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Issues 177
Topic：The study of an academic discipline alters the way we perceive the world. After studying the discipline, we see the same world as before, but with different eyes.
对于一门学科的研究会改变我们对世界的看法。在学习这门学科之后，我们看到的世界一如既往，但是我们本身的角度和眼光已然不同。

这个第一篇写了一天（虽然提纲想了很久，但始终不深刻，逻辑还会很简单），第二天自己改了一下。恳请各位大侠指出有任何关于提纲或者语法上的错误 和不足之处。
拍砖莫留情 O(∩_∩)O~ 感激不尽~

I strongly agree with the assertion that by studying an academic discipline we alter the way we perceive the world. And moreover, we attain, at the meantime, a more mature and profound view of the world around us, as well as its relationship with ourselves. Several examples that aptly illustrate this point of involve the fields of nature science, philosophy and social science.



One reason for my fundamental agreement with the speaker is that by studying particular discipline we can obviously learn more knowledge about the outside world we live and thus gain a much more positive and accurate perception of the world. First, let's take the Copernican theory as an example. Copernicus established the heliocentric theory and drastically cast down the Geocentric Theory which had been held for a long time as a granted truth. For his very advanced theory, people began to realize the reality that our earth is just a single rotational globe orbiting the sun in the endless universe. Another well known example is that people find out that many diseases are actually attributed to kinds of viruses by studying the bacteriological theory of Pasteur. From innumerable examples like these, we can see how our view angles are changed by the studies.

Another reason that I assent to the speaker's opinion involves human’s self-awareness. Rather, we are able to take a further cognizance of ourselves and the human nature by the study particularly in the field of physiology and history. For example, through the study of human physiology Freud found out that the sub-consciousness hugely existed in our mind, which was far beyond our original imagination. What's more, during the Renaissance the great revival of arts--painting, craving, music, and so forth--broke through the traditional religious thought. And thus, as the spirit of humanity and self-expression were actively encouraged since then, a new page in human history was opened. It is thus clear that the pursuit of knowledge plays a positive role in the human self development.

What's more important, the increasingly comprehensive interdisciplinary knowledge system--such as environmental science and social science--equips people to better understand the relationship between human and the outside world. The experts in the field of environmental science can tell us how the ecological balance is destroyed dramatically by our modern technology. While the social science professors can help to instruct the way feasible way to
protect this previous balance, like advisably changing throwaway life types. In the process of in-depth study about these complicated interrelations between human and society, it is ultimately learnt that we are used to be so overconfident about conquer the nature and ignorant of the power of the nature.

All in all, the speaker’s statement is fundamentally correct. Through the study of academic disciplines, we can cheerfully find out that we know the world and ourselves better than before and which make us dealing with the complicated relation between human and the nature better. And then, lead our world to a much more brilliant future with an improved sight of view. (507 words)

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字数太少了，全部都是正面的观点。
看我的提纲~
1 确实改变对世界的看法  knowledge is the window to the world. 1 更加客观 现代医学对于疾病的解释  2 更加全面各学科的综合发展使人类考虑问题更加周全        
2 光有学科的研究 未必能够带来认知的改变  1 时代的束缚  日心说的遭遇 2 个人的因素 儿童年龄不够成熟如何深入了解
3 但是世界本身并不是一如既往的 也被学科的发展而改变  1 世界本身就不是静止不动的  2 科技带动发展  交通工具  通信技术

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