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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:University students should take part-time jobs.6 e5 G% `2 u" |7 \" D7 O$ [+ d
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There is much discussion today about whether university students should take part-time jobs. In my opinion, I strongly recommend college students to do part-time jobs in their spare time.9 h: D, s8 e2 s3 z% b) a
good start, simple,clear and accurate. Maybe you can add some different opinions of two sides, which may enrich your standpoint.
There is an old saying,the early bird catches the worm. In order to become more competitive after graduation, it is better for young guys to prepare it before hand( good, I haven't see it before). University is not only a place for students having (to have)courses everyday, but also a stage for students to get in touch with the society. Only the smart students will recognize they should spare their time on taking lessons from society. I think this sentence is too absolute, For example, my friend John, who are(is) the one( of the)best studentz(s) in my class, started to do part-time jobs since his second year at univerisity. When the other classmates began to find intern or part-time jobs, he had already obtain a lot of working experience. At that time, Microsoft company needed some interns, and some students had send(sent) resume and few of them were asked to go to an additional interview. Finally, John were(was) the only one getting the admission and that must atribute to his various and abundant working experience. Actually, students who have no working experience before graduation will definitely encounter a lot of frustation in their job-hunting. Due to the lack of working experience, a young guy who knows nothing about work will fail to co-operate with the others. Whereas some one who has sufficient working experience will get into a groove quickly. If I am an employer, I will definitely employ the latter. And there might be no company would take the risks of hiring an green hand. + f7 e# E+ |
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As an adolescent, university students should start an independent life. And that means, they should try to raise themselves by their own hands. Part-time job is a prevalent way for them to earn money. That does not means university students should make a lot of money from part-jobs, but at least the salary can cover part of their tuition or living expenses. Besides, students will get more self-confidence from making money. They will feel more satisfaction when spent money earned by themselves.At the beginning of this paragraph, you may add some conjuctions like :second
Moreover, doing certain part-jobs provides university student with much experience to make a decision about their long term career. By participating in some jobs, students would obtain further understanding about these vacations, which can help them make much clear definitions of their position, and then find out what kind of career is suitable for them. If one didn't do part-jobs before graduation, they would probably make the wrong choice.0 _7 c, h* _' ^, W( @' H6 p
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All in all, from what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that university students should do some part time jobs.
I think the whole framwork of the passage is clear and your argument is well developed.
good luck to you in the exam! |
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