进军美利坚Chineselady备考日志

glamorouskyUID: 2459211

赞ｍｍ

glamorouskyUID: 2459211

听力１２０有一定难度　不要灰心　加油

2400UID: 2645790

女王 破爷来看看你 好好努力哦 别给我丢面子 考不到110+就不用回家了 回来你也是挨我皮带抽

我是chineseladyUID: 2662783

烦人不你, 挺好的地方让你给污染了...:curse: 63# 2400

我是chineseladyUID: 2662783

Every year million of manor--monarch butterfly--flies fly thousands of miles to light--alight in one specific farest--forest in Mexico. How do they know what direction to flatter--flutter? Scientist has--had thought that inside--insect GPS gene--system in their brains geren--steered them in ( their) direction.

Now a new study published in the journal science over turns that idea because sun related directional sensing actually resigned..--resides in butterfly in t.says--antennae, say scientist at the university of 马萨州 medical school.

The research of remembered a half century of--old study that noticed--noted that if butterfly lost their intenn--antennate…mid-fly--flight intended they became soriented--disoriented . so they put butterfly in the fly--a flight simulator and try to convince them to fly south. Those were intended--with there antennate intact have no problem to flying south. But those were out there--without their antennae just couldn’t do it. Next (day) they painted their butterfly intended--antennae black, black in--blocking light sensing . Those insects could ind..orient themselves but the--when researcher cover antennae (intent) in (their) clear painting and the butterfly could once again fly in the correct direction.

Butterfly orientated--antennae were already known to (be know) the sense of odor, wind, even sound. Now it seems that they also vital forget their--for getting lonely back to Mexico to mingle make the next generation of monarchs.
今天听的不好...触角的单词怎么也没有听出来.  

我是chineseladyUID: 2662783

早上来报个到.

汗..睡觉梦到考试了, 怎么还有数学的?? 这不是托福么又不是G? 我也很奇怪的, 而且什么都不会..梦里的我就想也没复习数学呀...口语时候紧张的话都说不出来. 干脆放弃了. 这梦做的...

继续120奋斗!!! 也不知道是该感激120作者还是B4, 这120太让人伤心了..呜呜呜. 还不如巴郎对的多.

liuguaguaUID: 2569375

继续加油哦
你已经很强大了，一天做了这么多事情……
＋U ＋U
会有意外的惊喜的

kathryn慕云UID: 2638683

66# 我是chineselady

梦和现实是相反的吖。。。肯定能考好的！
你还能做梦啦，我想到考试都有点睡不着吖。。。
我们支持你~\(≧▽≦)/~

joyceliuUID: 2477232

Likean old saying goes: a friend in need is a friend indeed. Humans,without friends would be hard to survive under modern society. Asfriends could assist people to reduce pressure and bring a lot of fun.Friends also lead to a controversy: who should play more insignificantrole in people’ life, wise friends or humor ones? For me, I believe both are part of humans’ life, because people cannot leave their friends.
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  g9 s/ T2 Z) YFriends, with humor character could release people’sstress. Modern people, especially for young generation, are facing to(confronting with)heavy pressure, like gaining more knowledge for the future career and workinghard to keep present position. They have to disguise themselves duringdaytime to be strong enough. However, those really need to relaxotherwise in case of getting depression. For instance, my last workposition made me stressful as every day I was obliged to answer thephone calls from clients. But I had never known who would be the next.I was afraid that I may say something not proper to offend them, whichcould cause me to be criticized. Additionally, collecting document andarranging meeting were part of my responsibilities. I had to be patientand polite in my working position. That limited me to express my truefeelings. Weekends were my best time because my friends would like toshare with me about what happened. I could express my real innate lifeto them; meanwhile I learnt how to enjoy Karaoke with those silly andfunny friends. One of them also introduced me an interesting internetgame to release myself. My friends, with their humor character assistedme a lot in this situation. It was hard for me to get rid of it withoutthem.(前面描述压力的篇幅是不是多了些？建议后面写朋友的应该更注重幽默这一点）
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Onthe other hand, smart friends can help humans more indirectly. They arelike sisters and brothers to lead people to the right way. I couldstill remember that how my friend advised me when I struggled for theexam of master degree. She was already a graduate student at that time;so with her experiences and wise suggestion, I passed the exam thefirst time I took. I understand I could have not been accepted if shehad not helped me to rebuild my studying schedule, such as which book Ishould read first as foundation.（例子是不是应该再具体些，譬如他都给你提供了那些帮助）
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Toconclude, both humor and smart friends assist people in their dailylife because life would be gray without laughter from them. Humans needfriends to share everything; also need to release themselves withfriends.

joyceliuUID: 2477232

乱码可能是输入法的问题，别管他了

lupiscesUID: 2231942

加油，翠花同学，要相信你已经够强大了

放心去考吧！

ly8768UID: 2452066

60# 我是chineselady

Like an old saying goes: a friend in need is a friend indeed. Humans, without friends would be hard to survive under(in modern society) modern society. (这一句应该和上一句放在一起)As friends could assist people to reduce pressure and bring a lot of fun. Friends also lead to a controversy: who should(这里应该不是should吧) play more insignificant(这为什么用否定呢) role in people’ life, wise friends or humor ones? For me, I believe both are part of humans’ life, because people cannot leave their friends(这个因果关系没看出来。因为离不开朋友，所以两个quality都重要？).

Friends, with humor character could release people’s stress. Modern people, especially for young generation, are facing to heavy pressure, like gaining more knowledge for the future and working hard to keep present position. They have to disguise themselves during daytime to be strong enough(这句表达好像不是很合适). However, those(they) really need to relax otherwise(otherwise是个连词，后面要跟句子) in case of getting depression. For instance, my last work position(occupation更好点) made me stressful as every day I was obliged to answer the phone calls(phone call重复) from clients. But I had never known who would be the next. I was afraid that I may say something not proper to offend them, which could cause me to be criticized. Additionally, collecting document and arranging meeting were part of my responsibilities. I had to be patient and polite in my working position. That limited me to express my true feelings. Weekends were my best time because my friends would like to share with me about what happened. I could express my real innate life to them; meanwhile I learnt how to enjoy Karaoke with those silly and funny friends(唱卡拉OK不见的就silly吧…). One of them also introduced me an interesting internet game to release myself(巨星…，我们宿舍天天玩). My friends, with their humor character assisted me a lot in this situation. It was hard for me to get rid of it without them.

其实你重点应该说humorous friend的重要，而不是描述silly friends或者对工作多不爽

On the other hand, smart friends can help humans more indirectly. They are like sisters and brothers to lead people to the right way. I could still remember that how my friend advised me when I struggled for the exam of master degree. She was already a graduate student at that time; so with her experiences and wise suggestion, I passed the exam the first time I took. I understand I could have not been accepted if she had not helped me to rebuild my studying schedule, such as which book I should read first as foundation.

这个例子还不错。

To conclude, both humor and smart friends assist people in their daily life because life would be gray without laughter from them. Humans need friends to share everything; also need to release themselves with friends.

我觉得最后两段还不错。前面的错误有些多，要注意修正啊

我是chineseladyUID: 2662783

9.29 是应该放更多的钱在access internet 上，而不是public transportation 同意还是不要?


没限时哇哇啊

Which should be supported for nation’s development, transportation or access internet? This is controversy. In my point of view, I believe that both will assist one country’s improvement; and they cannot be separated. Available transportation promotes cooperation and internet helps to gain related information. Both play key roles in modern society.

As a newly industry, internet provides increased businesses. Online store are becoming popular among young generations. However, it cannot work without expressed delivery. People, going shopping on internet are too busy to purchase in persons; or they are attracted by those various and unique products on internet stores. The online store owners, generally, utilize expressed speed companies to delivery product. For instance, the transportation was deficient in the west part of my country before. Even if those who lived in the west preferred to purchase from internet stores, it would take more days to transfer. Additionally, it would be charged a lot compared to the normal price. That was not reasonable to have a deal on internet. Since last year, the railway has been developed in the west. So it enhances the speed of traveling there, and even in isolated villages, they also could receive goods from further places within three days. Transportation encourages presumption on internet stores, nevertheless, the stores owners would lose clients in further area and people who live there cannot enjoy this lifestyle and services.

Development cannot leave internet, because it offers a platform for interaction. Corporations prefer having advertisement and introduction on their websites, which extends opportunities to attract cooperators or buyers. Currently, internet saves time and decreases the procedures for companies’ routines. Like filling employment forms and sending personal materials by email, HR department could select qualified ones to have final interviews. It avoids those who are incompetent and improves the working efficiency. On the other hand, internet application saves people’s time to head towards companies frequently to send documents.

To conclude, for any countries, if they would like to develop their nation’s competence, both internet and transportation should be enhanced. From my perspective, access internet and advanced transportation would bring advantages for one nation’s development. Hence, they should be improved on the same boat.

独眼豆豆UID: 2692023

Which should be supported for nation’s development, transportation or access internet? This is controversial. In my point of view, I believe that both will assist onea country’s improvement;, and they cannot be separated. Available transportation promotes cooperation and internet helps to gain related information. Both play key roles in modern society.

As a newly industry, internet provides increased businesses. Online store are becoming popular among young generations. However, it cannot workthrive without expressed delivery. People, going shopping on internet are too busy to purchase in persons; or they are attracted by those various and unique products on internet stores. The online store owners, generally, utilize expressed speed companiesbusiness to delivery product. For instance, the transportation was deficient in the west part of my country before. Even if(even if似乎不太妥当) those who lived in the west preferred to purchase from internet stores, but(这里缺了连词，造成run-on) it would take more days to transfer. Additionally, it would be chargedcosts a lot more compared(compare 有比较，就要有比较级） towith(虽然GMAT里compare with 和compare to都是对比的意思，但是托福里可能to还是有比喻的意思） the normal price. That was not reasonable to have a deal on internet. Since last year, the railway has been developed in the west. So it enhances the speed of traveling there, and even in isolated villages, they also could receive goods from further places within three daysin a very short time(老外不清楚3天到底是慢还是快，所以还是明确一点好）. Transportation encourages presumption on internet stores, nevertheless, the stores owners would lose clients in further area and people who live there cannot enjoy this lifestyle and services. 最后一句话nevertheless没见到对比啊。

Development cannot leave（用depend on 或者without好一些） internet, because it offers a platform for interaction用词错误，不太确定你想表达的意思，所以也不好给建议用什么词好了. Corporations prefer having advertisement and introduction on their websites, which extends opportunities to attract cooperators or buyers. Currently, internet saves time and decreases the procedures for companies’ routines. Like filling employment forms and sending personal materials by email, HR department could select qualified ones to have final interviews.这句话语病（Like xxx, HR department xxx） It avoids those who are incompetent and improves the working efficiency. On the other hand, internet application saves people’s time to head towards companies frequently to send documents.

To conclude, for any countries, if they would like to develop their nation’s competence, both internet and transportation should be enhanced. From my perspective, access internet and advanced transportation wouldwill bring advantages for one nation’s development. Hence, they should be improved on the same boat.

第三段看的比较吃力，主语和代词比较混乱。总体思路很好。有些表达过于中式，比如,development cannot leave internet，可以理解为development不能里留下internet，这样句意就差很多了。有些用词还是很好的，值得学习。

我是chineseladyUID: 2662783

今天学习:

上午背单词, 写作文(昨天落下的), 点评作文

下午有课咯..

晚上口语作业1--6题. 还要写作文. 今天听力和阅读都没做. 汗...

等都完成任务了把SSS做了, 昨天都没做的..加油哇!!不能掉队..