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本帖最后由 ieyangj08 于 2009-12-29 22:43 编辑
段落内部的关系
一、段落的基本概念
1 段落的作用
An informative paragraph should tell your readers all they need to know about a single idea, in a logical sequence, without wasting their time with irrelevant detail.段落基本的三要素:一个独立的观点-和Thesis密切相关、一个合理的逻辑顺序、没有无关细节
The structure of a paragraph parallels the structure of an essay in order as well as content.
2段落的长短问题
An essay is like a girl's skirt-it should be long enough to cover the topic(body) and short enough to be interesting!
过短的段落说明信息不足,论证不充分,观点的选择比较肤浅,论述的范围比较窄。
过长的段落说明信息冗余,或者不相关细节过多,讨论过宽。
二、 段落的组成结构
1 The topic sentence
有两个作用:是本段话题的Thesis;是全文Thesis的进一步推广和具体化;一般来说,TS总是在段落开头的第一或者第二句话。
2 Supporting evidence/analysis
由论据和论证组成,为了合理的论证TS. 在论据和论证之间找到一个平衡
3 The conclusion(observation)
在文章的最后一句或者倒数第二句。结论句除了总结上文的论述,还要在此总结上做好向下一个分论点的过度。
段落组成实例
In modern America, as it happens, the importance of overlooking is probably greater than ever before. Even a person trying to lead a quiet, simple life encounters an endless stream of annoyances, errors and petty demands such as paperwork, filing numbers and taxes; long lines at the bank; exponentially aggravating traffic jams and sullen, uncooperative coworkers and neighbors. Those of us who cannot overlook such annoyances will invariably succumb to self-defeating dismay.
三、段落组成的内容
内容基本原则
Orient your reader to the subject.
Tie your ideas together.
Take it easy through technically dense passages.
Arrange your ideas in a logical sequence.
You need to give your readers signposts frequently along the way.
1 USE ORIENTING WORDS AND PHRASES
of course ,as you know ,until now ,obviously ,normally ,previously ,everyone is familiar with ,remember that
2 LET THE NEW AMPLIFY THE OLD
As you link the old with the new, avoid the traditional chronological approach that lists the old things before the new. Usually, you are interested in the old merely as a contrast with the new. For example:
The new Videx compact video disk player weighs one-third and costs less than half of the 1992 model. Furthermore, it can hold up to six times as much programming and uses tiny 3-inch disks instead of the bulky 12-inch ones.
3 ADD EXPLANATORY WORDS AND PHRASES
Generally, the more complex the ideas you have to present, the more explanatory material you will need. In general, it's a good idea to put in more explanations than you think you need .
四、段内句子连接
三个原则
Unity-所有句子讲同一个主题
Coherence-句子之间相互关联,共同构成有机整体
Connection-适当的连接句子
1 利用逻辑连接词连接段落
You'll need some "glue" to bind your sentences together. A paragraph should form a single logical unit.
1) Connective words that describe relationships
Also, however, although, incidentally顺便提一下, therefore, besides, likewise同样地, thus, meanwhile, moreover, usually, furthermore, next, whatever, generally, yet, accordingly 因此, nevertheless然而
2) Connectives that give a sense of time
First, secondly, finally, now, once, when, ultimately, eventually, lastly, later, meanwhile, previously, then, soon, formerly, sometimes
3) Other Connective phrases
To begin with, on the other hand, in brief, in general, more specifically更具体地说, instead of, in addition to, in other words, another way to, for the same reason, no matter what, such a, that’s what/why, in fact, what’s more, in the same way, on the contrary, conversely, as a result, summing up, if so/not
2利用重复
TRY TO HAVE A WORD OR PHRASE SOMEWHERE IN EACH SENTENCE THAT REFERS TO SOMETHING IN A PREVIOUS SENTENCE.
1) pronominal adjectives
this, that, these, which, their, his, its, her
2) 人称和其他代词指代
Dr. Quark testified that the only scientific value of creationism lies in its position among primitive superstitions and mythologies. His testimony helped strike down laws requiring its teachings to be included in biology textbooks.
3) Simple repetition. Carry the same nouns from one sentence to the next. 核心词重复
Scientists map the winds and precipitation inside hurricanes by flying specially instrumented aircraft through them. These aircraft must withstand stresses of up to six times the force of gravity.
All the sentences in a paragraph should be logically related.
3利用强调词 INTENSIVES
1)The whale is the largest living mammal. The largest whales weigh over 150 tons, are 100 feet long, and consume 5 tons of food each day.
The whale is by far the largest living mammal. In fact, the largest whales weigh as much as 150 tons and grow as long as 100 feet. These enormous animals consume 5 tons of food each day.
2)useful intensives
Especially, as much as, even if/though, increasingly, by far, so…that, more importantly, highly, only, particularly, in fact, very, significantly, quite, such, most, unique, at all, above all, indeed, in any case
Misusing or overusing intensives can weaken your writing. Use them like garlic -- sparingly. |
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