ISSUE212 (behaviour类频率排名第二)
- “If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it is justifiable."
ARGUMENT239 (最新JJ排13位)
-The following appeared as an editorial in the local newspaper of Dalton. "When the neighboring town of Williamsville adopted a curfew four months ago that made it illegal for persons under the age of 18 to loiter or idle in public places after 10 p.m., youth crime in Williamsville dropped by 27 percent during curfew hours. In Williamsville's town square, the area where its citizens were once most outraged at the high crime rate, not a single crime has been reported since the curfew was introduced. Therefore, to help reduce its own rising crime rate, the town of Dalton should adopt the same kind of curfew. A curfew that keeps young people at home late at night will surely control juvenile delinquency and protect minors from becoming victims of crime."
重点说一下,如果你从来没有帮别人批改过,先请看一下这个帖子 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-670640-1-1.html
再啰嗦一句,交作业的时候请在作文开头附上你的中文提纲,这样有助于自己和批改的人理清逻辑思路~哈哈~ 交作业日期:2008。8-1。28
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