【DriftKing】总结经验教训，再战托福日志

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8.30失望而归，要总结经验教训，找到不足，重整旗鼓，来月再战。。。



阅读，本来以为20分了，因为刚进去是在状态不佳发烧，晕车，胃疼，别人都是tshirt，我长袖衬衣还觉得冷，而且不停的有同学从旁边过。。。不过结果还好，比预想的好，不过不能松懈。
决定仍然保证一天至少3篇的量，总结错误的题和常用的过渡词，地道的词句为后边的口语作文打基础



听力，这回惨案了8分，虽然本来我的听力都不怎样，但是在下边做练习的时候也是稳定在18-22分之间的，8分。。。比我裸考都低，不过天灾是无法改变的，也是躲不了的，还是从自己找原因吧。。。
首先要解决的是听懂的问题，虽然大部分都能听懂，但是某些连读，或者突然的语气变化还是能打乱原有的听力状态，所以决定坚持听写来解决这个问题
其次就是听内容了，这个感觉还是有熟能生巧的问题的，经过上次的准备，起码自己知道每个conversion和lecture讲了什么是会出考题的，突然的爆料，joke。。。也是会出考题的，所以一定要多听。
并且这次练习，要按照ETS的初衷来要求。一定要听出讲座的大概内容，组织结构，思想的连接方式，细节，要听出main idea, major points, important detials.就好像听课一样，一定要把每个要点都听得清清楚楚，而且听力好了，无疑后边的项目也会更有信心。

准备用一整下午做1-2套考题，并坚持听写，其他的小时间也要塞上耳机，算是给自己创造语言环境吧




口语，因为考前2周强化了下，而且考场上还偷听到了1-2题，把观点和例子都写在了纸上，说的时候仅仅是加上一些过渡词而已，所以说的非常流利非常有内容，无奈还是limited，开始的时候怨天尤人，但是仔细想想，还是有好多同学都是拿了高分的，而且美国人对自己的母语进行评判应该也是比较公正的，总结客观因素没有用，还是从自己身上找原因吧，仔细研读下OG先
1-2 四分评判标准
Delivery: generally well-paced flow(fluid expression). Speech is clear. It may include minor lapses, or minor difficulties with pronunciation or intonation patterns, which do not affect overall intelligibility.
Language use: the response demonstrates effective use of grammar and vocabulary. It exhibits a fairly high degree of automaticity with good control of basic and complex structures(as appropriate). Some minor(or systematic)errors are noticeable but do not obscure meaning.
Topic development: response is sustained and sufficient to the task. It is generally well developed and coherent; relationships between ideas are clear(or clear progression of ideas)

二分的
Delivery: speech is basically intelligible, though listener effort is needed because of unclear articulation. Awkward intonation, or choppy rhythm pace;（我应该有这方面的问题，因为英语启蒙老师是个大舌头） meaning may be obscured in places.
Language use: the response demonstrates limited range and control of grammar and vocabulary（单词和语法是我的弱项，可能自己感觉挺好，但是在作为专家的美国人面前很可能缺点暴露无遗）. These limitations often prevent full expression of ideas. For the most part, only basic sentence structures are used successfully and spoken with fluidity. (要求句式多变，多用些复杂句型)Structures and vocabulary may express mainly simple(short) and/or general propositions, with simple or unclear connections made among them (serial listing, conjunction, juxtaposition)要求句式多变，不能只会简单基本句型，要灵活运用过渡词，过渡句表达转折，递进，并列等关系
Topic development: the response is connected to the task, though the number of ideas presented or the development of ideas is limited mostly basic ideas are expressed with limited elaboration (details and support). At times relevant substance may be vaguely expressed or repetitious. Connections of ideas may be unclear.

3-4-5-6 四分评判细则
Delivery: speech is generally clear, fluid and sustained. It may include minor lapses or minor difficulties with pronunciation or intonation. Pace may vary at times as speaker attempts to recall information. Overall intelligibility remains high.
清晰，流利，连续。允许有小的lapse，发音和语调问题。允许因为思考而导致语速有变，总体的可理解性要高
Language use: the response demonstrates good control of basic and complex grammatical structures that allow for coherent efficient(automatic) expression of relevant ideas. Contains generally effective word choice. Though some minor(or systematic) errors or imprecise use may be noticeable, they do not require listener effort(or obscure meaning)
证明可以good control 基本的高级的语法结构，用来连贯的，高效的表达相关内容。
Topic development: the response presents a clear progression of ideas and conveys the relevant information required by the task. It includes appropriate detail, though it may have minor errors or minor omissions.
清晰的表达idea的发展和convey任务需要的相关信息。包括合适的细节。

二分的，应该对应的就是limited了
Delivery: speech is clear at times, though it exhibits problems with pronunciation, intonation or pacing and so may require significant listener effort. Speech may not be sustained at a consistent level throughout. Problems with intelligibility may obscure meaning in places(but not throughout)
Language use: the response is limited in the range and control of vocabulary and grammar demonstrated(some complex structures may be used, but typically contain errors)这也是我的缺点，作文里也是. This results in limited or inaccurate connections. Automaticity of expression may be evident only at the phrasal level
Topic development: the response conveys some relevant in formation but is clearly in complete of inaccurate. It is incomplete if it omits key ideas, makes vague reference to key ideas, or demonstrates limited development of important information. An inaccurate response demonstrates misunderstanding of key ideas from the stimulus. Typically, ideas expressed may not be well connected or cohesive so that familiarity with the stimulus is necessary in order to follow what is being discussed.

看着这么多，感觉自己的弱点主要在
~词汇和句子不能灵活的运用，仅仅停留在能把意思表达出来而缺少变换和和谐的衔接。所以要扩大词汇量，并且要继续收集地道的句式句法。
~另外因为初中养成的坏毛病，语音语调也是问题，需要解决
~继续精炼口语1-2的段子，多注意句式变化，词汇，和过度。



作文也是一个问题主要是综合写作，总是limited
继续看OG
5分标准
A response at this level successfully selects the important information from the lecture and coherently and accurately presents this information in relation to the relevant information presented in the reading. The response is well organized and occasional language errors that are present do not result in inaccurate or imprecise presentation of content or connections.
首先要挑出lecture中的重点 然后coherently and accurately和reading中的相关信息建立连接。 Well organized, accurate imprecise

在看2分的
A response at this level contains some relevant information from the lecture, but is marked by significant language difficulties or by significant omission or inaccuracy of important ideas from the lecture or in the connections between the lecture and the reading; a response at this level is marked by one or more of the following:
The response significantly misrepresents or completely omits the overall connection between the lecture and the reading.
The response significantly omits or significantly misrepresents important points made in the lecture.
The response contains language errors or expressions that largely obscure connections or meaning at key junctures, or that would likely obscure understanding of key ideas for a reader not already familiar with the reading and the lecture
非常头疼的觉得当初除了第三条听不太清以外，就应该没有什么毛病了，多出来7分钟检查，应该没有什么语病。。。
还是停止怀疑ETS，接下来还是多训练听力和记笔记。

独立写作
5分
An essay at this level largely accomplishes all of the following:
Effectively addresses the topic and task 应该就是完成要求，不要跑题吧
Is well organized and well developed, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplifications, and/or details 很好的组织和展开，要有理有据，要有细节
Displays unity, progression ,and coherence一致，发展，连贯？
Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstration syntactic variety, appropriate word choice, and idiomaticity, though it may have minor lexical or grammatical errors
语言，句法变换，合适的词语选择和idiomaticity

3分的
An essay at this level is marked by one or more of the following:
Addresses the topic and task using somewhat developed explanations, exemplifications, and/or details
Displays unity, progression, and coherence, though connection of ideas may be occasionally obscured
May demonstrate inconsistent facility in sentence formation and word choice that may result in lack of clarity and occasionally obscure meaning
May display accurate but limited range of syntactic structures and vocabulary

我还依稀记记得8.30的题目是Do you agree or disagree that the most important thing that
government can do in improve health care is to clean the environment
我的body的提纲是；
1 的确可以。比如有新鲜的空气，水。。。未污染的食物，这些的确可以改善健康问题
2 但不是他和most，因为其他的也很重要。比如可以搞健康讲座，以此来唤醒群众对健康的重视。以我为例子，我们听力讲座，然后妈妈买了Amway的vitamin C 确实增加了抵抗力，因为我不在经常感冒了
3 甚至可以经常组织些体育活动或者比赛，也可以改善健康问题的。比如我们市每年都举行马拉松，这样首先可以relieve the pressure in the real life，比如老板的抱怨，而且可以get more oxygen, 并且运动可以accelerate the rate of blood这些都有利于健康

感觉内容本身是没有问题的，可能不足还是在语言问题上，不能灵活熟练地运用单词，句法，并且词语贫乏；语法错误也是大问题，现在知道的就是宾语从句和双动词的错误 以后需要注意和加强。

总体来说作文的问题还是听力问题，和语言问题，这是需要注意的方面
为了查漏补缺，花了整整一个下午，相信这样是值得的


最后真的非常感谢妈妈，虽然您不想让我出去，但是却一直支持我；即便我在托福上在这么多跟头，而且总是三心二意的想放弃，但您还是一直鼓励我坚持下去，勇敢向前，没有您我真的很难坚持到现在；同样感谢爸爸，爷爷奶奶和姥爷。

也要感谢蜗牛，gla，小籁，08，小北等斑竹和呆呆，Mosan,葡萄，MVT，文斌，小猪 ，破碎等版友
革命尚未成功，同志仍需努力。

想来自己真傻，本来就是一分耕耘一分收获，竟然还会相信风水，命运。。。在这上边也费了些感情
这次要努力通过100，虽然不大可能，但是心有多大，舞台就可能有多大，到时候在有些天灾人祸估计也就80了。。。

作文总贴https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=981274&highlight=

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积累的一些词汇 短语
a dime a dozen（多到不值钱）
time-sucking and stressful（耗时和压力大）
waves striking the shore
reductions in tension
changed changing movable dynamic
saturate soak
flat land平原
be tipped into a potentially dangerous state
evolve out of从…逐渐形〔发展〕成
crucial重要
因为：because,for,since
apparently, essentially, meanwhile
alternatively另外一种选择，情况
substantiate= support
setting environment situation place
salient 显著的, 重要的, 主要的
no more than=just ，仅仅
be good at, be adept in
plight境况，困境
folk人 人们（可数）=guy，mankind（这个貌似较正式）
via通过经由=through
produce=engender
pertain to=relate to
enroll登记，参加，加入
precariously = dangerous
alternative health goods (非主流保养品？还是保养品？)
seem effortless  很轻松
to be certain
unassuming 谦逊的; 不装腔作势的; 不招摇的
compose= make up of= constitute= form
affluent 富裕的，富足的
political clout 政治影响，次clout常表示政治方面的影响
capture one's imagination=? wed in people's mind?
mind-boggling  难以置信的，惊人的
solicit vt&vi 恳求，乞求，请求
thereby, thus, accordingly, consequently, by that means, therefore, consequently, hence
each possessing its own special set of
characteristics
refer to 提及，暗指，有关，查阅，归因于，求助
tenacity
8.5
总结下今天遇到的好词难词：
solidly adv. 坚定地，不动摇的；
fickle dip devise seek demise ingenuity hectic
8.6
mankind人类
embark upon 开始
be about to
sea gull 海鸥
cryptic
creature
futile; useless
eminence
angel
patriotic

Succumbed to =died as a result of

Came to fruition=materialized

Unprecedented=unusual

总结些词汇：foster 培养，养育；vt&vi 收养养育 cultivate adopt

Conduit; eon; enmity; hatred; foster

把握（机遇）: grasp of
上瘾的人，发烧友hobbyist， addict
Institute 建立

Tough, strict;  

keep track of 与…失去〔保持〕联系; 了解〔忘记；

statutory， legal

Eventually, finally

Divine adj 极好的，vt 猜测，预测

Scheme,  plan,

Precipitation

Vigorous adj 有力的，精力充沛的

Cap vt, 笼罩，覆盖；胜过

detach

Costume

Dimension, size

Interpret, explain

Convection

Seem as, recognize as

impulse(n.), stimulus(n.) stimulate(vt.), urge(vt.)

Event, result

at various times， different periods

Perpetual, endure(前者形容词 后者动词)

Transitory, immediate

Variable, changeable

Minute(adj, 极小的，极少的；极详细/准确/精确)

Compensate vt/vi 补偿，报酬

Line up

Genuine, real

Simultaneously, at the same time

Incorporate

Indigenous 土生土长的， 天生的

Seamlessly, perfectly (二者稍有差距，前者是无缝地，顺畅地，准确无误地)

Scatter， set apart, detach

Global warming may also cause a rise in sea level by melting polar ice caps. A rise in sea level would accelerate coastal erosion and inundate islands and low-lying coastal plains, some of which are densely populated.

递进：furthermore, moreover, what is more

主要原因是：The major contributing factor is ...

Convert to, change to

Within, include,二者在句子结构变化后和转换

Climb, increase, heighten, rise(vi,注意是不及物)

Impact, influence

Sector, part, department

Broaden one's horizon

gradually

relatively

barely

eliminate

nevertheless adv. 仍然，然而，不过  conj. 尽管如此，然而

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加油哈！

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谢谢两位版主的鼓励

上 天文 3

This does not have anything to do with the lecture doctor Brown, it is just something I was wondering about

I'm always glad undertain(to entertain) questions

But(what) I want to know is, with all our space exploration, (aren't)Astrona(o)mers concerned that was polluting space? you know with spacecrafts and sattelltes

That is (an) interesting question, while(well) first of all, it is important to understand that space is not perstain(that pristine) as you might think, more than a thousand tons of dibree(debris) under(enter) the earth's atmosphere every single day

what, spacecraft that(do not need that much) gabage?

No, but there are meteorite(roid) entering our atmosphere almost constantly, you are familiar with what the moon's surface looks like right?

But we do not have (these) craters on earth, I do not understand

Remember, the moon lack that(of) atmosphere means that even small meteoroid make craters. But most of the meteorite that hit the earth atmosphere melt or brake up into the air

Calls meteos?(causing meteorite) The straight(streaks) of the light we see are(is that) meteoroid breaking up. Is that(isn't it)?

Yeah, and getting back to your question about pollution, that is one way we can deal with the debris of satellites and spacecraft, the truth is we do have a lot of urben(orbiting) debris, and tranveling at 10 or 20 (thousand)miles per hour

Really? I would not want to cerly that(collide with) anything going that fast

It is real danger for spacecraft. but we can dispose the debris by simply sending it back into the earth's atmosphere

Oh, so the debris was just burned up. Well, thanks a lot DR. Brown.

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上 人类 1

I read that the prehistoric people has(had) settling(settled in) villages in start farming when they can no longer survive just by hunting and gathering, the idea was they pushed off the best land and as the population grew, most of day(likely) they have(had) noticed that some seads sprouted(sprang out) when they drop them, so when the prehistoric people had to move to that areas(less productive area)? They settled in permanent villages there and started planting seeds to keep from starving

That was the thinking until a few(two) years ago when archaeologists found evidence that goes against that theory. The new idea (is) that farmming developing(ed) in the richest land areas, and that(the) people who started it won't been threaten by starvation. Apparently sucessful hunter getherers have already(删) living in villages long before they started cultivating crops these prehistoric（this story） villages just wonder if they(just wanted to) have more stable food supply

What? you mean that people settled in villages while they have(where they were) still hunting and gathering while some(wild food) to eat? how did archaeologist comes to that conclusion

Well, one way was a new more accurate method has（that） dating a small piece of something like a grains of corner(or) wheat. You know earlier achaeologist could not date something that small, so they have to date that chukle around it to get (say the charcoal around it to get the estimated age)

So with the new techniche(que) for determine the age of tiny sample, they found out that the grain was older than they have thought?

No just the opposite, they found out (it) was much younger, so that man dermencation(meant the mastication) of the grains probably occur long after people had began to live in villages.

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修改第5次作文，谢谢呆呆和文斌 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-987214-1-1.html

As the development of economy, people became more wealthy than the past, so they have more opportunities to go out side the city for their vacation. Someone recognize it is better to join in a team followed by a tour guide while others prefer to visit somewhere by themselves, which one is a better choice? I think it is depend on the objective where people plan to visit.

Take myself as an example, when I go to the famous historic spots, I would like to join in a team with a guide. Because s/he can tell me what had happened in this area, why people give this name to the temple, which great person have also went to there also and how they express their feeling... These stories are interesting.
However, if I go to there alone, I will miss these interesting things for regret.

On the other hand, If the place is produced by nature, I would like to go without strangers. For reasons that there may some miracles where I would like to take a lot of pictures, and take a seat in order to feel the power of the nature. A efficient schedule and pacific atmosphere is necessary at that time. That is to say, I want arrange the time by myself, I go when I want to go, stay when I need to stay, any introduction to me is unnecessary.

All in all, people should choose the right way for traveling which is depends on the destination. They need a tour guide to give them additional information which can not receive by themselves, and the guide could help them to make their journey more significant; to the opposite, a ciceroni is not necessary when people coming into the nature, they can arrange their time more efficient than the team which is a better way to feel the beauty of our nature.

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集结号听写， 继续撞墙 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... age=5#pid1773011349

This is the second half of the special 65 cites of psychology of the tornadosto to see the first half? Go to doctor come slash port cast and look at under 60 kinds sike and you will see there. Jacky will the from the university of 30 human reactions to sever storms, and this summer I called up to her was traveling along the said votes the large study of tornado in history, start previous research she has done in fluctive areas. One idea she was exploring is how well the local knowledge match the information based on scientic study, some knowledge matched well and some bored on folk lore.

In I suppose to some people in diffirent times to own said that they do not worry too much of tornado because they were the either the other sides of the river the own the side of the river and the very strong feem around the believe that tornados follow geolografic features or do not go over underlying to rain, for example, when all of us meet psychological this they say this followed science tells them right now there is no basis for those believes that torando will be able to whatever to see the tornado is produced, that tornado will follow this, it's pass and regardless the features

so the accurate see of local knowledge that have one hand it it is a lot local knowledge but the accurate see is not that good yet or what is to say kind of 55

I think you are very mixed because we are expocen to somepeople who for example work farming for many years it's clear they are understanding of their local environment actual environment is very very good, seems to be mixture experience education and instinct but there is people have very confidence and they have be
said that this is born by experice they know how to react and when to react. these are the stories about for example the rivers, different groups of people, this is why they feeled so open for research because there is so many things that conflicting that little understood there is majority of understanding of human behavior in this contact since either been brought about from other contacts, which in many cases may prive to be very valuable or escape some assumptions and those assumptions can also be well full  assumptions very common assumptions, but my experience being that these assumptions can not easy goting so far and there is really needs for far more

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分析一篇地道的美国文章
http://www.economist.com/businessfinance/displaystory.cfm?story_id=13986299

In a guest article Justin Lin,() the chief economist at the World Bank, argues that low-income countries need to make small,() local banks the mainstay of their financial systemstopic: low-income countries need small, local banks as the mainstay of their financial systems

FIXING finance is easier if you have a clear idea what it is for. What matters most is setting up a financial sector（department, institution, entity） that can serve the competitive sectors of an economy. In many poorer countries, that means focusing on activities() dominated by small-scale manufacturing, farming and services firms. The size and sophistication of financial institutions and markets in the developed world are not appropriate in low-income markets. Small local banks(双adj.修饰n.) are the best entities for providing financial services to the enterprises and households that are most important in terms of comparative advantage—be they asparagus farmers in Peru, cut-flower companies in Kenya or garment factories in Bangladesh.
topic: a clear idea of why you fixing finace is necessary. You need a special department for finance.

The experiences of countries such as Japan, South Korea and China are telling. Those countries managed to avoid financial crises(地道的“经济危机”) for long stretches of their development as they evolved from low-income to middle- and high-income countries. It helped greatly that they adhered to(adhere to, insist to, persist in坚持) simple banking systems (rather than rushing to(着急做...) develop their stockmarkets and integrate into international financial networks) and did not liberalise their capital accounts until they became more advanced. The experience of the United States is also instructive(educational). Hulking national banks and equity markets become important only when a country becomes more advanced and when large capital-intensive(传说中的资金密集型) firms dominate the economy. The rise of the New York Stock Exchange（又一个传说） occurred only after the creation of large-scale industrial firms at the close of the 19th century. For the early labour-intensive phase of America’s economic development, local banks were dominant.
topic：use the sucessful examples of Japan, south Korea, China, US to evident the truth----we should develop our economics from the low level to the high level.

Governments and the international financial institutions(传说) that help them should resist the temptation to strive for “modern” stockmarkets in the early stages of a country’s development. Efforts to create African stockmarkets, for example, have not yet borne（bear结出果实） much fruit. There are relatively few listed shares in the stockmarkets of sub-Saharan countries. Excluding South Africa, the annual value of traded shares relative to GDP in Africa is below 5% (see chart). In Latin America and the Caribbean the figure is less than 10%; in the former communist countries of Europe and Central Asia it is less than 15%. The comparable figure in 2007 was 79% in Denmark, 207% in Spain and 378% in Britain.
topic: A Country should not strive for "modern" stockmarkets at the very beginning.

Stockmarkets are unlikely to be a major force in poor countries in the near future(近期). Microfinance （小额信贷）companies and other non-bank financial institutions will play a more important role in financing poor households（低收入家庭？）. And stockmarkets are not the best conduit for providing finance to the small- and medium-sized businesses that characterise the early stages of countries’ economic development. Instead, the banks will be much more critical when it（指代conduit?） comes to financing companies.
topic: Stockmarkets are not the most important force when a poor Country in the early stages of development

But gigantic banks are not the way to go. In Africa and other parts of the developing world, relatively large foreign banks that were set up in the colonial era have long played a role. But these institutions tend to serve relatively wealthy customers. Smaller domestic banks are much better suited to providing finance to the small businesses that dominate the manufacturing, farming and services sectors in developing countries. There is evidence to suggest that growth is faster in countries where these kinds of banks have larger market shares(市场份额), in part because of improved financing for just these kind of enterprises.
topic: Some smaller local domestic banks are more useful than gigantic ones, for reasons that they serive for the Country's growth

It is true that bigger banks can exploit economies of scope and scale that make them more diversified, thus enhancing systemic stability. But local banks are stable in a different way. In America the country’s 7,630 community banks have so far been only mildly(不严重) affected by the financial crisis as they have continued to deal with the same small, local clients that they have had for years.
topic:even bigger banks is also important but domestic ones make our economic development more stable.

Governments in low-income countries should recognise the strategic importance of small, private domestic banks. They should also carry out(perform, implement, execute执行) some fundamental reforms(revolution). On the demand side of the equation, entrepreneurs in developing economies need to be able to signal more easily that they are creditworthy. Sustained efforts to improve credit and collateral registries offer large pay-offs. Credit registries enable first-time entrepreneurs to document their personal credit histories and share them with lenders. Collateral registries enable lenders to verify that assets such as property(asset>property) and vehicles have not already been pledged(enture, guarantee) by the borrower to secure past loans. Transparent and efficient(简单有效？) court procedures allow lenders to seize collateral in the event of loan defaults.
topic: some basic revolution is needed

Step changes
On the supply side, underachieving banks, be they large or small, should be rooted out through merger or liquidation. In many developing countries, supervisory authorities find it difficult to intervene and dispose of troubled banks’ assets quickly. Supervisors in some countries face legal challenges from the owners of such banks, sometimes long after they have left office. All this impedes the efficient exit and entry of institutions that make for a vibrant local banking sector. Failing local banks should be acquired by stronger local banks or liquidated if no such purchaser can be found. After liquidations well-capitalised new banks should be allowed to enter the sector.

Facilitating the creation of new local banks and improving the methods for intervening to deal with troubled banks will encourage competition and provide healthier incentives. That will help banks promote the private-sector-led growth that will be crucial to recovery from the current financial crisis. Leave the developed markets to worry about how to reform their highly evolved financial systems. To make sustained progress in lifting the weight of the extreme poverty that will remain after the crisis has subsided, low-income countries need to make their financial institutions small and simple.

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哈哈 下雨天 我喜欢
细节方面还是待加强，尤其是单词的拼写

When you get caught in the dark world(a downpour), you probably do not think about the size of the raindrops that sought(assault) you if(as) you run for cover, but physicists do, and they (hava) comes to the conclusion that the drops hit on the ground or your head, or(are) the shattered remains of bigger drops and(that) fell from the clouds.

Raindrops come (in a ) variety of sciences(size) even from(within) the same storm. and scientists used to think to get the kind of distribution, raindrop must crushion to(crash into) each other on the way down. breaking up into smaller droplets or coerlese(coalescing) into larger ones. Now a team of France(French) scientists (has)produces high speed fullage(footage) of falling water droplets. And they find droplets(drops of ) different demetions(dimensions) do not require collision, they come from the fragmentation of individual isolated droplets, their reasult appears on lines of general(in the journal) nature physics.

The vedio evidents(ce) review(reveals) some(that) water droplets first fleat melt(flatten out as) they fall.and (as) these pan cakes(plummeting pancakes) get wilder and thinner. They eventually capture air. falling(forming what look) like lillte plastic glowing(grocery) bags flowing(floating) in the breaze(a breeze). When the bad get bigger(删) enough they pop, and you last(are left) wondering why you can never remmember your umbrella

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I have already finished the analysis of an economic report which is talked about the importance of the small, local, fundermental financial sectors. Enlarge its scope, this theory is also suited in personal development. The most crucial thing is the basic thing.

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好强悍。。。这文章我都有些看不下去。。。我阅读特别不好，是不是分析这种文章，总结每段的中心思想对提高阅读特别有帮助？？我快被阅读搞疯掉了。。。其他三项我都喜欢练，但是我实在是特怵阅读。。怎么办啊。。。:mad: 9# DriftKing

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14# taoyukun-daidai

其实这是我第一次这么练习 我也是看了别人这么练得才有这种想法的
初衷是看看地道的美语文章，总结下好词好句，相信只有好处没坏处，加油！

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