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发表于 2006-5-17 08:57:58 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
【FLY AW小组备考作业帖】

机经总结:
kck 7月17日机经:Issue 26 30  Argument 56
夜一7月20日机经:issue212 argument161
honeyviola7月26,上海JJ,I50, A200,I的另一题是领导和道德的关系的题目,还有人遇到了科技和从服饰等看一个国家社会的题目


第一次作业总结在19楼!!
[小组成员]
exp03--owl
owl---夜一
夜一--cc28
cc28---zqzned
zqzned--一切皆空
一切皆空---风中尘埃
风中尘埃——honeyviola
honeyviola——澄~清
澄~清——exp03
第一次改前面改后面的,地二次改就反过来。
从5月17日起正式进入全面备考状态!A za A za fighting~



【作业链接帖位置】
第一页:2# exp03
            4# 夜一
            7# zqzned
            8# xmbjowl
第二页:11# kck(一切皆空)
            12# honeyviola(妮妮)
            13# 澄~清
            16# 风中尘埃
            18# flycc28
请大家把作业链接都贴到相应的楼层里,格式请参照我的格式以方便查找!谢谢!


【组队说明】
    本组成员考试时间均为7月底左右,现在开始小组正式成立!!从本周四,即5月18日正式开始运营。
   
   

【目标】
    A za a za fighting~~冲上5.0!!

【总体时间安排】
      第一阶段 现在---7月初 练习覆盖题库中所有类型的题目
      第二阶段 7月初---考试  以机经为依托,练习高频题目

【任务要求】

[题目发放]
      每周日晚上22:00点前发本周作文题目,及相关题目简单分析,Issue两篇、Argument一篇,由组长和组副负责出题;
      作文题目的顺序Issue按照教育类、政治类、科技类、传媒类/艺术类/学习类、社会类、历史类、文化类、行为类的顺序,每次一类,轮换选择每类中的高频题目;Argument按照05年全年的机经频率统计结果来选择;
      相关分析可以参考精华帖里的资料及自己理解作简要分析,可由小组成员轮流进行;
      每周日安排一人主持本周作文和提纲总结,大家集体讨论。

[作业提交]
      周二周四周六早上9:00为作业提交时间,晚上18:00前提交为别人修改后的作文,周三周五周天早上9:00为自己修改后作文提交时间(在跟贴中注明是改后内容),晚上18:00前提交为别人修改后的作文,小组成员务必完成并提交。
      每个人都用大帖里固定的一个帖子交作业,列出自己的每一次作业链接,写明:第xx次作业

[作业格式]
      题目如Issue 136(括号内附字数)
      中文/英文提纲
      正文
      相关参考资料(放在回复帖里,如果有的话,大家找到的资料都可以拿来形成资料帖)
      请小组成员现将各自的拼写和基本语法错误自己纠正之后再上传

[总结]
      每周日,18:00互改结束后-第二天中午12:00为指定成员总结时间,由小组成员轮流负责
      该成员汇总整理本次作业小组成员的改后提纲和相关资料,放到大帖里
      每位小组成员如果愿意可以参与总结,总结小组或者自己的情况都可以
      由每次该成员负责寻找一周作业的优秀习作,互改结束前交给组长,一并汇入总结,可以供大家阅读

[惩罚]
      没有在规定时间内完成作业或者修改,组内通报批评
    3次连续不写作业或者3次连续不修改其他组员的作文,请自动退出小组

[组长轮换制度]
      第一轮组长暂定结果见章程开始,以后每隔两周轮换一次,表现好的组长继续连任,表现不好的自动退位让贤,其他人可以推荐或自荐

[友情提示]
      对每次都对帮忙改作文的同学致以感谢
      请认真修改小组成员的文章,你不但会换得他人对你文章的认真态度,而且可以在互改中获得巨大的进步
      如果小组进展顺利,再试着增开总结帖或资料贴吧,暂时可能只放在大帖里,也许会比较乱
      也快期终考试了,大家一起加油吧,咬牙挺过每一次作业(虽然还没开始...)
  
      最后感谢寄托作文版的各位版主!!

[发帖注意事项]

小组成员请注意:
     把我们的帖子整理一下,第1楼作为章程,本帖作为题目的链接帖,以后每次题目放在大帖的回复里,然后把链接放到下面。
     例如:  
     
作业链接: 第一次作业:http://——
              第二次作业:http://——
              第三次作业:http://——
     
argument提纲链接:a1:http://——
                          a2:http://——   
                          a3: http://——
issue提纲链接:i1: http://——
                   i2:http://——
                   i3:http://——
     

      组长也将大帖里自己的第一帖作为题目链接帖,第二帖作为作业链接帖
    组员将大帖里的第一帖作为作业链接帖

    这样做的目的是使得题目和作业链接都在大帖前面的固定位置,方便我们查找作业和题目,也利于帖子的清洁。

交作业情况:
                      1      2     3     4      5     6      7     8      9      10      11       12       13
exp03              *     *     *     *             *      *     *               *
owl                  *     *     *     *      *     
夜一                *     *      *     *      *     *      *             *      
cc28                *     *                           *      *     *              *
zqzned             *     *      *     *      *     *      *     *      *        
一切皆空          *     *      *             *     *      *     *      *      
风中尘埃          *     *      *     *             *      *             *         
honeyviola        *     *      *     *      *     *      *     *      *      
澄~清              *     *                           *             *                  

[资料总结]
追星剑特训:https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mo ... 7%BD%A3%CC%D8%D1%B5  大家应该狠狠地看看!夜一推荐!

[FLY AW小组第一周作业]
周四:argument 147 电玩游戏好不好卖
周六:issue51 怎样培养对社会有用的人
修锐分类:个体和整体(少数和多数、局部和整体)
        一般分类:教育类
周三开始至周天提纲题目每天一篇i两篇a:(根据高频排序42以后)
issue: 8,54,99,127,207          argument:57,97,180,205,34,99,165,25,46,159
当天早上九点前交作业,晚上十点前修改好互改的同学的作业,第二天贴出自己重新修改后的文章(希望不要交得太晚以免别人没时间帮你修改),第三天九点前交修改的他人的文章,例如:
第一次:A>B>C>D>E>F>A  
第二次(自己改过一遍的文章):A<B<C<D<E<F<A
希望大家按时完成!!!

[第二周作业]
周二 i7 technology第三次
周四 a17 ABC waste第四次
周六i17 obey law or not第五次

提纲题目:
a36 111 168 239 9 167 230 235 242 4 39 129 151 238
i13 138 214 69 184 168 180
希望大家从这周开始,每天两篇a一篇i,不要拖作业

第三周作业:
第六次作业,周二:
issue121 "At various times in the geological past, many species have become extinct as a result of natural, rather than human, processes. Thus, there is no justification for society to make extraordinary efforts, especially at a great cost in money and jobs, to save endangered species." [05/23; 06/6]
Socierty: Problems.

第七次作业,周四:
argument2 The following appeared in a letter sent by a committee of homeowners from the Deerhaven Acres to all homeowners in Deerhaven Acres.
"Seven years ago, homeowners in nearby Brookville community adopted a set of restrictions on how the community's yards should be landscaped and what colors the exteriors of homes should be painted. Since then, average property values have tripled in Brookville. In order to raise property values in Deerhaven Acres, we should adopt our own set of restrictions on landscaping and housepainting."

第八次作业,周六:
issue212 "If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it is justifiable."
Behaviors: Goals.

提纲作业:
Argument: 203.217.234.11.76.133.185.160.166.192.228.21.56.98
Issue: 93.151.218.167.5.10.142

第四周作业:
第九次作业
周二:issue207 Cultrue
207"Rituals and ceremonies help define a culture. Without them, societies or groups of people have a diminished sense of who they are." [05/25; 06/2]
典礼和仪式有助于确立一种文化,否则人们的社会或群体的角色归属感削弱。
;)就选它来写写吧
第十次作业
周四:argument117
117The following is a memo from the business manager of Valu-Mart stores.
"Over 70 percent of the respondents to a recent survey reported that they are required to take more work home with them from the workplace than they were in the past. Since Valu-Mart has not seen impressive sales in its office-supply departments in the past, we should take advantage of this work-at-home trend by increasing at all Valu-Mart stores the stock of home office machines such as printers, small copy machines, paper shredders, and fax machines. We will also increase stock of office supplies such as paper, pens, and staplers. With these changes, our office-supply departments will become the most profitable component of our stores."

第十一次作业
周六:issue144  Art
144"It is the artist, not the critic,* who gives society something of lasting value." *a person who evaluates works of art, such as novels, films, music, paintings, etc. " [05/75; 06/11]
是艺术家而不是批评家,带给社会一些具有持久价值的东西。*批评家指经常评价艺术作品,例如小说、电影、音乐、绘画等的人。

提纲作业:
argument 154.178.202.10.59.161.191.208.210.227.12.61.89.201
issue 29.95.194.25.46.80.153

第五周作业:
第十二次作业:周二:  issue31"Money spent on research is almost always a good investment, even when the results of that research are controversial."现实与理想   
第十三次作业,周四:  argument47 Scientists studying historical weather patterns have discovered that in the mid-sixth century, Earth suddenly became significantly cooler. Although few historical records survive from that time, some accounts found both in Asia and Europe mention a dimming of the sun and extremely cold temperatures. Either a huge volcanic eruption or a large meteorite colliding with Earth could have created a large dust cloud throughout Earth's atmosphere that would have been capable of blocking enough sunlight to lower global temperatures significantly. A large meteorite collision, however, would probably create a sudden bright flash of light, and no extant historical records of the time mention such a flash. Some surviving Asian historical records of the time, however, mention a loud boom that would be consistent with a volcanic eruption. Therefore, the cooling was probably caused by a volcanic eruption.   
第十四次作业:周六:  issue136"The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare."
牛例文:
https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mo ... ;highlight=issue136   
提纲作业:
issue:40.183.161.61.72.131.186  
argument: 212.222.29.100.169.88.120.150.156.209.20.127.204.213


夜一:
周二:第十五次作业
Issue41:
41"Such nonmainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science."
周四:第十六次作业
argument51:
51The following appeared in a medical newsletter.
"Doctors have long suspected that secondary infections may keep some patients from healing quickly after severe muscle strain. This hypothesis has now been proved by preliminary results of a study of two groups of patients. The first group of patients, all being treated for muscle injuries by Dr. Newland, a doctor who specializes in sports medicine, took antibiotics regularly throughout their treatment. Their recuperation time was, on average, 40 percent quicker than typically expected. Patients in the second group, all being treated by Dr. Alton, a general physician, were given sugar pills, although the patients believed they were taking antibiotics. Their average recuperation time was not significantly reduced. Therefore, all patients who are diagnosed with muscle strain would be well advised to take antibiotics as part of their treatment."
周六:第十七次作业
Issue185:
185"Scandals—whether in politics, academia, or other areas—can be useful. They focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could."
关于列提纲的作业,我想就暂时不出了吧,之前的如果没有列完的话用这周的时间补上吧
不过如果大家之前的都列完了,我就出新的:)

第九周作业
周一,根据同主题写作题目来写,与其他人互改
周二  issue208"The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people."
讲社会面貌的很意识流的一个题
Argument200   

周三issue7、"The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records."  
科技改变世界的题  类似的题目共有三道  
183"As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and more mysterious."  
25"Anyone can make things bigger and more complex. What requires real effort and courage is to move in the opposite direction—in other words, to make things as simple as possible."
Argument53   

周四,同主题写作。   

周五issue120"So much is new and complex today that looking back for an understanding of the past provides little guidance for living in the present."  
过去对现在的影响和作用  相关题目共14道,很容易找出来,比如以前那道典礼与仪式  Argument174   

周六11"All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems."
教育,相关内容参看https://bbs.gter.net/showthread.php?s=&threadid=204875  Argument45   

周天160"The most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives. Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little."  政治,leader品质的重要性,五道相关题目
Argument163

第十周作业:
Issue topic  
周四24"People in positions of power are most effective when they exercise caution and restraint in the use of that power."  
政治类,讨论链接:https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=205365   
周五30"The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people's efficiency so that everyone has more leisure time."  
科技类,讨论链接:https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=206718   
周六190"As long as people in a society are hungry or out of work or lack the basic skills needed to survive, the use of public resources to support the arts is inappropriate—and, perhaps, even cruel—when one considers all the potential uses of such money."  
艺术类,讨论链接:https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=207026   
周天189"If people disregard the great works of the past, it is because these works no longer answer the needs of the present."  
历史类,类似的题目太多了,讨论链接:https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=207576   
Argument topic  
周四 同主题  
周五177The following is a letter that recently appeared in the Oak City Gazette, a local newspaper.   "Membership in Oak City's Civic Club—a club whose primary objective is to discuss local issues—should continue to be restricted to people who live in Oak City. People who work in Oak City but who live elsewhere cannot truly understand the business and politics of the city. It is important to restrict membership to city residents because only residents pay city taxes and therefore only residents understand how the money could best be used to improve the city. At any rate, restricting membership in this way is unlikely to disappoint many of the nonresidents employed in Oak City, since neighboring Elm City's Civic Club has always had an open membership policy, and only twenty-five nonresidents have joined Elm City's Club in the last ten years."  
周六220The following appeared in an article in a magazine for writers.
"A recent study showed that in describing a typical day's conversation, people make an average of 23 references to watching television and only 1 reference to reading fiction. This result suggests that, compared with the television industry, the publishing and bookselling industries are likely to decline in profitability. Therefore, people who wish to have careers as writers should acquire training and experience in writing for television rather than for print media."
周日216The following appeared in a magazine article about planning for retirement.   "Because of its spectacular natural beauty and consistent climate, Clearview should be a top choice for anyone seeking a place to retire. As a bonus, housing costs in Clearview have fallen significantly during the past year, and real estate taxes remain lower than those in neighboring towns. Nevertheless, Clearview's mayor promises many new programs to improve schools, streets, and public services. Retirees in Clearview can also expect excellent health care as they grow older, since the number of physicians in the area is far greater than the national average."  


第十一周作业:
追星箭特训chapter1(周一周二周三)
issue1. "We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whose views contradict our own; disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning."   
issue9. "Academic disciplines have become so specialized in recent years that scholars' ideas reach only a narrow audience. Until scholars can reach a wider audience, their ideas will have little use."   
issue88. "Technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics."  
  追星箭特训chapter2(周四周五周六周天)
issue14. "It is necessary for everyone to read poetry, novels, mythology and other types of imaginative literature."   
issue71. "Spending time alone makes one a better companion to others."     issue125. "The past is no predictor of the future."   
  issue182. "It is dangerous to trust only intelligence."  

  Argument
周一42The following appeared in a proposal from the economic minister of the country of Paraterra.   "In order to strengthen its lagging economy, last year the government of the nearby country of Bellegea began an advertising campaign to promote ecologically sound tourism (ecotourism). This year the number of foreign visitors arriving at Bellegea's main airport doubled, and per capita income in Bellegea increased by ten percent. To provide more income for the population of Paraterra and also preserve the natural environment of our tiny country, we too should begin to promote ecotourism. To ensure that our advertising campaign is successful, we should hire the current director of Bellegea's National Tourism Office as a consultant for the campaign."   
周二48The following appeared in a newspaper article published in the country of Corpora.   "Twenty years ago, one half of all citizens in Corpora met the standards for adequate physical fitness as then defined by the national advisory board on physical fitness. Today, the board says that only one quarter of all citizens are adequately fit and suggests that spending too much time using computers may be the reason. But since overall fitness levels are highest in regions of Corpora where levels of computer ownership are also highest, it is clear that using computers has not made citizens less physically fit. Instead, as shown by this year's unusually low expenditures on fitness-related products and services, the recent decline in the economy is most likely the cause, and fitness levels will improve when the economy does."   
周三237The following appeared as part of an article in a local Beauville newspaper.   "According to a government report, last year the city of Dillton reduced its corporate tax rate by 15 percent; at the same time, it began offering relocation grants and favorable rates on city utilities to any company that would relocate to Dillton. Within 18 months, two manufacturing companies moved to Dillton, where they employ a total of 300 people. Therefore, the fastest way for Beauville to stimulate economic development and hence reduce unemployment is to provide tax incentives and other financial inducements that encourage private companies to relocate here."   
周四153The following is from an editorial in the Midvale Observer, a local newspaper.   "Ever since the 1950's, when television sets began to appear in the average home, the rate of crimes committed by teenagers in the country of Alta has steadily increased. This increase in teenage crime parallels the increase in violence shown on television. According to several national studies, even very young children who watch a great number of television shows featuring violent scenes display more violent behavior within their home environment than do children who do not watch violent shows. Furthermore, in a survey conducted by the Observer, over 90 percent of the respondents were parents who indicated that prime-time television—programs that are shown between 7 p.m. and 9 p.m.—should show less violence. Therefore, in order to lower the rate of teenage crime in Alta, television viewers should demand that television programmers reduce the amount of violence shown during prime time."   
周五179The following is a memorandum written by the director of personnel to the president of the Cedar Corporation.  "It would be a mistake to rehire the Good-Taste Company to supply the food in our employee cafeteria next year. It is the second most expensive caterer in the city. In addition, its prices have risen in each of the last three years, and it refuses to provide meals for people on special diets. Just last month three employees complained to me that they no longer eat in the cafeteria because they find the experience 'unbearable.' Our company should instead hire Discount Foods. Discount is a family-owned local company and it offers a varied menu of fish and poultry. I recently tasted a sample lunch at one of the many companies that Discount serves and it was delicious—an indication that hiring Discount will lead to improved employee satisfaction."    周六232The following appeared in a memo from the sales manager of Eco-Power, a company that manufactures tools and home appliances.   "Many popular radio and television commercials use memorable tunes and song lyrics to call attention to the products being advertised. Indeed, a recent study of high school students showed that 85 percent could easily recognize the tunes used to advertise leading soft drinks and fast-food restaurants. Despite our company's extensive advertising in magazines during the past year, sales of our home appliances declined. Therefore, to boost company profits, we should now switch to advertisements featuring a distinctive song."   
周天109The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Maple City newspaper.  "Twenty years ago Pine City established strict laws designed to limit the number of new buildings that could be constructed in the city. Since that time the average housing prices in Pine City have increased considerably. Chestnut City, which is about the same size as Pine City, has over the past twenty years experienced an increase in average housing prices similar to Pine City, but Chestnut City never established any laws that limit new building construction. So it is clear that laws limiting new construction have no effect on average housing prices. So if Maple City were to establish strict laws that limit new building construction, these laws will have no effect on average housing prices."  


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作文作业:
第一次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第二次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第三次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... ;highlight=%2Bexp03
第四次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D3
第六次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... ;highlight=%2Bexp03
第七次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第八次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第十次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第十二次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第十三次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第十四次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第二十三次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第二十五次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=488334&extra=
第二十六次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第二十七次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第二十八次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第二十九次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D2
第三十次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=488858&extra=
第三十一次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第三十二次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=491106&extra=
第三十五次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第三十六次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第三十七次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第三十八次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第四十一次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第四十四次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=496879&extra=
issue30:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
argument177:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
argument220:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... xtra=#pid1768854824
issue190:http://edu.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=499771&extra=page%3D1
issue189:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
argument216:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
issue11:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
argument51:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
argument42:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
issue9:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
issue1:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
issue14:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

argument提纲:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
argument36:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-465301-1-1.html 6#
argument111:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-465301-1-1.html 7#
argument168:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-465301-1-1.html 8#
argument239:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-465301-1-1.html 9#
argument9:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-465301-1-1.html 10#
argument167:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-465301-2-1.html 11#

issue提纲:
issue8https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... ;highlight=%2Bexp03
issue13 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... ;highlight=%2Bexp03
issue138:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... xtra=#pid1768614683
issue214:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... xtra=#pid1768614781

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夜一的作业链接贴:)

exp03辛苦了,非常感谢的说~

请大家多多指教,谢谢先:)

写作总结:
备考第一阶段Issue写作总结:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
备考第一阶段Argument写作总结:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
推荐资料:
追星剑特训 FOR ISSUE: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... Dtype%26typeid%3D50

作文作业:
第一次作业:
argument147: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
argument147 修改稿: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768590918
第二次作业:
Issue51: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
Issue51 修改稿: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768599033
第三次作业:
Issue7: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
Issue7 修改稿: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768611312
第四次作业:
argument17: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第五次作业:
Issue17: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D2
第六次作业:
Issue121: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第七次作业:
argument2: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第八次作业:
Issue212: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第九次作业:
Issue207: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第十次作业:
argument117: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第十一次作业:
Issue144: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第十二次作业:
Issue31: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第十三次作业:
argument47: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第十四次作业:
Issue136: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768711392
Issue136 修改稿: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第十五次作业:
Issue41: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第十六次作业:
argument51: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第十七次作业:
Issue185: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第十八次作业:
Issue36: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第十九次作业:
argument64: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第二十次作业:
Issue38: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第二十一次作业:
Issue48: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第二十二次作业:
argument140: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第二十三次作业:
Issue83: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第二十四次作业:
argument38: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第二十五次作业:
Issue130: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第二十六次作业:
argument170: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第二十七次作业:
Issue47: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第二十八次作业:
argument65: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第二十九次作业:
Issue4: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第三十次作业:
argument137: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第三十一次作业:
Issue103: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第三十二次作业:
argument143: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第三十三次作业:
Issue152: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第三十四次作业:
argument145: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第三十五次作业:
Issue154: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第三十六次作业:
argument131: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第三十七次作业:
Issue144: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D3
第三十八次作业:
Issue208: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第三十九次作业:
argument200: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第四十次作业:
Issue183: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
Issue25: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D3
第四十一次作业:
argument53: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第四十二次作业:
argument71: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第四十三次作业:
Issue120: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第四十四次作业:
argument174: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第四十五次作业:
Issue11: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第四十六次作业:
argument45: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第四十七次作业:
Issue160: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第四十八次作业:
argument163: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第四十九次作业:
Issue147: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第五十次作业:
argument53: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768846029
推荐资料:
0506G同主题写作索引贴 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D2
0510G同主题写作索引贴 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
0606G同主题写作索引贴 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
0510G同主题写作第19期, Argument147分析 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid1781069
0506G同主题写作第6期,Issue51分析 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=257346
0506G同主题写作第9期,Issue7分析 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=260522
0606G同主题写作第17期,argument17分析 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
0606G同主题写作第18期,Issue17分析 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
Issue17 资料,恶法亦法 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... ghlight=%2Bkito9695
0510G同主题写作第10期,argument117分析 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... p;extra=&page=1
0506G同主题写作第4期,Issue144分析 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=255061
0510G同主题写作第8期,Issue136分析 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=304511
0506G同主题写作第11期,Issue41分析 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=263304
0506G同主题写作第1期,Issue185分析 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=252046


Argument提纲:
argument57 文章+提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768582852
argument97 文章+提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
argument180 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768590034
argument180 习作: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
argument205 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768590167
argument205 习作: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
argument34 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768592855
argument99 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768593511
argument165 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768597903
argument25 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768598017
argument46 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D2#pid1768602471
argument159 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D2#pid1768602528
argument36 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768606250
argument230 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D2#pid1768619040
argument235 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D2#pid1768619063
argument156 习作: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
argument209 习作: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
argument20 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768709171
argument127 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768708480
argument204 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768704085
argument213 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D2#pid1768701742
argument45 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768748480
argument163 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768752257
argument71 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D4#pid1768758603
argument216 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D4#pid1768758683
argument220 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768761499
argument67 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768766867
argument48 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768767004
argument42 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768773033
argument26 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768752588
argument111 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768748840
argument235 提纲(修改稿): https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768752656
argument9 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768758751
argument242 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768766785
argument238 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768749028
argument151 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768752763
argument4 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768759422
argument11 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768752821
argument76 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768759478
argument228 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768759802
argument141 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768780388
argument232 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768780607
argument153 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768793553
argument179 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768793658
argument214 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768795622
argument190 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768795752
argument109 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768796972

Issue提纲:
Issue8 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768583206
Issue54 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768590241
Issue99 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768593116
Issue127提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768598233
Issue207 一些思考: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768604289
Issue13 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768737977
Issue138 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768609775
Issue214 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D2#pid1768614957
Issue72 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768709725
Issue72 习作: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
Issue131 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768705786
Issue186 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768699799
Issue70 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768748764
Issue88 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768752411
Issue43 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D4#pid1768758607
Issue43 习作: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
Issue177 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768759557
Issue160 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768766700
Issue159 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768766932
Issue26 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768767109
Issue74 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768770475
Issue157 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768777862
Issue221 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768780472
Issue221 习作: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
Issue59 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768796910
Issue226 提纲: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768797129
Issue184 习作: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
Issue29 习作: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
Issue93 习作: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
推荐资料:
0510G同主题写作第6期,Issue207分析 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
0506G同主题写作第7期,Issue138分析 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=258531
0506同主题写作第3期,Issue93分析 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=254079
0606G同主题写作第11期,Issue46分析 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... 1%26filter%3Ddigest

其他:
Issue习作
Issue144: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
Issue2: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D2
推荐资料:
0506G同主题写作第4期,Issue144分析 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=255061

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issue提纲:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768585480
argu提纲:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768585478
第一次作业https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1[/url]
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768588174
第二次作业 issue51
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
修改稿https://bbs.gter.net/thread-466232-2-1.html
周一提纲
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768604047
issue7 第三次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
argu17 第四次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
issue 17 第五次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
issue 121 第六次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
argu 2 第七次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
issue 212 第八次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
argu第三周作业所有提纲
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
issue207 第九次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
argu117第十次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
issue 31 第十二次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
argu47 第十三次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
issue136 第十四次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... xtra=#pid1768710407
issue41 第十五次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768731876
argument51 第十六次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
issue185 第十七次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=483974&extra=
issue36 第十八次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=485743&extra=
argu64 第十九次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=485745&extra=
issue38 第二十次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=485746&extra=
issue48 第二十一次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=486252&extra=
argument140 第二十二次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=487221&extra=
issue83 第二十三次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=487222&extra=
issue130 第二十四次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=487223&extra=
argu38第二十五次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=487747&extra=
argu170 第二十六次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=488576&extra=
argu65 第二十七次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=488577&extra=
argu137第二十八次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=488582&extra=
issue47 第二十九次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=489323&extra=
issue4 第三十次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=489638&extra=
issue103第三十一次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=489640&extra=
issue152第三十二次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=490132&extra=
argu143第三十三次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=491352&extra=
issue154第三十四次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=491351&extra=
argu145第三十五次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D3
argu131第三十六次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=491842&extra=
issue144第三十七次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
issue208第三十八次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=492576&extra=
argu200第三十九次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=492578&extra=
issue25第四十次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=493574&extra=
argu53第四十一次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=493582&extra=
issue120第四十二次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
argu174第四十三次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=495757&extra=
argu71第四十四次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=495851&extra=
argu45第四十五次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=495855&extra=
argu163第四十六次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768830979
issue11第四十七次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
issue147第四十八次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/post.php ... amp;topicsubmit=yes
argument177第四十九次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=500591&extra=
issue24第五十次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=498251&extra=
argu53第五十一次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=498294&extra=
issue189第五十二次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=499946&extra=
argu216第五十三次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=499951&extra=
issue43第五十四次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=500589&extra=
issue1第五十五次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=500954&extra=
argument42第五十六次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=500986&extra=
issue88第五十七次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=501597&extra=
argument237第五十八次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=501598&extra=
偶今天上午用ppgre模考了一下,不知如何保存,没能贴上来~呵呵~但找了一下真正模考的感觉,感觉写第一篇时可能是没睡醒的缘故,手指还不大灵活,到第二篇时热身已经完全充分了~:victory:

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argument147:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
issue13+argument36+111提纲https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=467428&highlight=
issue127+207 argument165+25+46+159提纲 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=467001&highlight=
issue51https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=466491&highlight=
argument147https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=465073&highlight=
issue99+argument34+99提纲https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=465808&highlight=
issue53+argument97+180+205提纲https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=465548&highlight=
issue8+argument57提纲https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=465027&highlight=
issue244https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=464502&highlight=

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一切皆空 的作业贴!

第一周作业:
Argument147 作文+提纲在:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
Issue 51  作文+提纲在:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768594349
I:8,54,99,127,207 ;A:25,34,46,57,97,99,159,165,180,205  提纲在:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768599762

第二周作业:
Issue 7  作文+提纲在:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
Argument 17  作文+提纲在:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
Issue17  作文+提纲在:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... type%26typeid%3D101

第三周作业:
Issue 121 作文+提纲在:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D2
A2 作文+提纲在:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
Issue212 作文+提纲在:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

第四周作业:
Issue 207 作文+提纲:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
Argument 117 作文+提纲:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
Issue 144 作文+提纲:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... type%26typeid%3D101

第五周作业:
Issue 31 作文+提纲:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... type%26typeid%3D101
Argument 47 作文+提纲:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768702064
Issue 136 作文+提纲:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... 3D101#pid1768713347

第六周作业:
Issue 41 作文+提纲:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... type%26typeid%3D101
Argument 51 作文+提纲:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
Issue 185  作文=提纲:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768742666

第七周作业:
Issue 36 作文+提纲:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
Argument 68 作文+提纲:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

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第一次作业和提纲,希望得到大家支持,谢谢

这是我的习作,第一次写,也不是很好,还期待大家的意见和建议,谢谢!
第一次作业:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
i:https://bbs.gter.net/redirect ... amp;goto=nextnewset
a:https://bbs.gter.net/redirect ... amp;goto=nextoldset
第二次作业 :
issue 51https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
issue54提纲 和argument 180,205 的提纲:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
issue99提纲 和argument 34,99 的提纲:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
issue 127,207argument165,25,46,159的提纲https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D2
第三次作业:
issue 7:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
argument 36,111,issue 13的提纲:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
argument 168,239 issue 138的提纲:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
argument9,167 issue 69的提纲:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第四次作业:
argument 17:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
argument230,235,242,4, issue 184,168的提纲:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D3
第五次作业:
issue 17:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
argument 39, 129 ,151, 238 issue 168,180的提纲:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第六次作业:
issue 121:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第七次作业:
argument 2:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第八次作业:
issue 212: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第九次作业:
issue 207:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第十次作业:
argument117:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D2
第十一次作业:
issue 144:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第十二次作业:
issue 31: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第十三,十四次作业:
argument47, issue136:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第十六次作业:
argument51:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第十七次作业:
issue185:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第二十五次作业:
issue4:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第二十六次作业:
argument65:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第二十七,二十八,三十五,三十六次作业:
i152:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
a145:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
i154:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
a131:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
第三十七,三十八次作业:
i208:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768812197
a200:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

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发表于 2006-5-18 16:19:55 |只看该作者

外出一个星期,未及请假,致歉

第一周作业
argument147  https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
issue51  https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

补上第一周所有issue提纲和分析,主要参考书为老外280:
issue8,issue54, issue99, issue127, issue207,列在同一张帖子里
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768638687

第二周作业
Issue 7  https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D2
argument 17  https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

第三周作业
issue121,写得不多,但是找了些素才,想看的可以看看https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
argument2 以前写的https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=463867&highlight=
issue212https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
这篇文章好难写啊,本来以为容易,还打算抽空把写法律那片补上的,可是发现就是看似容易的题目写不出字数。结果只写了460左右:(

第四周作业
issue207 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
argument117https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
issue144https://bbs.gter.net/thread-478675-1-1.html
思路清楚了,但还需要事例补充,先搁置,等我再找些资料在补充完整:L

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晕了!找不到一切皆空的作业,搜索也没找到,还没到吗?

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失踪三天后我终于回来了

第一次作业 ARGUMENT147:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

学校网络故障让我三天没来,作业也没记住是什么,自己闭门造车写了第一篇issue8,大家有时间拍一下。
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

issue51的提纲在二楼 争取明天把作文补上

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第一次作业总结!

------题目------
The following appeared in an editorial in a business magazine.
'Although the sales of Whirlwind video games have declined over the past two years, a recent survey of video-game players suggests that this sales trend is about to be reversed. The survey asked video-game players what features they thought were most important in a video game. According to the survey, players prefer games that provide lifelike graphics, which require the most up-to-date computers. Whirlwind has just introduced several such games with an extensive advertising campaign directed at people 10 to 25 years old, the age-group most likely to play video games. It follows, then, that the sales of Whirlwind video games are likely to increase dramatically in the next few months.'

本次作业终于告一段落!
下面是夜一同学的总结:
总结一下,argument的任务是要抓原文的主要逻辑漏洞,因此需要先分析原文
在原文里,可以归纳为这样的思路:
1.调查说玩家喜欢生动的画面+该公司有该类产品=该产品好卖
2.该产品好卖+推广到喜欢电玩的10-25岁的人=这些人要来买
3.这些人要来买=业绩会上升
可以看出这是一个三步推段的思路,那么要破题的话,就要一一批掉这三步
1.产品有生动画面不等于好卖:其它市场因子
2.调查里的人喜欢不等于10-25岁的人喜欢,而且他们买不起
3.新的产品不一定能克服业绩的低潮:经营管理、销售渠道、竞争对手
另外,需要格外注意的是,不是主要问题所在,最好不要拿出来说,为了把时间集中在主要问题上。更加不要扯到别的地方去,举个例子,有人说在XX地区开发旅游会赢利,就只需要驳斥他不能盈利就行了,不要说什么会破坏环境之类的,没有意义;有人说XX要能治病,就只驳斥他实际不能治病,不要说是药都有副作用之类的,也没有意义,因为跟原文的逻辑没有关系,我们要找的是逻辑漏洞,不是原作者的人格或知识问题

下面是我对澄~清的文章的分析:
句子很长,句式很好,用词很复杂(好些我都不认识…有可能因为我水平…弱)
攻击点很明确:
1.        survey中存在的问题
2.        单纯指出生动画面的重要性太片面
3.        游戏卖的不好的原因没分析清
似乎这样来写感觉更全面,条理更清楚

我看了所有同学的文章之后觉得这次夜一和澄~清的作文值得我们学习句式流畅分析透彻希望大家能向他们学习!
链接:夜一的https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768590918
       澄~清的
当然,我的作文可以作为反面教材供大家参考https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
希望大家再次对自己的文章好好总结修改并再接再厉做好下一次的作业!
嗯,在这里要对迟交和不好好改他人作业的同学提出批评,下次再犯可要点名了!:rolleyes:

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要沉了 顶起来

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向组长抱歉
这两天我有点筋疲力尽,根GT无关,我调整一下,争取迅速来到大家身边。

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