every year.Do you think these people deserve such high salaries?Use specific reasons and examples to support your opioin.

At the first glance, some famous atheletes and entertainment earing millions of dollars per year is unreasonable.However, we only notic the superficial phenomena.Actually i think they deserve such high salaries.

Only a few top atheletes and entertainers can reach such high salaries as millions of dollars per year.To be an athelete, his income in ordinary time is not very high, perhaps only slightly higher than average incoming level,for they carry on intensive training dangerous sometime.Only when they attend some national or international games and win the medals can they are awarded to high bonuses, and the bonuses varies according to their progresses in the game.In a lifetime of an athelete, the opportunies and possiblities to be champion are at most several times,and in order to reach the summit, they are dovoted themselves to long time training and severe challenges.

In modern society, the level of salaries depend more on market demands.If an  entertainer is favored by millions of fans and each of them buys  his records and swarms into his live performance, the income of the entertainer will increase natually.As long as the music or performance of the entertainers is still popular, their salaries will sustain on the high level.We can not deny that those entertainers  also bring us pleasure and enrich our spiritual lives.

Usually , the salaries know by us is not their ultimate income.Governments often levy relatively high taxes on this kind of income.So the athletes and entertainers will contribute more to the financial income of governments and then benefit citizens, even though they earn millions of dollars per year.

In the end , we should reconsider the phenoma of famous person's high salaries. They deserve the high salaries for their efforts and contributions.

第三个理由会不会感觉跑题？ 结尾太仓促，因为不知道写什么好，要不就只有重复了。

SammyfeishiUID: 151939

162 some famous athletes and entertainers earn millions of dollars every year, do you think these people deserve such high salaries?

The high salaries earned by famous athletes and entertainers are becoming the center of controversy. Are these people really deserve millions of dollars every year? Although many people would doubt it, in my point of view, they deserve such huge sums of money, considering the traits of sports and entertainment, as well as the hard-working of these people.

First of all, being forms of exciting, various kinds of sport attract millions of people to watch and to take part in, while entertaining activities give people the enjoyment of relaxing. Therefore, people who could dominate this world are regarded as something so great as heroes in people’s mind. Depending on this psychology, these famous ones make ordinary persons pay money for them willingly. No wonder why the celebrated earn such high salaries with ease.

Secondly, the hard-working behind their glorious showing deserve large amounts of money. As we know, in order to win the championship, athletes take arduous trainings every day, no matter how severe the weather is or how sick they are. Their sweat, pains and spirits of never giving up are paid off. For another, being a famous entertainer, one must practices thousands of times before performing on stages. As public figures, they should pay great attention to their external appearances and manners toward media. A tiny mistake may destroy their splendid future. With the consideration of what they have done, we might better understand why the noted could earn such salaries.

Besides, popular athletes and entertainers make tremendous contributions to public finance. Laws stipulate that the sum of entertaining tax should account for 60% of one’s income. Thus we can imagine how much money they could hand in to the government.

In conclusion, with giving careful thought of what characteristic of sports and entertainment, and how much pressure they have suffered from, these famous athletes and entertainers deserve what they have attained.
写这篇文章的时候有点困 所以超时了 而且我再往键盘上敲的时候肯定对文章有了修改了 所以我的实际水平还要比现在低一些 希望大家能对我的文章展开轰击 我现在对文章的谋篇布局和中心思想的表达还不是很有把握 老觉得会写跑题

SammyfeishiUID: 151939

Some famous atheletes and entertainers earn millions of dollars every year.Do you think these people deserve such high salaries?Use specific reasons and examples to support your opioin.

At the first glance, some famous atheletes and entertainment earing millions of dollars per year is unreasonable.However, we only notic the superficial phenomena.Actually i think they deserve such high salaries.

Only a few top atheletes and entertainers can reach such high salaries as millions of dollars per year.To be an athelete, his income in ordinary time is not very high, perhaps only slightly higher than average incoming level,for they carry on intensive training dangerous sometime.Only when they attend some national or international games and win the medals can they are awarded to high bonuses, and the bonuses varies according to their progresses in the game.In a lifetime of an athelete, the opportunies and possiblities to be champion are at most several times,and in order to reach the summit, they are dovoted themselves to long time training and severe challenges.

In modern society, the level of salaries depend more on market demands.If an entertainer is favored by millions of fans and each of them buys his records and swarms into his live performance, the income of the entertainer will increase natually.As long as the music or performance of the entertainers is still popular, their salaries will sustain on the high level.We can not deny that those entertainers also bring us pleasure and enrich our spiritual lives.

Usually , the salaries know 改为known by us is not their ultimate income.Governments often levy relatively high taxes on this kind of income.So the athletes and entertainers will contribute more to the financial income of governments and then benefit citizens, even though they earn millions of dollars per year.

In the end , we should reconsider the phenoma of famous person's high salaries. They deserve the high salaries for their efforts and contributions.

我也写了这篇文章 思路基本和你一致 看了你的文章我觉得你掌握语言的熟练程度比我好很多 你是不是不熟悉用电脑打字啊 放到word 里万里江山一片红啊：）还有核心词athletes 可千万别写错啊

steel_liuUID: 161612

With the speedy development of the modern technology, internet has become a essential part of our society .We can go to the net almost everywhere, from our office to our home.. At the same time ,internet has a great role in the daily life of modern people. Some people believe that internet is good to people because it  bring so much valuable information while others think otherwise since  it also caused many problems. As far as I am concerned ,since the effect that internet has  on the people is very intensive and extensive , it should be analyzed from every side before we draw a conclusion.

Internet , to begin with, offers many benefits to people . fistly , internet make it easy for people to communicate one other  even though there are thousands miles away between two people. For example , by E-mail, a person can others in other place even in other country something in just a few seconds and with almost no cost. Secondly , many people can share the rich information source through the internet .If a person are interested in information in some subject , he can search it trough the engine in the net, and then get  a lot of paper and books related to it , reading them directly or downloading them.  Thirdly ,internet is also an important entertainment style to people . In their spare time , through the internet they can chat ,listen to the music , watch the film  and even play a game .this kind of style is very welcome among the people all over the world.

On the other hand , internet also creates some serious problems .Firstly, there are some websites which advocate sex and violence in order to make a profit. The content of these websites will pollute people’s spirit , especially the young man. Secondly , there are also many kinds of cheats , who either cheat people of their emotion or cheat people of their money in the net . Thirdly  some students are indulged in some net games , for getting their lessons , which has become a hot topic in the school.

Just as every coin has two sides ,internet has its positive role  as well as its negative role. Which role it will play depends on how people use it .So I think if people make good use of internet , ,it will bring more benefits to people.