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下午的计划~~只完成了听力~~不行啊,还要早点起床..今天阅读没做上..晚上就口语了...听写, 作文还没完成...快快吧.

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9.22 工作为了快乐还是MONEY？


Avarice as one of human’s natures always pushes people to make more money. The reason is they consider that being wealthy could assist them to achieve improvement material life. And people, generally do not satisfied with what they already obtained. Some may believe that the aim of working is making more money, however, being happy, for me, it is more significant than anything. So I tend to support that the purpose of working is for happiness.

People would be stressful when busy with working for money. Parts of youngsters, who dream to go travel around the world or purchase luxurious product, have no enough money to achieve it. And they already had plan concerning how to spend. From then on, working diligently has become their main life. Consequently, they miss the best time with family on weekends and vacation; besides, the worse, it could bring negative to their health. One of my friends, planning to purchase large and fancy apartment in a wonderful area and working as a software engineer, already lost much hair. He, most time had to complete a project within a few days following the company. His cell phone should be turned on 24 hours due to in case of emergency from the program. His working position brought him more money than those peer made. However, what he missed in that period could not come back anymore, such as being with family on legal holidays, friends’ weddings and social activities that would introduce him more friends to small flowers together. He felt stressful as the working position gave him much pressure even in his rest time. With no time to enjoy life, however, those people could not carry out their dreams, like global traveling.

Working for happiness can cause a relaxed lifestyle. When humans prefer doing what they like not for money, they will enjoy life deeper. That could bring them brighter world as no more stress from work position. SOHO, self office home office, has become popular among young generation. It means they work at home or are freely from the routine company. They will make money as soon as they do, which not result in time limited as no one manage them directly. The money they make may not as high as those who work only for money, however, the resilient time provide them the opportunity to enjoy with friends and participate into any activities, where they meet new friends from other circle.

To conclude, working for money, probably as many people’s purpose, can only generate disadvantage in life; so working for happiness should be pursued in modern society due to humans need to release themselves.

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Avarice as one of human’s natures always pushes people to make more money. The reason is (is because)they consider that being wealthy could assist them to achieve(直接用improve好了) improvement material life. And people, generally do not satisfied with what they already obtained. Some may believe that the aim of working is making more money, however, being happy, for me, it is more significant than anything. So I tend to support that the purpose of working is for happiness.

People would be stressful when busy with working for money. Parts of youngsters, who dream to go travel around the world or purchase luxurious product, have no enough money to achieve it. And they already had plan concerning how to spend. From then on, working diligently has become their main life. Consequently, they miss the best time with family on weekends and vacation; besides, the worse, it could bring negative to their health. One of my friends, planning to purchase large and fancy apartment in a wonderful area and working as a software engineer, already lost much hair. He, most time(in most time) had to complete a project within a few days following the company(following the company是想说遵守公司的规定吧，其实不用说了，你的作文不存在字数问题，说这些没用的话增加你用错词的风险). His cell phone should be turned on 24 hours due to in case of emergency from the program. His working position brought him more money than those peer made.(这三句都是he或者his做主语，适当可以改变下句子的结构，比如说用被动) However, what he missed in that period could not come back anymore, such as being with family on legal holidays, friends’ weddings and social activities that would introduce him more friends to small flowers(to small flowers是什么意思？) together. He felt stressful as the working position gave him much pressure even in his rest time. With no time to enjoy life, however(这里没有转折的关系), those people could not carry out their dreams, like global traveling.

Working for happiness can cause a relaxed lifestyle. When humans prefer doing what they like not for money, they will enjoy life deeper. That could bring them (to a) brighter world as no more stress from work position. SOHO, self office home office, has become popular among young generation. It means (that) they work at home or are freely from the routine company. They will make money as soon as they do, which not(never) result(s) in time limited as no one manage them directly. The money they make may not (be) as high(much，salary才可以high) as those who work only for money, however, the resilient time provide them (with, provide with)the opportunity to enjoy with friends and participate into any activities, where they meet new friends from other circle.

To conclude, working for money, probably as many people’s purpose, can only generate disadvantage in life; so working for happiness should be pursued in modern society due to humans need to release themselves.

逻辑错误比以前少了。在用词方面，有些感觉还是自己发明的，短语可以适当的背一些。另外，不用说太多的废话去拼字数，因为你作文的字数已经比较多了

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Scary music plays a key role in ramping up the fear factor in movies, the song checkàsoundtrack has such an effect as such a fact that I put my hands over my ears during the most frightening moments. Now researchers at televi university report that scary music is even scarier if you shut your eyes.

In research published in the public library of science wineàone, they say it this effect may (fight with the least)lead to (the) new ways to treat neurological diseases. Volunteers listened to hichhuk style music twice, once eyes open and once eyes shut. With eyes closed, their amaze..upàamygdales lit up, that originsàregion of ( their) our brain that processes emotions. Volunteers said they also felt the emotional affects of the music much more in the dark.

Scientists say shutting our eyes might thinkàsynch up different brain activities, allowing our brain to c
better (integrate) (into a greater a) high oràand lows of the emotional experience cold(整了半天是引号). The researchers hope that these findings could listàlead to theiràmusic-based therapist—therapist for conditions like (to) oppression--depression and get fr….-->schizophrenia

As for me during some of this--these scary movie scenes, music does need to--sneak through my hands into my ears, good thing I leave my eyes open.

sneak  潜行, 偷偷

schizophrenia 精神分裂症

synch  同时发生, 一致

amygdale 扁桃体

soundtrack 声带, 电影配乐

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周三学习情况
上午写作文, 改作文.(天气不好就没洗衣服)
下午黄金阅读2篇, 听抄SSS, 刷钻. 强度不够啊
现在跳舞去, 晚间口语作业, 口语点评, 听力.

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早上报个到

上午计划: 口语作业, 作文, 听力
8:30--9:00AM 口语
9:00--10:00AM 作文+改作文
10:00--12:00AM 听力

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9.23 把土地给人用是不是比给濒危动物用更重
It brings a controversial issue that maintains part of land for endanger species since they have been facing with serve situation. Zoologists acclaim that humans should preserve specific area for those animals to survive. With the advent of increasing population and development, however, people also need larger field to live. Therefore, I tend to support that it is not significant to leave land for endanger species.

In fact, territory may not save those species as they died out under various factors. Humans, currently, have already tried several ways to keep endanger animals, such as law against hunting specific species. Even if the endanger species obtained territory, some animals would still disappear. Dinosaur, take an example, has been discussed for decades, the species vanishing without any hints. As one of prominent animals, it is hard to trust that they had not place to live. In modern society, parts of animals are staying in similar situation with dinosaur as it is challengeable to survive under heavy industry environment. Humans could preserve limited area for endanger species; they may still face serious problems, like illegal hunting and global warming, which could cause them to disappear. Consequently, preserved field cannot play a key role for endanger animals.

Larger fields will be occupied in the condition of increasing population and developing industry. In order to reduce environment pollution and save natural resource, renewable energy is becoming popular among nations. Wind power, with its feature locating in an open and large area, as one of essential renewable energy has been adopted by different countries. It produces noise and any living creatures are not available to live around wind power area. Besides, it is tendency that humans will use larger places to achieve development and better living conditions for people. Modern inhabitant district and natural reservation for vacation will be established.

To conclude, to maintain territory for endanger species could not be reasonable in modern situation as humans also need it to gain development. Endanger species, additionally, will be hard to survive under such living condition. Hence, it is not pivotal to preserve land for them.

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“花花”小美女，我提交了作文，没人给我点评，我看见你给别人的点评总是很详细，麻烦你抽空帮我指导一下吧？
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非常感谢

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It brings a controversial issue that maintains part of land for endanger species since they have been facing with serve situation(that 是同位语从句，后面应该是个句子，而不是个定语从句). Zoologists(这里应该是生态学家好点，或者环保主义者) acclaim that humans should preserve specific area for those animals to survive. With the advent of increasing population and development, however, people also need larger field to live. Therefore, I tend to support that it is not significant to leave land for endanger species.


In fact, territory may not save those species as they died out under various factors. Humans, currently, have already tried several ways to keep endanger animals, such as law against hunting specific species. Even if the endanger(ed) species obtained territory, some animals would still disappear. Dinosaur, take an example, has been discussed for decades, the species vanishing without any hints(这个例子…举的也太极端了吧). As one of prominent animals, it is hard to trust(hard to trust不如用,unacceptable好) that they had not(no) place to live. In modern society, parts of animals are staying in similar situation with dinosaur as it is challengeable to survive under heavy industry environment. Humans could preserve limited area for endanger species; they may still face serious problems, like illegal hunting and global warming, which could cause them to disappear(这句话有逻辑问题，应该是even if human could preserve). Consequently, preserved field cannot play a key role for(to protect) endanger animals.

Larger fields will be occupied in the condition(用because of好点) of increasing population and developing industry. In order to reduce environment pollution and save natural resource, renewable energy is becoming popular among nations. Wind power, with its feature locating in an open and large area, as one of essential renewable energy has been adopted by different countries. It produces noise and any living creatures are not available to live around wind power area(这几句和土地有什么关系). Besides, it is tendency that humans will use larger places to achieve development and better living conditions for people. Modern inhabitant district and natural reservation for vacation will be established.

To conclude, to maintain territory for endanger species could not be reasonable in modern situation as humans also need it to gain development. Endanger species, additionally, will be hard to survive under such living condition. Hence, it is not pivotal to preserve land for them.

1 继续注意语法问题，相对来说有所减少
2 第二个观点的逻辑问题要避免，一定要围绕中心句写。

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那个..我是想说风能的建设会占用很大地方, 所以以后越多的建立风能工厂就会用地方...没表达出来?.. 39# ly8768

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We all know the--that drinking can close clod--cloud (the) judgement. That's why you should never email and act--an ex after you've had a few. But for teenagers, doing dump-dumb things now because of alcohol, maybe just start. Because research(ers) of--with animal suggest drinking condemn lessons--during adolescence can set you up for a
the whole life time of bad decisions. the study is in the preceding of national academy of sciences.

people who abuse alcohol when they are young don’t make a good choices as adults. But it’s been on clear-unclear whether that the drink gave-gives them stupids or whether focus on the--folks prone to poor choice are pretty--predisposed…to dirnk.

One way to tackle this-the question is by studying alcohol in taking-intake in on animals like rats. But rats don’t like to drink so to make the alcohol more palatable scientist in few--infused it into tasty j..trist-gel matrix. Yes, the researchers gave teenagers and rats jellol shot. In the--and the animals' decision making ability staying in compare-stayed impair well to adulthood measure by their tendency in-to chaste after reword-rewards with associated high risk rather than taking a short-sure thing so young party animals remember the words of famous of dine warmer

“drinking stupid is no way of life show” drunk and stupid is no way to go through life, son.”

gel matrix  

dumb  变笨

predispose  使某人容易接受

cloud  使弄模糊

练SSS的时候在淘宝遇到一个脑袋进水的人, 气我半死, 听的什么一刹那全忘了...

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周四完成情况:
上午:口语作业, 写作, 作文点评都完成了.
中午:听力120听的很恶心, 错的忽忽的..汗啊..
下午:刷钻, 听写SSS, 晚上改口语, 录作业
阅读没做, 单词也没看..睡觉前看看..汗

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9.24 The best way to travel is in a group led by the guide.
作文写的累死了...

Tourism, as one of significant industries in most areas, has been developed since these decades. Local government and organization figure out various methods to attract tourists from the outside. Guide, someone knowing the local culture plays a key role in tourism, especially for those from alienate. However, whether people go traveling in a group led by a guide or not is becoming controversial. From my point of view, both will benefit visitors based on distinctive requirement.

Traveling individually could be cool and convenient. For young generation, they prefer to hang out with a group of friends rather than following a troop of strangers led by a guide. Modern facilities provide them internet, cell-phone to know knowledge concerning emergency aid and information about their destination as well as to contact with family. Guide, in this situation will not be necessary who can only introduce local customs. Last summer vacation, take my experience as an example, a small group of friends went camp by ourselves. After researched an isolated island by the river on internet, we made decision to spend the weekends there. Taking train from city to small town, drifting to that island was a fantastic view, setting up tent, cooking in the open air. There was a challenge for young generation to head toward the area far from the city without any guide. It offered them the opportunity to practice life. Guide could probably cause inconvenience as will bring related principles to the travel in this case.

Guide in a tour group will still be meaningful for specific population. With the increasing living condition, a number of advanced people seldom traveled at their young age start their journey to enjoy themselves. As it is hard for them to do a research on line, with limited physical position, following a guide in a traveling group could be more helpful. Guide, with more experience understands local culture could transfer the information to them; also arrange old people’s living. That will assist the old in their traveling to avoid losing themselves or confusing the location where they should head for.

To conclude, guide, a special profession, has different functions in tourism. Although some may not be in a traveling group led by a guide, guide will also bring benefit and convenience for those who need.

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Tourism, as one of significant industries in most areas, has been developed since these decades(since是个连词，要跟句子). Local government and organization figure out various methods to attract tourists from the outside. Guide, someone knowing the local culture plays a key role in tourism, especially for those from alienate. However, whether people go traveling in a group led by a guide or not is becoming controversial. From my point of view, both will benefit visitors based on distinctive requirement.

开头写的很好。

Traveling individually could be cool and convenient. For young generation, they prefer to hang out with a group of friends rather than following a troop of strangers led by a guide. Modern facilities provide them internet, cell-phone to know knowledge concerning emergency aid and information about their destination as well as to contact with family. Guide, in this situation will not be necessary who can only introduce local customs. Last summer vacation, take my experience as an example, a small group of friends went camp by ourselves. After researched(search) an isolated island by the river on internet, we made decision to spend the weekends there. Taking train from city to small town, drifting to that island was a fantastic view(这个句子有问题怎么这里有谓语，后面还有名词短语), setting up tent, cooking in the open air. There was a challenge for young generation to head toward the area far from the city without any guide. It offered them the opportunity to practice life(practice life不是很妥当。就说enjoy life。如果非要说锻炼生活技能用improve their abilities to live). Guide could probably cause inconvenience as will bring related principles to the travel in this case.

Guide in a tour group will still be meaningful for specific population. With the increasing living condition, a number of advanced people seldom traveled at their young age start their journey to enjoy themselves. As it is hard for them to do a research(search) on line, with limited physical position, following a guide in a traveling group could be more helpful. Guide, with more experience understands local culture could transfer the information to them; also arrange old people’s living. That will assist the old in their traveling to avoid losing themselves or confusing the location where they should head for.

To conclude, guide, a special profession, has different functions in tourism. Although some may not be in a traveling group led by a guide, guide will also bring benefit and convenience for those who need.

翠花这个写的好，很少见到写balance写成功的。这个就是。当然语法问题还是需要继续注意

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Zoologists claim that humans should preserve specific territory for endangered species tosurvive. This is controversial. With increasing population and development,  people  need more land to develop and progress. a great  field to live for need. Therefore, I do notsupport setting aside territory for endanger species.

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Territory alone may not save those species since they may die out for other reasons.  Humans have already set aside territory to protect endangered species. For example, humans have law prohibited hunting specific species.Even if the endanger species obtained territory, some animals wouldstill disappear. Dinosaur, take an example, has been discussed fordecades, the species vanishing without any hints. As one of prominentanimals, it is hard to trust that they had not place to live. In modernsociety, parts of animals are staying in similar situation withdinosaur as it is challengeable to survive under heavy industryenvironment. Humans could preserve limited area for endanger species;they may still face serious problems, like illegal hunting and globalwarming, which could cause them to disappear. Consequently, preservedfield cannot play a key role for endanger animals.

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Largerfields will be occupied in the condition of increasing population anddeveloping industry. In order to reduce environment pollution and savenatural resource, renewable energy is becoming popular among nations.Wind power, with its feature locating in an open and large area, as oneof essential renewable energy has been adopted by different countries.It produces noise and any living creatures are not available to livearound wind power area. Besides, it is tendency that humans will uselarger places to achieve development and better living conditions forpeople. Modern inhabitant district and natural reservation for vacationwill be established.1 z: q. S7 Z. ^/ [

6 X* `$ O: d# I# {. \! yToconclude, to maintain territory for endanger species could not bereasonable in modern situation as humans also need it to gaindevelopment. Endanger species, additionally, will be hard to surviveunder such living condition. Hence, it is not pivotal to preserve landfor them.