20天托福110分复习计划，由于另一个帖子楼数太高，现在本帖也开始为各位改作文

jessie18UID: 2596971

请楼主挑毛病 谢谢
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? University students should be required to take basic science classes even they are not part of the field of the study.

A college or a university is the place where one can gain knowledge and become valuable to the society. However, upon the question, which is better---university students should be required to take basic science classes or students should not be required to take these because they are not part of the field of the study. Different people have different opinions due to their diverse cultural backgrounds. From my personal angle, I am in favor of the opinion that if students are not part of the field they should not be required to take basic science classes.

First of all, we have already learn these basic science classes before we go to universities or colleges and the volume of the knowledge of these aspects is definitely enough to us. As we all know, the fundamentals of science is as much as necessary for us to deal with an awkward situation of our life. There are numerous instances closely fit the notion, just like my personal experience. As a lawyer, only I need is the knowledge of law and I do not need too much of the basic science lore. The more knowledge of law I learn, the more easier can I have an excellent job. So why we should learn what we will not use any more after examination?

In addition, learning these courses would occupy us a lot of time. We have only 24 hours, but most of the time we must work hard on our majors. You know, the competition between students for a good job has been keen. A student stands out first only if he studies deeply in his major. But if students have required to take these basic science classes, we would have many things to do and our schedule become very tight. We could not give full attention to our majors. For example, my friend is in another university, she must take these basic science classes, she often complained to me about her tight curriculum and low marks of her major. So I think if students are not part of the field they should not be required to take basic science classes

Furthermore, the development of society is urgent for the talents that proficient in each field not the versatile person without any proficiency. So all we need to do is to study deeply in our major. In a society fraught with new difficulties and problems, a specialist, when faced with them, will come up with solutions more easily than those who know much knowledge but not skilled. That is why I believe that we should only study our majors.

To sum up, without doubt, a college or a university is the place where dreams can be fulfilled. So taking into account all the factors discussed above, we could safely come to the conclusion that if students are not part of the field of the study they should not be required to take basic science classes. It is a good idea for us to study deeply in our majors.

Jessie奔奔UID: 2627156

恩 谢谢楼主给的建议 我会注意的

Jessie奔奔UID: 2627156

233# 腾格里旅狼
谢谢楼主

想秋刀鱼的猫UID: 2304079

继续来纠缠楼主..鞠躬~


Topics: It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.


It is widely understand that children are hopes of the future. Some educators propose that let children grow up in the countryside is better than in a big city. From my own perspective, I am inclined to the opposite view.

To begin with, there is no denying the fact that children can be well educated in big cities rather than in the countryside. The predominance is revealed in not only educational qualities but also methods. As we all know, schools in big cities always have plentiful excellent teachers, and also the educational methods are varied, such as multimedia, computers and so on. With the help of these available advanced facilities, teachers can show the kids a variety of images or short films, which help them understand easily. In this educational aspect, live in big cities contributes great benefit to children’s growth.

In contrast, education in the countryside develops slowly. It is still continuing traditional ways in majority. One of best friend has been experienced in teaching in the countryside as a volunteer .for several days. During the friends meeting after his coming back, he was definitely feeling the educational distance between the city and countryside. He said that education in the countryside was too boring to attractive kids’ interests, teachers only could just do lectures by themselves without any method, which led to the kids unwilling to go to school. Gradually and eventually, kids would be limited in their own area. Compared to the children who lived in big cities, they have less confidence.

In addition, children need more medical care. The hospitals in big cities can provide more completed protection to kids. According to the advanced medical treatment, children who are sick can receive the therapy immediately. While in the far-off countryside, we may need to drive for a long time to search for. a hospital, not to mention a good one. Hardly can we imagine the situation that kids in emergency without timely aid. It would therefore not be too great an exaggeration to say that children would obtain much protection when grow up in big city.

As a city born and bred, I have always regarded the countryside as something you look at through a train window, or something you occasionally visit during the week-end. If you can do without the few pastoral pleasures of the country like fresh air or capacious space, you will find the city can provide your children with the best that life can offer.

daney68UID: 2582640

222# daney68  托福作文中你经常会出现这种问题，不知道对立面怎么写，如果是这样，最好避开他，挑你明白的说。你知道difficult classes是什么，那你就抓着这个写，写一下选这种课的好处和坏处……而且你的理解确实 ...
腾格里旅狼 发表于 2009-4-28 11:17

文章写了一遍，换了一种思路，麻烦看看，谢谢。


Do you agree or agree :It is better for students at inversity or in collage to choose difficult classes even if they can not get top grades?


Why some people deem difficult classes as somehow benefits for students is beyond me.They always live under illusion that learning difficult classes is full of fun and fantastic ideas,even more prossiable to access to truth.However, they fail to mention that those who choose difficult classes have to take more energy and time than those who don not.Therefore,it is porbably not wise desicion to choose such difficult classes for all students.

If you can do without the dubious merits of learning courses, you will immediately find that those who do not attend difficult classes have more time to relax themselve.They always awailable to have chats with their friends and families, or visit poblic areas with ease, such as parks,cinemas and muesums. While those who attending difficult courses have to undergo extra stress for tough tasks.For example, they must go to library once or twice a day to look up a large amount of data and statistics,even stay up for piles of homework.Next morming they have to draw themselves of an exhausted condition to attend classes.

However,others never experience misery of this sort.There are more choices to develop themselve.Joining in Extra-curricula activities could maintain students'physical fitness; Taking part-time job improve your interpersonnal skills;Volunteering in the local community could enjoy the happiness of others,Apprarenly, what they accquire and feel is far more than those who are out of breath for difficult course.

It is undoultly regard as the difficult classes something you could obtain special konwledge for further study. But it is only part of picture.There are some more other choices that make students hold on less stress and learn more with joy.

秋江暝泊UID: 2519878

楼主辛苦！～～还有五天就要考了，但是写出来的文章还是又干又涩，而且有时候会写不完。。。。能给点建议么？大谢～～


Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know events happening around the world, though sometimes they are unlikely to affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


Hustle and bustle of daily life sometimes grows so overwhelming that we do not have time to look around. Some people may argue that they just don’t see any need in keeping up with what’s going on around the world. Isn’t it better to devote the time into preparing for the exam or dating with our lovers? Though knowing events happening around the world may not bring you a lot of direct benefit, I believe that it’s imperative to person who lives in the contemporary society.
For a person who has a global view, what’s going on around the world can be more or less linked with our daily life. Isn’t your investment in the stock market influenced by America’s war in Iraq? Or doesn’t the bankruptcy of the central bank, if possible, has something to do with the business that you get involved? Knowing events happening around the world will help you develop a thorough understanding of your study or your work and consequently make wise decisions.
In another sense, knowing what’s going on in the world may help you make friends from other countries. As the world getting smaller and smaller with the booming of communication method, we can have friends from different parts of the world. Isn’t it better to discuss with them the Academy Award in the US or the Grand Slam Open of tennis in Australia rather than local affairs? Apparently, the knowledge of what’s going on in the world will help people from different places to explore common interest and get to know each other better.
As you can see, Knowing events happening around the world is closely related to a person’s knowledge and horizons. Once you are exposed to events happening around the world, so are you exposed the variety and comprehensiveness of the world. You can make more friends from different backgrounds and get a better understanding of your position and your work in society and the world. Knowing events around the world is thus a key of a modern person.

cocolinkinUID: 2333716

lz好厉害~其实需要按机井来练习口语吗？
恳请批阅，谢谢噢：）

Do you agree or disagree：University students should be required to take basic science classes even they are not part of the field of the study. Give specific reasons and details to support your opinion


Basic science is the foundation of most major,such as Math,physics,Chemistry.With the development of economy,the situation of seeking a satisfied job is getting much worse.Some people argue that taking basic science classes should not be required because it`s not helpful to carrer.It seems quite practical.But a closer look at the society would reveal such an argument is not only premature,but ultimately wrong-headed.

Paved the road of the development of the natural science,basic science influence most subject nowadays.Every major have the knowledge built with basic science so we can`t have a complete view of our own major without the understanding of it.What`s more,lack of basic science knowledge would be disadvantaged to undertake further research.My sister is so intelligented in her own major that she decided to apply for master of Finance.Unfortunately,she doesn`t good at maths.Failed in the exam which have to be passed,she felt lost and realized the importance of basic science.This example is not only telling me the siginificance of basic science fot an exam,but also implying a theme that basic science is the key to every subject.If university students havn’t got the knowledge taught at basic science classes,it would be a tremendous lost for the society.

But other than helping us to make further research,we can`t ignore the role basic science play in carrer.Gurantees have higher control of basic science would pay less time and energy to learn a new working skill.As we all know,a large sum of pratical knowledge should be learned during the period of entering the society.More basic knowledge we know,more new skill can be developed in a same short time.Attending basic science classes in university is undoubtedly an economical way to command it.

However,I don`t deny that there’s much knowledge we should know in the unversity to strengthen our working ability.But frankly speaking,learning basic science well is the basis element to learn other subject well.In conclude,basic science classes should be taken by university student for the significant role basic science played.We can predit that in the future,there’re more high-skilled gurantees who are talented in further researth and easy to get used to the speedy society.

腾格里旅狼UID: 2573178

246# 秋江暝泊 Sorry,这两天忙，没顾得上上寄托，耽误您时间，抱歉……
你的文章句子不错，很华丽，但是却没有什么实际内容，比如第二段：Knowing events happening around the world will help you develop a thorough understanding of your study or your work and consequently make wise decisions。这句应该是主旨句，但是你写明了为什么，却没有解释为什么，全部是反问句，你难道考官给你答案？
不要只浮在表面，而要深入议论。

tracyzhaoUID: 2465329

185里的题 麻烦LZ看下 哎 第一次T的作文只有20分 两个fair 现在正在努力准备二战
112. Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age and should spend most of their time on school studies. Others believe that young children should spend most of their time playing. Compare these two views. Which view do you agree with? Why?

There is a general discussion on the topic of which is better that the children should begin the formal education at a early age and spend most of their time on school studies or they should spend their most time playing. Most people hold the standpoint that children should go to school early as this is the fundamental of their future. On the contrary, others claim that children should spend more time playing when they are young since it do good for their growth. From my point of view, I agree the former more because education is a fundamental task crucial for generation.

There are numerous reasons why children should go to school early and begin their study. I would here explain some significant ones on this. First of all, education is the most important thing for a human, and the earlier children go to school, the more will they learn. Nowadays, you can see almost no such parents who leave their children at home instead of taking them to school when children on the age of six of seven which we call it schooling-age. In the school, children can learn lots of things, such as communication with others, knowledge about their daily life and so all. When there are some problems, teachers and other students can give a hand to children, teaching them some basic life skills. Of cause, the school give a stage to show children's ability on varies sides, like the leading ability, sport ability, which will be a fortune for child in the future.

In addition, another equally important reason on this is that it can bring friends for children. There is a particular example can show this point which from my own experience. Lin Tao, who is my classmate for nine years, is my best friend. We met each other at the primary school, and now we are almost graduate from college. In the life, we not only play together but also help each other when there are some difficult problems that it is the friendship makes us hand in hand. So if I was not go to school in my early age, maybe we can not meet each other forever.

I do not deny that spending more time when children in their early age has some advantages. Playing games provide a way to show children's creation and can help them develop the potential of study in the future. Maybe, this would gives them a wonderful and happy child-life. Nevertheless, the advantages of receive education early is obvious when all aspects are taken into consideration.

From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw a conclusion that for children receiving formal education at a very early age and spending most of their time on school studies is a better choice than spending most of their time playing. Of cause, we do not mean that children should not playing games, while under the right direction from parents playing game can be a great way of relaxation during their study.

芝星芋泥UID: 2604014

很有毅力的LZ.加油。向你学习。

芝星芋泥UID: 2604014

第一次写。用了45MIN。请多多指教！谢谢。
A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Why?

The circumstance of production filed is better than before. That is why an increasing amount of factory comes into work. It remains an issue that where is an empty room available for a factory. Is it in the city urban or country? Or is it beside a community or in a business district?
In my opinion, I will not agree a factory to be built beside my community. I can’t deny that a plant near your community can improve the standard of living. A new factory is often lack of employees. If you were searching for a job, you would choose a company by examine its location, and its condition in the field. Then the factory is a good choice. That it is large proves its contribution in its field. Also, the factory is only a 5-min work to your community. If only you answer, and pass the factory’s recruitment .you can replace the time you spend on road by knitting, sports etc.

It is said that “every coin has two side.” It is true of many projects, including a factory near your community.
It will absolutely bring more transportation to your community. It is the employees of the factory that are willing to arrive at the factory. Just imagine, varieties of vehicles roar besides you. How noisy it would be!The noisy atmosphere may disturb your sweet sleep, literally mess your life.

What’s more, the factory may stand in your sight. My sister owns a little apartment in the city urban, through which you could have a wonderful view of the Hangpu River. However，last year, A factory was built in front of the apartment. All of us were sorry for it. The factory just stands between the apartment and the Huangpu River.

After the consideration of the noise of the factory which will also screen the view, I am against building a factory beside my community.

芝星芋泥UID: 2604014

发在帖里没人采。再发一遍吧。

cocolinkinUID: 2333716

248# 腾格里旅狼

楼主辛苦了：）我下礼拜就要考了，如果方便的话帮我看看好么？在247楼。
麻烦了~敬礼！

macangUID: 2629723

楼主大大！第一次写用了好久，请一定要给我看看呀，谢谢了！
You have decided to give several hours of your time each month to improve the community where you live, what is one thing you will do to improve your community?
Recently the problem of environment protection has been in the limelight. When ask about which thing I will do to improve our community each month, I believe the answer depends on numerous factors such as what problems the community faces with. Concerning my community’s severe environmental situation, from my point of view, I am willing to do some cleaning each month to improve my community.
First of all, the severity of my community plays a very difficult situation in front of us on account for several factories’ establishment. There are hundreds and thousands tons of waste piles near our houses and our nearby rivers are turning into black dishes gradually. We must take measures to protect our circumjacent environment, otherwise we will soon find ourselves living in a barren wasteland. So I will use my spare time to do some cleaning each month, for example, pick up litter and throw it into the rubbish car. A regular cleaning is essential to make my community more beautiful and attractive.
Secondly, a clean environment can benefit residents’ health. As we all know, air and water are the most crucial factors of our human beings. But when they are polluted, how can we live a healthy and comfortable life? We will be vulnerable to a couple of disorders even fatal diseases, won’t we? According a new survey, people who are suffered from respiratory diseases have dramatically increased to 15 percent comparison with 2005 . Last month, an old man is poisoned by reason of drinking water. Hence, it is urgent to do some cleaning to keep good health.
Last but not least, I chose to do some cleaning since an excellent environment can reduce pressure. Many residents commute to the city for work, and find that stress of their jobs, combined with the intensity of urban life, is very tiring. However, when they witness a picturesque and beautiful insight around them, they will inclined to walk though the community no one’s lunch break to experience nature, furthermore, they will feel refreshed and rejuvenated after they go back to work. A clean community provides a much-needed relieving place, which is of great importance to people.
In conclusion, I firmly believe it is undoubted for me to spare no effort to protect my community’s environment. And a regular cleaning is the most prominent and effective mean, which can make my community more beautiful, keep people in good health and reduce pressure. And eventually, improve my community.

腾格里旅狼UID: 2573178

247# cocolinkin 我很喜欢你的第一句举例，简短切题。但是你在写文章的时候请注意一下逻辑联系：比如第二段，你才说：“Every major have the knowledge built with basic science so we can`t have a complete view of our own major without the understanding of it". 但是你接着却说“My sister is so intelligented in her own major ”既然她不精通基础，又怎么会intelligented in her own major？既然大家都用模版，文章的结构也差不多，词汇量也差不多，为什么有的人能拿27-30，有的人却只能拿到17-20，或者更低？这既是答案“细节”。注意一些逻辑关系还有例子的细节，你这篇文章总体看起来很不错，可能能拿到26-27分，但是就是因为这个细节，可能就直接给到18-20了……