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Zoologistsclaim that humans should preserve specific territory for endangeredspecies to survive. This is controversial. With increasing populationand development, people need more land to develop and progress. Therefore, I do not support setting asideterritory for endangered species

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Territoryalone may not save those species since they may die out for otherreasons.  Humans have already set aside territory to protect endangeredspecies, often without success. Even if endangered species were given territory, some animalswould still disappear. For example, dinosaurs vanished even though they had territory and were thedominant species.  They clearly had sufficient territory.In modern times, some  of animals are also endangered in spite of having sufficient territory.Heavy industry development affects the environment and challenges animal  survival. Humans could preserve limited area for endangerspecies;they may still face serious problems, like illegal hunting andglobalwarming, which could cause them to disappear. Consequently,preservedfield cannot play a key role for endanger animals.

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More area will be occupied by increasing populationand developing industry. In order to reduce environment pollution andsave natural resources, renewable energy is being adopted. Wind power requires large, open space. As one of significant  renewable energy, wind power has been adopted by differentcountries. It produces noise and any living creatures are not availableto livearound wind power area. Besides, it is tendency that humans willuselarger places to achieve development and better living conditionsforpeople. Modern inhabitant district and natural reservation forvacationwill be established.1 z: q. S7 Z. ^/ [

6 X* `$ O: d# I# {. \! yToconclude,to maintain territory for endanger species could not bereasonable inmodern situation as humans also need it to gaindevelopment. Endangerspecies, additionally, will be hard to surviveunder such livingcondition. Hence, it is not pivotal to preserve landfor them.

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9.24
Tourism, as one of significant industries in most areas, has been developed since these decades. Local government and organization figure out various methods to attract tourists from the outside. Guide, someone knowing the local culture plays a key role in tourism, especially for those from alienate(alienate?应该是foreign country好点吧). However, whether people go traveling（直接用travel感觉更好） in a group led by a guide or not is becoming controversial. From my point of view, both will benefit visitors based on distinctive requirement.

Traveling individually could be cool and convenient. For young generation, they prefer to hang out with a group of friends rather than following a troop of strangers led by a guide. Modern facilities provide them internet, cell-phone（应该是复数） to know knowledge concerning emergency aid and information about their destination as well as to contact with family. Guide, in this situation will not be necessary who can only introduce local customs. Last summer vacation, take my experience as an example, a small group of friends went camp by ourselves. After researched(应该是search?) an isolated island by the river on internet, we made decision to spend the weekends there. Taking train from city to small town, drifting to that island was a fantastic view, setting up tent, cooking in the open air. There was a challenge for young generation to head toward the area far from the city without any guide. It offered them the opportunity to practice life. Guide could probably cause inconvenience as will bring related principles to the travel in this case.(语法有问题)

Guide in a tour group will still be meaningful for specific population. With the increasing living condition, a number of advanced people seldom traveled at their young age start their journey to enjoy themselves. As it is hard for them to do a research on line, with limited physical position, following a guide in a traveling group could be more helpful. Guide, with more experience understands local culture could transfer the information to them; also arrange old people’s living. That will assist the old in their traveling to avoid losing themselves or confusing the location where they should head for.

To conclude, guide, a special profession, has different functions in tourism. Although some may not be in a traveling group led by a guide, guide will also bring benefit and convenience for those who need.

开头和两个论点写的不错，不过感觉第二点稍微少了点，比较不平衡，结尾稍微不够点题，可以把主题再稍微重复一下。

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Zoologistsclaimthat humans should preserve specific territory for endangeredspecies tosurvive. This is controversial. With increasing populationanddevelopment, people need more land to develop and progress. Therefore,I do not support setting asideterritory for endangered species

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Territoryalonemay not save those species since they may die out forotherreasons.  Humans have already set aside territory to protectendangeredspecies, often without success. Even if endangered specieswere given territory, some animalswould still disappear. For example,dinosaurs vanished even though they had territory and were thedominantspecies.  They clearly had sufficient territory.In modern times,some  of animals are also endangered in spite of having sufficientterritory.Heavy industry development affects the environment andchallenges animal  survival. Humans could preserve limited area forendangerspecies;they may still face serious problems, like illegalhunting andglobalwarming, which could cause them to disappear.Consequently,preservedfield cannot play a key role for endanger animals.

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Morearea will be occupied by increasing populationand developing industry.In order to reduce environment pollution andsave natural resources,renewable energy is being adopted. Wind power requires large, openspace. As one of significant  renewable energy, wind power has beenadopted by differentcountries. It produces noise and any livingcreatures are not availableto livearound wind power area. Besides, itis tendency that humans willuselarger places to achieve development andbetter living conditionsforpeople. Modern inhabitant district andnatural reservation forvacationwill be established.1 z: q. S7 Z. ^/ [

6 X* `$ O: d# I# {. \! yToconclude,tomaintain territory for endanger species could not bereasonable inmodernsituation as humans also need it to gaindevelopment. Endangerspecies,additionally, will be hard to surviveunder such livingcondition. Hence,it is not pivotal to preserve landfor them.

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Zoologistsclaim that humans should preserve specific territory forendangeredspecies to survive. This is controversial. With increasingpopulationand development, people need more land to develop andprogress. Therefore, I do not support setting asideterritory forendangered species

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Territoryalonemay not save those species since they may die out forotherreasons.  Humans have already set aside territory toprotect endangeredspecies, often without success. Even if endangeredspecies were given territory, some animalswould still disappear. Forexample, dinosaurs vanished even though they had territory and werethedominant species.  They clearly had sufficientterritory.In modern times, some  of animals are alsoendangered in spite of having sufficient territory.Heavy industrydevelopment affects the environment and challenges animal  survival.Humans could preserve limited area for endangerspecies;they may stillface serious problems, like illegal hunting andglobalwarming, whichcould cause them to disappear. Consequently,preservedfield cannotplay a key role for endanger animals.

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Morearea will be occupied by increasing populationand developingindustry. In order to reduce environment pollution andsave naturalresources, renewable energy is being adopted. Wind power requireslarge, open space. As one type of significant renewable energy, windpower has been adopted by many countries. However, ass a side effect,it produces noise and any living creatures near the wind towers aredisturbed and likely to leave that area. In addition, it is atendency of humans to use more land to achieve development and betterliving conditions.

Toconclude, maintaining territory for endangered species is not reasonable for a modern society because humans also need it for theirown purposes. Endangered species, additionally, will have difficulty surviving under such conditions. Hence, it is not necessary to setaside territory for endangered species.

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For all use--you space box--buffs who likes to keep track of (where the) water is. It looks like you can add very young--our very own moon to your list. Because according to the t..trio of papers a period--appearing in the of journal science, the lunar surface is wetter than we realized. 40 years ago a p..Appollo astonauts brought a bunch of moon racks--rocks back home. For the most part, those samples showed no traces of water of whatever--whatsoever. Th…slight engen moist--those that seemed even the slightest bit mosit were thought to have been contaminated by water from earth. Because the container they were stored in turned out to be leaky. But now scientists say they've spotted were spot water right on the moon's surface. Using instruments on three different spaces crafts, the scientists detected chemical signature of good each to all--old H2O. And they think the water spring is from the moon itself. The lunar soil is nearly 50% oxygen. And scientists think that high…hydrogen come from solar wind that pounds the moon surface. But to--put the two together and you get wet, not too wet of course. There is probably only about a quarter of water in every t..tonof lunar soil less--that's drie--dryer than the its heir--sahara but wetter than we thought. Put the two together and you get wet. Not too wet, of course. There’s probably only about a quart of water in every ton of lunar soil. That’s dryer than the Sahara. But wetter than we thought.

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早上来报个到..

看看北美JJ给群里考试的传下.
早晨学习情况: 听写SSS, 貌似不是很难的样子, 连读的真是不好听出来.
黄金阅读: 最近做的很不好也不知道怎么了...!!!
10:00AM家教去.
中午: 听力. 作文. 阅读继续....

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9.25 有的人认为网络给人们带来了大量的信息，好啊，也有的人觉得这些信息带来了
Could people have a better life without internet? Since internet has become popular last century, it develops huge convenience for families and organizations in various ways. Internet offers free information that people need; it also saves their time to look for in bookstore. Hence, how does internet result in troublesome? I believe it benefits people in their daily life.

Internet makes everything more effective. Currently, the news on internet is latest among those medias. It always tells people what is happening temperately. In additional, it is convenient to search the information and knowledge on internet. Taking my experience as example, I am applying the university in the States presently; and internet assists me with related information, such as what kind of material I should prepare and the procedure about where I should start. Besides, the knowledge, from those who share similar situations on studying-abroad website reduces my pressure on applying. I am a green hand in this field as never done it in my life, however, internet provides me another space with its convenience and information. It avoids a messy situation that I probably should have.

Some may use internet to expand their business after getting significant information they need. E-bay, a large online shopping moll also a new shopping style, plays a key role in modern people’s life. Humans, especially for full-time housewives, prefer to have business there for its convenience. It is easy for them to log in and search the shortage products on related website at present; later they could set up a store on E-bay. The information, meanwhile, concerning second-handed goods also encourages people to put their half-new facilities on internet store. People get benefit in different ways due to internet and the news as well as information from it.

To conclude, humans gain an advanced life based on the knowledge from internet. And people should use it wisely because of internet’s active factors. Hence, internet should be encouraged in using with its advantages.

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Could people have a better life without internet? Since internet has become popular last century, it develops huge convenience for families and organizations in various ways. Internet offers free information that people need; it also saves their time to look for in bookstore. Hence, how does internet result in troublesome? I believe it benefits people in their daily life.


开头写的挺好

Internet makes everything more effective. Currently, the news on internet is latest among those media. It always tells people what is happening temperately(恰当的？). In additional, it is convenient to search the information and knowledge on internet. Taking my experience as example, I am applying(applying for) the university in the States(U.S.) presently; and internet assists me with related information, such as what kind of material I should prepare and the procedure about where I should start. Besides, the knowledge, from those who share similar situations on studying-abroad website reduces my pressure on applying. I am a green hand in this field as never done it in my life, however, internet provides me another space with its convenience and information. It avoids a messy situation that I probably should have.


Some may use internet to expand their business after getting significant information they need. E-bay, a large online shopping moll(mall) also a new shopping style, plays a key role in modern people’s life. Humans, especially for full-time housewives, prefer to have business there for its convenience. It is easy for them to log in and search the shortage products on related website at present; later they could set up a store on E-bay. The information, meanwhile, concerning second-handed goods also encourages people to put their half-new facilities on internet store. People get benefit in different ways due to internet and the news as well as information from it.(news就不需要了吧)


To conclude, humans gain an advanced life based on the knowledge from internet. And people should use it wisely because of internet’s active factors. Hence, internet should be encouraged in using with its advantages.

这篇写的很简练啊，而且没有语法错误，很好的一篇

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9.26 It is better to broad knowledge of many academic subjects than specialize on one specific subject.

Humans have been in a severe situation under the negative consequence of economic depression. Losing jobs and insurance are becoming hot topics currently. However, there are still some who could find or keep their work positions with their extended knowledge. Hence, I believe that people should broad knowledge in many academic subjects instead of limiting within only one program.

People will be restricted in his/her profession with limited knowledge. At present, companies and organizations prefer to have versatile staffs. Those, from computer and science major, who can master one or even two foreign languages, are becoming more welcome. One of my relatives works for a Japanese corporation, being given opportunity to have business in Japan regularly. As a software engineer, he also could speak fluent Japanese and could read material in Japanese. That assists him to be promoted and enjoy other benefits in that corporation. Since financial depression happened last year, many employees were forced to leave their working position because the companies already over dues in their budgets, but my relative has kept his profession with his extended knowledge. If he, like many of others who cannot master second language just have specific knowledge from his major, he would be in the same boat with the rest, losing jobs and looking for it.

In additional, limited knowledge within one program could result in dire consequence. For instance, during that period of struggling for iBT, I had to read different books in English from varied area, like science, art, environment and agriculture. The reading and listening part of iBT include dissimilar fields. It could be more effective if I can master knowledge from different areas; otherwise, I would be confused when will be in the test. Related information that I mastered will provide me a clear mind to consider, which avoids me from being nervous when run in across the knowledge I was not familiar with.

To conclude, extended knowledge can assist people in their daily life, such as working and studying. It could produce stronger capacity for people and assist them to get achievement.

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早上来报到. 昨天完成情况还可以, 听力, 听写, 阅读, 口语,作文以及组内批改都完成了. 不过听力和阅读做的不好, 注意力不够! 今天加油!!!珍惜现在美好的日子..嘿嘿. 以后回忆起来一定很有趣!

周日上午, 听力120, 黄金阅读. 作文点评
因为下午出门, 争取上午都做好.

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Humans have been in a severe situation under the negative consequence of economic depression. Losing jobs and insurance are becoming hot topics currently. However, there are still some who could find or keep their work positions with their extended knowledge(这个…联想的也太远了吧). Hence, I believe that people should broad knowledge in many academic subjects instead of limiting within only one program.

People will be restricted in his/her profession with limited knowledge. At present, companies and organizations prefer to have versatile staffs. Those, from computer and science major(from the major of computer science), who can (still) master one or even two foreign languages, are becoming more welcome. One of my relatives works for a Japanese corporation, being given opportunity to have business in Japan regularly. As a software engineer, he also could speak fluent Japanese and could read material in Japanese. That assists him to be promoted and enjoy other benefits in that corporation. Since financial depression happened last year, many employees were(have been) forced to leave their working position because the companies(company) already over dues(overdue是延期未付的意思，没有overdue budget的说法) in their budgets, but my relative has kept his profession with(because of) his extended knowledge. If he, like many of others who cannot master second language just (but 需要个连词) have specific knowledge from his major, he would be in the same boat with the rest, losing jobs and looking for it(another).

感觉中心句不怎么好。will be restricted in his/her profession。在一个专业未必不好。应该是限制了opportunity

In additional, limited knowledge within one program could result in dire consequence. For instance, during that period of struggling for iBT, I had to read different books in English from varied area, like science, art, environment and agriculture. The reading and listening part of iBT include dissimilar fields. It could be more effective if I can master knowledge from different areas(ETS是这样为自己辩护的，我们的题目不涉及专业背景…) otherwise, I would be confused when will be in the test(when I am in the test,不要用将来时态). Related information that I mastered will provide me a clear mind to consider, which avoids me from being nervous when run in across the knowledge I was not familiar with.

这个例子…有争议啊

To conclude, extended knowledge can assist people in their daily life, such as working and studying. It could produce stronger capacity for people and assist them to get achievement.

第一个TS可以改改
语法问题还是要注意的

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9.26作业点评

Humans have been in a severe situation under(这里用这个under不如用caused by，就是由经济危机引起。而且感觉好像depression有positive consequence似的) the negative consequence of economic depression. Losing jobs and insurance are becoming hot topics currently. However, there are still some who could find or keep their work positions with their extended knowledge(个人感觉吧，extended knowledge不一定是不失业的原因，可能正是因为是专家才不失业，这句话没什么根据). Hence, I believe that people should broad knowledge in many academic subjects instead of limiting within only one program(我觉得用field更合适).

People will be restricted in his/her profession with limited knowledge(这句意思不错). At present, companies and organizations prefer to have versatile staffs. (少了个“例如”)Those, from computer and science major, who can master one or even two foreign languages, are becoming more welcome(d). One of my relatives works for a Japanese corporation, being(不用being) given opportunity to have business in Japan regularly. As a software engineer, he also could speak fluent Japanese and could read material in Japanese. That assists him to be promoted and enjoy other benefits in that corporation. Since financial depression happened last year, many employees were forced to leave their working position because the companies already over dues(over dues是什么？没见过不太懂) in their budgets, but my relative has kept his profession with(换成because of) his extended knowledge. If he, like many of others who cannot master second language (少个连词and) just have specific knowledge from his major, he would be in the same boat with the rest, losing jobs and looking for it(觉得加上这个不如不加).

In additional(In addition), limited knowledge within one program could result in dire consequence. For instance, during that period of struggling for iBT, I had to read different books in English from varied area(s), like science, art, environment and agriculture. The reading and listening part of iBT include(用involve怎样？) dissimilar fields. It could be more effective if I can master knowledge from different areas; otherwise, I would be confused when will be( when will be？) in the test. Related information that I mastered will provide me a clear mind to consider, which avoids me from being nervous when run in across the knowledge I was not familiar with. (我觉得这第二点理由不太够吧，毕竟写作文还是普遍些好，感觉这个例子不具有普遍性。而且，也没有很直接的阐述这一段的首句哎)

To conclude, extended knowledge can assist people in their daily life, such as working and studying. It could produce stronger capacity for people and assist them to get achievement(assist in doing sth.).

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今天学习情况不好. 早上咖啡洒到键盘了, 键盘就瘫痪了. 后来去买...这一天就弄这破键盘. 来来回回...做了听力120, 口语点评写字点评, 刷钻. 小店已经5颗心咯, 马上有钻咯...

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早上多睡了会, 看天气不错的就洗衣服吧...听力120. 也不知道是谁编写的, 做的让人伤心啊. 忽忽错哇!!! 下午继续奋斗!!!!

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同意不同意：一个聪明的朋友比一个幽默的朋友重要

Like an old saying goes: a friend in need is a friend indeed. Humans, without friends would be hard to survive under modern society. As friends could assist people to reduce pressure and bring a lot of fun. Friends also lead to a controversy: who should play more insignificant role in people’ life, wise friends or humor ones? For me, I believe both are part of humans’ life, because people cannot leave their friends.

Friends, with humor character could release people’s stress. Modern people, especially for young generation, are facing to heavy pressure, like gaining more knowledge for the future and working hard to keep present position. They have to disguise themselves during daytime to be strong enough. However, those really need to relax otherwise in case of getting depression. For instance, my last work position made me stressful as every day I was obliged to answer the phone calls from clients. But I had never known who would be the next. I was afraid that I may say something not proper to offend them, which could cause me to be criticized. Additionally, collecting document and arranging meeting were part of my responsibilities. I had to be patient and polite in my working position. That limited me to express my true feelings. Weekends were my best time because my friends would like to share with me about what happened. I could express my real innate life to them; meanwhile I learnt how to enjoy Karaoke with those silly and funny friends. One of them also introduced me an interesting internet game to release myself. My friends, with their humor character assisted me a lot in this situation. It was hard for me to get rid of it without them.

On the other hand, smart friends can help humans more indirectly. They are like sisters and brothers to lead people to the right way. I could still remember that how my friend advised me when I struggled for the exam of master degree. She was already a graduate student at that time; so with her experiences and wise suggestion, I passed the exam the first time I took. I understand I could have not been accepted if she had not helped me to rebuild my studying schedule, such as which book I should read first as foundation.

To conclude, both humor and smart friends assist people in their daily life because life would be gray without laughter from them. Humans need friends to share everything; also need to release themselves with friends.