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发表于 2009-8-11 23:41:01 |只看该作者

本帖最后由 cxy7646 于 2009-8-20 23:25 编辑

迟到了 -_-
8.11  https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=994978&;extra=
8.13  https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=995755&extra= 写得很勉强
8.15  https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=997039&;extra= 晚了晚了
8.20  https://bbs.gter.net/post.php?action=edit&fid=53&tid=998472&pid=1773087081

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发表于 2009-8-11 23:43:12 |只看该作者

本帖最后由 sharklion_hua 于 2009-8-11 23:49 编辑

一点也不会写。。。。。。。而且没思路。看来需要学习一下思路模板。。作文303字。很多废话。
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=994983&extra=

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发表于 2009-8-12 10:38:22 |只看该作者

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发表于 2009-8-12 10:40:07 |只看该作者

我下午出去下, 晚的改, 对不住了!:handshake

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发表于 2009-8-12 11:44:21 |只看该作者

报名加入：QQ 414976110
8.30考

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发表于 2009-8-12 12:43:17 |只看该作者

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发表于 2009-8-12 14:02:12 |只看该作者

本帖最后由 STELLA710 于 2009-8-12 14:09 编辑

加入！！！！！！！！！
明天的题目：Some people think it's more important to spend more time working than being with family，你的觀點?8

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发表于 2009-8-12 15:13:31 |只看该作者

37# STELLA710
恩，是的～

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发表于 2009-8-13 10:32:49 |只看该作者

我现在加入行么?我有小组么？

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发表于 2009-8-13 10:40:15 |只看该作者

晚到了，可否加入。

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发表于 2009-8-13 11:00:34 |只看该作者

08、13 作业
英文水平不好，但求提高。望狠批
Working is a mean of making a living. In order to make a life better, we should spend more time in job and work hard. Working is also a way to realize the value of a person himself. As to get a high achievement, we should spend more time in working. When to do the job, we should endeavor to accomplish it best. However, does it mean we should spend more time to work and less time to be with family or other activities? The answer is not.

There is an old saying “No Family, How to be a country.” From it, we can see how importance the family is. Indeed, a family is a strong backup for us. A harmonious family will provide you endless joy. Supposed that a person work all day in the office, what fun does he get in addition to the satisfaction in work? On the contrary, after a busy and tiring day, when you get back to a harmonious home, where you share the things happened in office with your family, you played with them and chatted or relaxed. It is a good way to relaxed yourself after the whole day’s weariness and make yourself a good condition to take tomorrow’s challenge. So, family is a bay for a tired man.

Obviously, having a happy family and working hard can bring out the best for each other. How to balance these two things is the key of it. There is another saying: When you work, work hard. When you play, play it happily. So, we could not just allege that we should spend more time in business than being with family members.

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发表于 2009-8-13 11:06:53 |只看该作者

我现在报名行不？第一次的刚写好，先传上～

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发表于 2009-8-13 15:31:52 |只看该作者

不好意思, 8-11的作文早就写好了,但是老板叫出差突然去了别的地方,没办法....不知道.....先传上来...
我来改楼上的作文,希望有人可以改我的作文....
本人作文水平实在有限,需猛猛猛猛的拍砖呀...
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=995580&extra=

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