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Can learning the past assist to solve problems and have value for present? The answer is yes(这种yes, no的词，尽量不要在作文里面出现，The answer is certain). Definitely I believe that knowledge from past could avoid negatives. And more details and evidence are as follow.

As the foundation of one country, education could be fulfilled by learning culture from the past. Every nation has its own history and wisdom(每个民族都有自己的智慧？), which is treasure from ancestors. For instance, since in elementary school, students are instructed(have been instructed) morals based on Confucius. It teaches how to respect and care about(care就是关心的意思) parents and people who are elder(直接用elders就好了). Such as do not go to further places since parents are still waiting at home, because they will be worried when their next generation left. There are plenty of wise proverbs from Confucius. Firstly, it reduces humans’ energy to develop deeper thinking; secondly it provides the best texts for education(这个，first和second都表达的是什么的用处呢proverb的？). It transfers what kind of friends youngster should make through the proverbs that prevent youngster from being with ungracious people. So learning knowledge from the past is valuable for education.

The past could alarm people to consider the future. Take my country’s history as example. With splendid ancient culture, civilization and wealth, our nation was trampled in World War two. It shows that we are obliged to develop our nation into a modern as well as developed society and to protect our territory(这句话很中文啊). From the history(In the past two hundred years), the power of our country and government was weak, and then lagged behind. That was the main reason being invaded. The bloody and crude experience stimulates us to be strong. That period of history has impressed us deeply. However, the progress we have achieved currently, explains that we gained improvement and completed the development for humans’ life and living condition. Nevertheless, history should be focused on in the development of country; the reason is that people should learn adequate knowledge and information to culture a new nation appropriately to match nation’s style.


貌似那这种侵略史来证明不太好说，尤其是造句方面，受历史课本的影响，说的句子都很中国化

To conclude, what idea and knowledge from the past can help people in different ways(aspects 好点). It offers some wise principles for both humans and their nations.

这个可能从这种角度确实不好写，尤其是话不好说，建议还是从科技呀，人文啊，什么角度来说要好写些

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10.4 Agree or disagree: it is more important to have the rules about the types of clothing that people are allowed to work.

Like an old saying goes: any country has its rule so does the corporation and school. The rules include moral, behaviors and also clothes to keep unity. Therefore, I definitely believe that rules about what kind of clothing people should be in is significant and have more details as follow.

The principal of clothing assist to enhance students’ responsibilities. Students at school should have in the same clothes as we called school uniforms. *
It could develop their responsibility because they present their school. For instance, one of my classmates from elementary school was criticized by teacher after played in video game bar. Video game bar is a place where many children and teenagers are indulged in, just like parts of adults are addictive in gambling. The serious position I heard some teenagers lied to parents or friends to get money only to play video games. That boy from my class felt regretful about it. One reason is obviously others could see him from his school uniforms, which may lead to a negative effect to school’s reputation. For very young people, it was not a graceful action that is not better than adult drug abuser. Since then, other students included him had no encourage to visit that place any more. All of us learnt we stood for our school and should keep an active influence on its image. Beside, it is not a good habit to follow. School uniform limit students’ behavior and help them to avoid side effect from society.

The rule of type of clothing could encourage staff in company. As we know, employees should be in based on their working position. People in office need to wear neat suits and shirts, which enhances their trustworthiness when face with clients. This summer vacation, I joined in a social activity in American Consulate. I noticed that those visa officers were in formal suits with long sleeves and females were in high heel shoes. I felt surprised about they did not bare legs or arms in summer shirts, but later could understand that they have such rule on clothing style. Particularly, visa officers are obliged to meet various people in interview of getting visa. Formal clothes make them stronger and respectable.

To conclude, both school and company should have rule of limitation on clothing, because it will benefit students and employees. Students will keep the same pace with the rest of them; staff in corporation will gain more respect in formal cloth.

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最近过节很激动, 也没怎么学习..  单词也没背, 阅读更是没有看哇...怎么办..抓紧啊:mad: .
加油哇!!努力奋斗!!

早上看了会单词, 下午做阅读, 听写SSS, 口语作业, 写作文, 听120..好了, 闪人学习去

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Like an old saying goes: any country has its rule so does the corporation and school. The rules include moral, behaviors and also clothes to keep unity. Therefore, I definitely believe that rules about what kind of clothing people should be in is significant and have more details as follow.

The principal of clothing assists to enhance students’ responsibilities. Students at school should have(be) in the same clothes as we called school uniforms. *( o1 {& l6 ^2 K$ d( _; N4 x
It could develop their responsibility because they present(如果是出席的意思，应该是形容词) their school. For instance, one of my classmates from elementary school was criticized by teacher after played in video game bar. Video game bar is a place where many children and teenagers are indulged in, just like parts of adults are addictive in gambling. The serious position I heard some teenagers lied to parents or friends to get money only to play video games. That boy from my class felt regretful about it. One reason is obviously others could see him from his school uniforms, which may lead to a negative effect to school’s reputation. For very young people, it was not a graceful action that is not better than adult drug abuser. Since then, other students included（including） him had no encourage（encourage是动词） to visit that place any more. All of us learnt we stood for our school and should keep an active influence on its image. Beside, it is not a good habit to follow. School uniform limit students’ behavior and help them to avoid side effect from society.* `2 y/ `! y3 d$ w! g, u( c

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The rule of type of clothing could encourage staff in company. As we know, employees should be in based on（这个有点怪） their working position. People in office need to wear neat suits and shirts, which enhances their trustworthiness when face(facing) with clients. This summer vacation, I joined in a social activity in American Consulate. I noticed that those visa officers were in formal suits with long sleeves and females were in high heel shoes. I felt surprised about they did not bare legs or arms in summer shirts, but later could understand that they have such rule on clothing style. Particularly, visa officers are obliged to meet various people in interview of getting visa. Formal clothes make them stronger and respectable. $ Y+ i/ g2 V" [2 o/ I* s5 v, l( }

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To conclude, both school and company should have rule of limitation on clothing, because it will benefit students and employees. Students will keep the same pace with the rest of them; staff in corporation will gain more respect in formal cloth.

意思表达的很清楚了，只是有些句子读起来感觉不是很地道，再琢磨一下会更好~

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Like an old saying goes: any country has its rule so does the corporation and school. The rules include moral, behaviors and also clothes to keep unity. Therefore, I definitely believe that rules about what kind of clothing people should be in is significant and have(这里主语就成了rules，而实际你想说的是I have details 所以应该是 with details ) more details as follow.

The principal of clothing assist to enhance students’ responsibilities. Students at school should have in(不要，或者说wear the same clothe) the same clothes as we called school uniforms. It could develop their responsibility because they present their school(这句话是什么意思). For instance, one of my classmates from elementary school was criticized by teacher after played in video game bar. Video game bar is a place where many children and teenagers are indulged in, just like(as) parts of adults are addictive in gambling. The serious position I heard (is) some teenagers lied to parents or friends to get money only to play video games. That boy from my class felt regretful about it. One reason is obviously others could see(recognize) him from his school uniforms, which may lead to a negative effect to school’s reputation. For very young people, it was not a graceful action that is not better than adult drug abuser. Since then, other students included(including) him had no encourage(courage) to visit that place any more. All of us learnt (that) we stood for our school and should keep an active influence on its image. Beside(Besides), it is not a good habit to follow(这句什么意思). School uniform limit students’ behavior and help them to avoid side effect from society.

The rule of type of clothing could encourage staff in company. As we know, employees should be in based on their working position. People in office need to wear neat suits and shirts, which enhances their trustworthiness when face(faced) with clients. This summer vacation, I joined in a social activity in American Consulate. I noticed that those visa officers were in formal suits with long sleeves and females were in high heel shoes. I felt surprised about(because，不能接个介词啊) they did not bare legs or arms in summer shirts, but later could understand that they have such rule on clothing style(这个例子并没有说明能提升trustworthiness). Particularly, visa officers are obliged to meet various people in interview of getting visa. Formal clothes make them stronger and respectable.

To conclude, both school and company should have rule of limitation on clothing, because it will benefit students and employees. Students will keep the same pace with the rest of them; staff in corporation will gain more respect in formal cloth.

感觉这个是不是不好写呢？其实就是说说制服的作用。例子最好能举的浅显一点，不用那么多话。而且这篇语法问题还有不少。恩，加油加油～

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那个...present their school..我是想说repesent代表学校...汗这马虎啊

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When i was pregnant, a friend gave me a book, called Great Lies to Tell a Small kids. In its dirt James--it are gems likes wines make mommy charming and men don't go ball--bald naturally. They like getting their hair cut that way. Now if you feel--are filled with horror that--at the nothion f pulling a toddler ('s leg) like that. A new study in a--the journal of moral education shows that parents regularlly use acception--deception to influence their kids.

We can all recall lies that our parents told to get up--us to do something or stop to do something. If you cross your eyes, they could stay that way, comes to mind. But in the current study, researchers found (that) these turetal ...f..--parental fids are hardly to feel--few and far between. And (that) even parents who preach to their kids about the improtance of being honest,but they may lie--admit to lying to themselves (as well).

The researchers plan to stand--extend their study--studies to see whether all these lies--this lying undermines children's trust. Until when--then, well, keep telling junior that feats--if, spind--he spins around really fast, then stops, his face wil skip--skid around to the back of his head. It could keep be--him busy while mommy (becomes even )more charming.

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it are gems  单数不单数复数不复数的打算怎么地...??
notion 思想观念, 想法, 主意.
fib 说瞎话
spin 眩晕,疾行
skid 打滑,俚语,走下坡路

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花大姐,我来顶你了:lol

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禁止叫我花大姐, 不好听 99# 淡青印象

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今天完成情况很不好!! 也不知道的整个下午都干么了.
10. 5

上午:单词, 做了点家务.
下午: 黄金阅读2篇. 又研究错题..汗 听写SSS. 貌似今天比较简单, 不过细节的连读词汇不容易听出, 还有单复数.
晚上跳舞咯
晚上网速突然慢了起来, 看email费劲, 刷钻也费劲哇.
录口语作业: 录的很不好. 4题听了2遍没明白什么意思??2题还听差了.

听力120没做...

最近觉得准备T的时光让我也变了些许. 从前看似重要的人或事都变的不重要了. 在潜移默化的日子里, 内心好像重新得到了洗礼. 以前渡过了多少幸福且虚度的光阴变得久远起来...忽然让我想起了我喜欢的一个景象: 一片被暮霭笼罩的树林, 黄昏穿梭在树木的缝隙间, 地面是撒落的枯黄叶子, 踏上去吱吱作响. 让人不禁想到的是, 那的空气也会有初秋的味道...:kiss:
                                                                                        10.6.2009. 00:28

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10.6

早上洗衣服了, 这衣服怎么是越洗越多的..老也洗不完 :O
先把昨天的作文写了, 老是让人催呐.
继续120, 黄金阅读.
晚上口语   加油!!!!

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10.5 一年至少上课11个月，可以更好更有效地学习。同意这种说法吗？
急忙的写还是超了10分钟哇...


What is the purpose of the education? The answer is students are obliged to absorb, also practice the knowledge they learnt. It produces people another question: is 11 months studying an effective method to master the knowledge? I believe that students need to have a rest instead of studying continuously. Therefore, 11 months learning is not reasonable.

The effective way to master knowledge is to practice after learning. It needs time to fulfill it. Students will not practice the skills learnt from classes without internships or past-time jobs, which could make them forget their knowledge. Take my working experience as example. I majored in elementary education in college and teaching experience, for me, however, plays a significant role in my future. 11 months studying in college could limit my experience, which will not benefit my career after graduation. Meanwhile, school of education encourages students to find part-time job in some training schools, to teach children English or math. School also assists us to have internship in public school. My three months teaching experience, in last summer, provided me a value opportunity to practice myself, besides, it made me better understand children’s behavior. My working experience supports that students should join in society by working instead of only studying for 11 months.

Too much studying could bring pressure for students and they may feel stressful. 11 months learning in college occupies students’ spare time that they will be frustrated due to losing chance to share with friends and contact with relatives as well as enjoy life. On the other hand, students cannot absorb knowledge well if study for a long time without having a rest like doing any exercising or sport. Students need to relax or release themselves by entertainment. In addition, traveling also could offer them knowledge, such as history, local culture and nations. Therefore, they definitely need time to enjoy and go out of campus.

To conclude, 11 months is too much for students because it limits their chances to practice themselves in society. Education should not use this ineffective way to impart knowledge. Hence, 11 months learning cannot be adopted.

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What is the purpose of the education? The answer is that  表语从句貌似不能省略 that  students are obliged to absorb, also and practice the knowledge they learnt. It produces people 去掉哈 another question: is 11 months studying an effective method to master the knowledge? I believe that students need to have a rest instead of studying continuously. Therefore, 11 months learning is not reasonable.
The effective way to master knowledge is to practice after learning. It needs time to fulfill it. Students will not practice the skills learnt from classes without internships or past-time jobs, which could make them forget their knowledge. Take my working experience as example. I majored in elementary education in college and teaching experience, for me, however, plays a significant role in my future. 11 months studying in college could limit my experience, which will not benefit my career after graduation. Meanwhile, school of education encourages students to find part-time job in some training schools, to teach children English or math. School also assists us to have in having internship in public school. My three months teaching experience, in last summer, provided me with a value opportunity to practice myself, besides, it made me better understand children’s behaviorunderstand children's behavior better. My working experience supports 感觉用proves 好些 that students should join in society by working instead of only studying for 11 months.
Too much studying could bring pressure for students and they may feel stressful. 11 months learning in college occupies students’ spare time that they will be frustrated due to losing chance to share with friends and contact with relatives as well as enjoying life. On the other hand, students cannot absorb knowledge well if study for a long time without having a rest like doing any exercising or sport. Students need to relax or release themselves by entertainment. In addition, traveling also could offer them knowledge, such as history, local culture and nations. Therefore, they definitely need time to enjoy and go out of campus.
额 两个理由都挺充分的   挺好的   
To conclude, 11 months is too much for students because it limits their chances to practice themselves in society. Education should not use this ineffective way to impart告知 感觉不太好  换个词吧  absorb knowledge. Hence, 11 months learning cannot be adopted.

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cap: set one's cap for 试图挑逗男子, 一般指女子追求男子
fray: 使绽开, 散乱.( a frayed cuff 破损的袖子) 吵架, 争论.