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发表于 2008-11-30 23:30:39 |显示全部楼层

先谢啦~~~;)
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-897789-1-1.html

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发表于 2008-12-1 16:11:19 |显示全部楼层

啊啊啊，来晚了

呜~~~希望在周五之前排到队。。。。
谢谢LZ了
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-897965-1-1.html

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发表于 2008-12-1 21:18:33 |显示全部楼层

12月7号要三战托福了,作文一直没有提高, 麻烦给点意见~先占个位置~

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-898047-1-1.html

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发表于 2008-12-2 18:25:57 |显示全部楼层

多谢mpomanus

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-898357-1-2.html

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发表于 2008-12-3 19:56:04 |显示全部楼层

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=898732&extra=page%3D1%26amp%3Bfilter%3Dtype%26amp%3Btypeid%3D280
多谢前两次的修改，收益良多．．．
提前了三分钟，这个星期就要考了，希望能改最后一次

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发表于 2008-12-5 13:56:02 |显示全部楼层

Giving thanks to Romanus

Hello Romanus:

Hope you can still remember me, or the piece of work that you help revised.

It’s been a long time since you helpedrevised my essay. Night of Dec 14th, just the one before I took theTOEFL, I got your comments which is quiet beyond my expectation and from which I got tremendous encouragement. I never thought that my commonly written piece of work would earn me such high compliments, which as you said, that I’m a superb writer and my wok reminds you of yours in pre-u. I was like intoxicated that moment and this wonderful feeling accompanied me till the whole next day.

My randomly running into you in Gter is surly my best TOEFL experience. My score with a total of 102 came out yesterday.Though not that high, I still consider it a great reward given the fact that this is my first time and I only had limited time for preparation. Therefore, I’m here to give my sincere thanks for your overwhelming supports to all the people including me, who are on their way to achieving their dream in life.

Your way of life really inspires me and I’m just asking whether we can become friends online? Maybe I can add you as friendon facebook, MSN or skype?

Wish you good luck with everything in yourlife.

Rachel

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发表于 2008-12-5 17:30:07 |显示全部楼层

排队。同楼上所言，衷心感谢楼主，改了我这么多的作文，有机会希望和你成为朋友，如果你是女孩，如果你还未嫁人，我倒想认识你。

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-899133-1-1.html

[ 本帖最后由 ock11 于 2008-12-5 17:37 编辑 ]

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发表于 2008-12-5 20:44:32 |显示全部楼层

111楼：Thanks for your encouraging feedback. I'm glad I was able to help you (and perhaps everybody else - I sure hope so) :) You may leave me a 站内短消息 for my contacts.

112楼：这一周还没有完，你会排到下一周哦。。另外您可以不用认识俺了，条件不符合啊。。;d:

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发表于 2008-12-6 20:25:52 |显示全部楼层

多谢您了

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=899764&page=1&extra=page%3D1#pid1772137755

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发表于 2008-12-6 21:43:47 |显示全部楼层

12，13考，请您批改，建议

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-899800-1-1.html

感谢感谢！！！

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发表于 2008-12-8 00:00:01 |显示全部楼层

终于熬过一星期，卡着零点来占楼

搜了一下mpromanus的帖子……117的大牛牛啊跪拜跪拜~
我觉得我写的东西时好时坏。觉得还是思路的问题。尽管列了大框架，但是细节还是习惯一边写一边想，然后有时候就卡壳。后面开始不知道自己说什么………………Lz写文章的时候有没有什么经验。别告诉我你是那种一开始什么东西就都在脑子里的人……

谢谢帮忙了。我知道改我的文章很费劲。
:loveliness:
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-900101-1-1.html

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