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连词
同样的一篇作文,只要稍加变动,就能使文章增色不少,那么都要做什么呢?文法层面上,三点足矣——替换零星词汇、调整语序、加衔接词。替换词汇不是要让文章里有多么的用词多样,而是力主将思路更精确的表达。调整语序仅仅增加一些符合语感的倒装就可以让作文上升一个档次。而以上两个都不如加衔接词来得性价比高。

1 比较and和or
1) 并列结构中,or通常用于否定句,and用于肯定句。
2) 但有时and 也可用于否定句。请注意其不同特点:
There is no air or water in the moon.   There is no air and no water on the moon.

2 for是并列连词,不能置于含两个并列分句的句子的句首,只能将其放在两个分句中间
(错) For he is ill, he is absent today. (对) He is absent today, for he is ill.

3 比较so和 such
such 是形容词,修饰名词或名词词组,so是副词,只能修饰形容词或副词。so 还可与表示数量的形容词many,few,much, little连用,形成固定搭配。
so + adj.   such + a(n) + n.                      so foolish   such a fool
so + adj. + a(n) + n.                                so nice a flower   such a nice flower
so + adj. + n. (pl.)   such +n. (pl.)             so many/ few flowers   such nice flowers
so + adj. + n. [不可数]  such +n. [不可数]    so much/little money.   such rapid progress
                                                              so many people   such a lot of people

Addition:
furthermore, moreover, too, also, in the second place, again, in addition, even more, next, further, last, lastly, finally, besides, and, or, nor, first, second, secondly, etc. a further, additionally, again, also, and, and then, another, as well, aside from, aside from this, besides, conjointly, coupled with, equally important, even more, finally, further, furthermore, in addition, in addition to, in due course, incidentally, lastly, more important, moreover, neither ... nor ..., next, next to that, nor, not only ... but ..., not only ... but also ..., not only this, but this as well, not to mention, on top of that, once again, once more, or, other, over again, plus, together with, too, what is more

Alternative:
alternatively, among, another, between, either ... or ..., else, instead, neither ... nor ..., on the one hand ... on the other hand ..., or, rather, whether, whether or not

Apposition:同位
and, because, for, furthermore, in any event, in order to, in other words, likewise, namely, on the other hand, similarly, that is to say, to sum up, yet

Cause:
because, on account of, since, for that reason, and so, as, as a result, as for, as for those, because, because of, being that, different from this, due to, for that, for the reason that, for as much as, given that, hence, henceforth, if ... then ..., in response to, in spite of, in that case, in the end, in view of, in as much as, now that, on account of, over all, owing to, seeing that, since, so, so that, that is why, therefore, thus, ultimately, wherefore

Chain:
basically ... similarly ... as well ..., because ... therefore ..., first ... second ... third ..., generally ... furthermore ... finally ..., in the first place, in the first place ... also ... lastly ..., just in the same way ... finally ..., just then, lastly, namely, not . . . but, on the one hand ... on the other hand ..., or both, pursuing this further ... finally ..., so forth 等等, so on, sometimes ... but not always ..., the former ... the latter ..., to be sure ... additionally ... lastly ...

Clarification:
that is to say, to clarify, in other words, to rephrase it, to explain, to put it another way, actually, another way, especially, for instance, i.e., in other words, in particular, in this case, mainly, namely, one case that, particularly, specifically, that is, that is to say, to put it in another way, to rephrase it, up to a point

Combinations:
after a while, after all, another time, apart from, as shown above, as though, as what, at present, at present, but despite a, but even with, but now, by contrast, by that time, even after 即使, for all, for some time, from here on, just because, long after, more often, once all, over the years, since then, so often, that too, to put it in another way, until recently

Common Adverbs:
absolutely, after all, barely 仅仅, basically, clearly, clearly, coincidentally, concurrently 同时发生地, eventually, fortunately, hardly ever 几乎从不, interestingly, mostly, naturally, obviously, presently, respectively, suddenly, surely, tellingly 有效地, truly, typically, wholly

Comparison:
in the same way, in like manner, by the same token 出于同样的原因, likewise, similarly, in similar fashion, alike, also, although, another ... like, as ... as ..., balanced against, but, but another, by comparison, by the same token, compared to, conversely 相反地, even, in similar, in similar fashion, in the same way, just as ... so too, less than, likewise, meanwhile, merely, more ... than ..., on the other hand, rather, rather than, similarly, up against, whereas 然而

Concession:
to be sure, granted, of course, it is true, admittedly, after all, albeit, all the same, although, and yet, at any rate, but even so, despite of, even so, even though, granted that, however, in any case, in spite of 尽管, totally, nevertheless, nonetheless 但是, notwithstanding 尽管, regardless, regardless of, still, though, yet

Conclusion:
in conclusion, to conclude, finally, all in all, as a final point, as a result, at last, consequently, finally, hence, if not, if so, implies that, in conclusion, in retrospect 回顾过去, in that case, in the end, last but not least, lastly, otherwise, that being the case, then, therefore, thereupon, thus, ultimately, under those circumstances, whence

Condition:
as long as, as such, even if, given that, if, in case, in the event that, on condition that, on the condition that, only if, provided that, so long as, unless, whether ... or...

Continuation:
as, as far as, following this further, henceforward, hereafter, immediately thereafter, in the same way, last of all, not long after, so far, thus far, together with, up to now, with respect to

Contrast:
yet, on the contrary, but, and yet, in contrast, however, nevertheless, notwithstanding, though, nonetheless, on the other hand, otherwise, after all, at the same time, but, by way of contrast, conversely, however, in contrast, ironically, on the other hand, paradoxically, still though, when in fact, whereas, while, yet after all, all the same, although, as opposed to, at the same time, but, but at the same time, conversely, despite, different from, even though, for all that, however, in contrast, in the other hand, instead, nevertheless, nonetheless, notwithstanding, on the contrary, on the one hand ... on the other hand ..., otherwise, some ... others ..., still, then ... now ..., though, whilst, yet

Deduction:
and so, and then, if not, if so, in other words, in that case, otherwise, then, this implies that, when in fact, while this is true

Demonstrative:
altogether, as this, both, both . . . and, demonstratively, in this way, that, these, this, those, together, toward, towards, which, which ... that ..., who, whom, whose

Effect:
or result: therefore, thus, consequently, hence, accordingly, as a result, accordingly, as a result, consequently, finally, for this reason, hence, if and only if, in consequence, ..., so, so much, so that, therefore, thus

Emphasize:
above all, absolutely, according as, always, as ... as ..., as a matter of fact, by all means, certainly, definitely, emphatically, eternally, even that, for sure, ..., forever, in any case, in fact, indeed, mainly, more importantly, more specifically, naturally, never, nevertheless, obviously, of course, particularly, peculiarly, positively, specifically, surely, surprisingly, undeniably, undoubtedly, unquestionably, whatsoever, whatsoever, without a doubt, without reservation

Evidence and Proof:
a significant, all things considered, analogously, another possibility would be, another significant, as a, consequence, as can be expected, as noted by, at the end of, by similar argumentation, empirically, evidently, for the same reason, for this reason, given these facts, in accordance with, in agreement, in all instances, in fact, in hindsight, in simple terms, in such cases, in terms of, in the final analysis, in the overall analysis, in view of, most importantly, of greatest significance, on this basis, one ... such, one such, since, such a case, surprisingly, that is, the role of, thereof, this coincides with, this implies that

Example:
a case in point, an example of, another example of, as an illustration, as demonstrated by, by way of example, e.g., especially, even this, that, these those, for example, for instance, for one thing, in another case, in fact, in particular, in this case, in this situation, namely, notably, on this occasion, particularly, specifically, such, such as, take the case of, that is, the following example

Exception:
aside from, despite, however, in spite of, nevertheless, nonetheless, once in a while, sometimes, still, yet

Exemplification or Illustration:
to illustrate, as an illustration, to demonstrate, specifically, for example, for instance

Generalization:
as a general rule, as a rule, as a rule of thumb, as usual, by induction, for the most part, generally, generally speaking, in most cases, more generally, on the whole, ordinarily, usually

Idioms:
at most, at the outside, by and by, from time to time, in the light of, more or less, or else, sooner or later, the other day, up to the present time

Importance:
above all, chiefly, for the most part, largely, last but not least, least, less important, mainly, more important, most important, most of all, of greater, predominantly, primarily, principally

Intensification:
indeed, undoubtedly, to repeat, yes, no, certainly, by all means, surely, without doubt, of course, in fact

Introduction:
admittedly, as an illustration, as for, as in the case of, assuredly, at first glance, at this level, by way of example, certainly, concerning the ..., first and foremost, first and yet, first of all, for example, for instance, for one thing, generally speaking, in all likelihood, in general, in my opinion, in particular, in this situation, likewise, such as, to illustrate, with regard to, with respect to

Logical:
category UNDER CONSTRUCTION, for this reason, from now, henceforth, henceforward, in other words, in that case, it is true that, otherwise, provided that, such that, thereby, this being so, though ... yet, whether ... or ...

Phrases:
as was previously stated, at the very least, at this point, but even more, by all means, by means of, by the time, either or both, first and most importantly, for the most part, generally speaking, given these facts, in furtherance of, in light of, in the following, in the subsequent, in what follows, last but not least, often times, once in a while, to a lesser extend, to change the topic, to get back to the point, what followed

Place-Location and Description:
above, across, across from, adjacent to, ahead, along, alongside, amid, at, at the rear, at the side, athwart, atop, away from, below, beneath, beside, beyond closer to, down, eastward, elsewhere, far, far off, farther on, fore, forth, forward, further on, here, hereupon, in back of, in front of, in the back, in the background, in the distance, in the forefront, in the foreground, in the front, in the middle, inside, into, near, nearby, neighboring on, northerly, on, on the side, onto, opposite to, out of, out of sight, outside, over there, side by side, somewhere, southerly, straight ahead, surrounding, there, through, throughout, to the side of, toward the middle, underneath, upon, upright, upside down, westward where, wherever, within sight

Place:
here, beyond, adjacent to, there, wherever, neighboring, on, nearby, opposite to, above, below

Pronouns:
if they clearly refer to a specific word or phrase: this, these, those, that, his, her, it, its, they, their, theirs, our, your

Purpose:
because of this, for fear that, for this purpose, in order that, in order to, in the hope that, so that, to that end, to this end, toward this end, with the goal of, with this in mind in order that, to that end, to this end, so that, for this purpose

Qualification:
almost, perhaps, never, nearly, maybe, always, probably, although, frequently almost, although, always, frequently, in somewhat, may be, might, nearly, never, perhaps, probably, some

Quantifiers:
a bit of, a couple of, a few, a good deal of, a great deal of, a lack of, a little, a lot of, all, all of the, as much as, at least, enough, evenly, few, for all, for any, for each, for every, in the first place, less than, lesser, little, little by little, lots of, lower, many, minus, more, more than, most, most of the, much less, much more, none, none of the, not much, plenty of,  secondly, ... thirdly, several, some

Reference:
according to, as acknowledged, as for, as part of, as told by, away from, by far, concerning this, considering this, how, in respect to, in this regard, in this respect, on the subject of, other than that, regarding, set forth, speaking about, that, the fact that, therefore, Vis-à-vis, what, which, who, whoever, whom, why, with regard to

Reformulation:
as I have noted, as I stated, as indicated above, as noted earlier, in brief, in other words, in short, in summary, in words, let me rephrase it, on the whole, perennially, point in fact, put differently

Reservation:
admittedly, despite, even so, even though, indeed, nevertheless, notwithstanding, regardless

Resumption:
all the same, anyhow, anyway, as I was saying, at any rate, by the way, either, either way, in any, in either case, incidentally, to change the subject, to change the topic, to get back to the point, to resume, to resume anyhow, to return to the subject, whatever, whichever

Sequence:
after, afterward, again, also, and, at first, at this point, before this, concurrently, consequently, finally, first of all, first, second, third, etc., for a start, hence, in the end, in the first place, initially, later on, next, previously, secondly, simultaneously, still, subsequently, then, therefore, thirdly, thus, to begin with, too

Similarity:
analogous to, as, by the same token, correspondingly, equally, in a like manner, in like fashion, in the same fashion, in the same way, just as, just as ... so too, just as ... too ..., kind of, likewise, other things equal, outwardly, point in fact, seemingly, similarly, sort of, unlike

Summary:
all together, altogether, anyway, as has been mentioned, as I have said, as I stated to summarize, in short, in brief, in sum, in summary, to sum up as it was previously stated, as mentioned earlier, as we have seen, briefly, by and large, for all that, given these facts, given these points, in all, in brief, in conclusion, in other words, in short, in sum, in summary, on the whole, overall, so, summing up, to make a long story short, to put it briefly, to sum up, to summarize

Time:
after, afterward, afterwards, ago, along the way, always, as long as, as of, as when, as yet, at first, at last, at least, at length, at once, at one time, at that time, at the same time, back then, before, before long, beforehand, currently, during, earlier, eventually, finally, first of all, first, second, third, etc., following, forever, formerly, from now on, immediately, immediately before, immediately following, in due time, in parallel, in retrospective, in the end, in the future, in the long run, in the meantime, in the short run, initially later, meantime, meanwhile, most recently, never, next, now, nowadays, often, oftentimes, once, overtime, previously, prior to, right now, shortly, shortly after, shortly thereafter, simultaneously, since, since then, so far, so long, sometimes, soon, soon afterward, soon then, subsequently, then, thereafter, this time, till now, twice a day, until, until now, up to, very soon, when, whenever, while, without delay while, immediately, never, after, later, earlier, always, when, soon, whenever, meanwhile, sometimes, in the meantime, during, afterwards, now, until now, next, following, once, then, at length, simultaneously, so far, this time, subsequently

Unclassified:
about, afore, already, as if, as well as, despite of, far away, forthwith, from ... to ..., from then on, hereby, herein, hereinafter, hereof, heretofore, in furtherance of, in lieu of, in this sense, inasmuch as, insofar as, only, onwards, other, somehow, therein, trailing by, under, until then, unto, up to this point, whereby, wherein, whereof, whereupon, within

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发表于 2010-1-4 13:16:31 |只看该作者
本帖最后由 ieyangj08 于 2010-1-4 13:17 编辑

哈哈,这个是赞扬还是批评呢?不过的确很精辟,牛人 46# 爱妳不变

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发表于 2010-1-5 23:17:04 |只看该作者
最近实验室事情比较多,元旦三天连着加班,加上每天复习作文,今天终于光荣的病倒了。趁着挂水的时间复习了3list的红宝和部分新东方的作文笔记。期待尽快好起来,加油~

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一天挂两次水,整个人一点力气也没有,只能吃些面条和粥,期待自己尽快好起来。下午挂水时,坚持看了3个单元的红宝。挂水不能上网,只能复习红宝了。

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身体终于恢复了些,上来冒个泡,庆贺之。开始补语法、作业3,加油!

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发表于 2010-1-7 09:48:43 |只看该作者
本帖最后由 ieyangj08 于 2010-1-7 10:12 编辑

动词、动词语态

1 动词有五种形态,分别是:原形(Original Form)、第三人称单数形式(Singular From in Third Personal)、过去式(Past Form)、过去分词(Past Participle)、现在分词(Present Participle)

2 系动词 (Link Verb)
本身有词义,但不能单独用作谓语,后边必须跟表语(亦称补语),构成系表结构说明主语的状况、性质、特征等情况。
有些系动词又是实义动词,该动词表达实义时,有词义,可单独作谓语,例如:
He fell ill yesterday.   fell是系动词,后跟补足语,说明主语情况。
He fell off the ladder.  fell是实义动词,单独作谓语。
1)状态系动词
用来表示主语状态,只有be一词,He is a teacher.
2)持续系动词
用来表示主语继续或保持一种状况或态度,主要有keep, rest, remain, stay, lie, stand,
He always kept silent at meeting.   This matter rests a mystery.  
3)表像系动词
用来表示"看起来像"这一概念,主要有seem, appear, look,
He looks tired.  He seems (to be) very sad.  
4)感官系动词
感官系动词主要有feel, smell, sound, taste,  
This kind of cloth feels very soft.  This flower smells very sweet.
5)变化系动词
这些系动词表示主语变成什么样,变化系动词主要有become, grow, turn, fall, get, go, come, run.
He became mad after that.   She grew rich within a short time.  。
6)终止系动词
表示主语已终止动作,主要有prove, trun out, 表达"证实","变成"之意,例如:
The rumor proved false.  The search proved difficult.  His plan turned out a success.  (turn out表终止性结果)

3 不用被动语态的情况
1) 不及物动词或动词短语无被动语态:
appear, die, disappear, end (vi. 结束), fail, happen, last, lie, remain, sit, spread, stand,break out, come true, fall asleep, keep silence, lose heart, take place.
After the fire, very little remained of my house.
比较: rise, fall, happen是不及物动词;raise, seat是及物动词。
The price has risen.   The accident happened last week.   The price has been raised.   Please be seated.
2) 不能用于被动语态的及物动词或动词短语:
fit, have, hold, marry, own, wish, cost, notice, watch agree with, arrive at / in, shake hands with, succeed in, suffer from, happen to, take part in, walk into, belong to
This key just fits the lock.   Your story agrees with what had already been heard.
3) 系动词无被动语态
appear, be become, fall, feel, get, grow, keep, look, remain, seem, smell, sound, stay, taste, turn
It sounds good.
4) 带同源宾语的及物动词,反身代词,相互代词,不能用于被动语态:die, death, dream, live, life
She dreamed a bad dream last night.
5) 当宾语是不定式时,很少用于被动语态。
(对) She likes to swim.
(错) To swim is liked by her.

4 主动形式表示被动意义
1)wash, clean, cook, iron, look, cut, sell, read, wear, feel, draw, write, sell, drive…
The book sells well.这本书销路好。
This knife cuts easily. 这刀子很好用。
2)blame, let(出租), remain, keep, rent, build
I was to blame for the accident.
Much work remains.
3) 在need, require, want, worth (形容词), deserve后的动名词必须用主动形式。
The door needs repairing.= The door needs to be repaired.
This room needs cleaning. 这房间应该打扫一下。
This book is worth reading.这本书值得一读。
4) 特殊结构:make sb. heard / understood (使别人能听见/理解自己),have sth. done ( 要某人做某事)。

5 被动形式表示主动意义
be determined, be pleased, be graduated (from), be finished, be prepared (for), be occupied (in), get marries
He is graduated from a famous university.
注意: 表示同某人结婚,用marry sb. 或get married to sb. 都可。
He married a rich girl.
He got married to a rich girl.

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发表于 2010-1-7 10:23:41 |只看该作者
本帖最后由 ieyangj08 于 2010-1-7 10:52 编辑

动词不定式、分词、动名词

1 省to 的动词不定式
1) 情态动词 ( 除ought 外,ought to):
2) 使役动词 let, have, make:
3) 感官动词 see, watch, look at, notice , observe, hear, listen to, smell, feel, find 等后作宾补,省略to。
在被动语态中则to 不能省掉
I saw him dance. =He was seen to dance.
The boss made them work the whole night.=They were made to work the whole night.
4) would rather,had better:
5) Why… / why not…:
6) help 可带to,也可不带to, help sb (to) do sth:
7) but和except:but前是动词do时,后面出现的动词用不带to的动词不定式。He wants to do nothing but go out.
8) 由and, or和than连接的两个不定式,第二个to 可以省去:He wants to move to France and marry the girl.
9) 通常在discover, imagine, suppose, think, understand等词后,可以省去to be: He is supposed (to be) nice.  

2 动名词与不定式语义不同的有11 组:
1)stop to do——stop doing
2) forget to do 忘记要去做某事—— forget doing 忘记做过某事
3)remember to do——remember doing
4 )regret to do 对要做的事遗憾 未做—— regret doing 对做过的事遗憾 后悔
5)cease to do 长时间,甚至永远停做某事—— cease doing 短时停止做某事,以后还会接着做
6 )try to do 尽力做某事,事情难——try doing 尝试做某事,事情简单
7)go on to do—— go on doing
8 )afraid to do 害怕做某事—— afraid doing 一向害怕做某事,表示习惯
9)interested to do 对做某事感兴趣,想了解某事——interested doing 对某种想法感兴趣
10) mean to do—— mean doing
11) begin/ start to do—— begin/ start doing 开始一项较长时间或经常性活动

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独立主格、特殊词

1 独立主格结构的构成:
名词(代词)+现在分词、过去分词;The test finished, we began our holiday.
名词(代词)+形容词;
名词(代词)+副词
名词(代词)+不定式;
名词(代词) +介词短语构成。

2 独立主格结构的特点:
1)独立主格结构的逻辑主语与句子的主语不同,它独立存在。
2)名词或代词与后面的分词,形容词,副词,不定 式,介词等是主谓关系。
3)独立主格结构一般有逗号与主句分开。
The president assassinated, the whole country was in deep sorrow.
Weather permitting, we are going to visit you tomorrow.
This done, we went home.
The meeting gone over, everyone tired to go home earlier.
He came into the room, his ears red with cold.
He came out of the library, a large book under his arm.

3 With的复合结构作独立主格
表伴随时,既可用分词的独立结构,也可用with的复合结构
He stood there, his hand raised. = He stood there, with his hand raise.

4 独立主格结构使用介词的问题  
介词是in 时,其前后的两个名词均不加任何成分(如物主代词或冠词),也不用复数。但 with 的复合结构不受此限制
A robber burst into the room, knife in hand. ( hand前不能加his)。
表人体部位的词做逻辑主语时,及物动词用现在分词,不及物动词用过去分词
He lay there, his teeth set, his hand clenched, his eyes looking straight up.

5 感官动词 + doing/to do
感官动词 see, watch, observe, notice, look at, hear, listen to, smell, taste, feel + do 表示动作的完整性,真实性+doing 表示动作的连续性,进行性
I saw him work in the garden yesterday.  (强调"我看见了"这个事实)
I saw him working in the garden yesterday.(强调"我见他正干活"这个动作)
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分析写作概述

    分析写作部分是GRE General Test的一个新部分,首先引进于2002年十月,测试你的批判思维和分析写作能力。它评估你在以下方面的能力:表达和支持复杂观点,分析一个论点,论证目的明确过程连贯。它并不评估具体的内容知识。
    分析写作部分包括两个独立时间的分析写作任务:
    1.一个45分钟的“就一个Issue表明你的观点”任务
    2.一个30分钟的“分析一个Argument”任务
    你可以在两个Issue题目中选择一个。每个题目都表达了对一个广泛关注话题的观点,你可以从任何你喜欢的角度讨论它,只要你能提供相关的原因和例子来解释和支撑你的观点
    不可以选择Argument题目。它的要求与Issue不同:它要求评论一个给定的,通过讨论它的合理性。你需要考虑Argument的逻辑完整性,而非同意或不同意这个观点的角度
    这两个任务是互补的,一个要求你,通过选择一个观点并提供证据支撑你的观点,来构建自己的论证过程,而另一个要求你评论其他人的论证过程,通过评论他的观点和他提供的证据。

准备分析写作

    每个人都应该在考试之前花一些时间准备AW,即使是最有经验和自信的作家。复习考查的能力,怎样评分,评分标准和分数水平的介绍,样本题目,已评分范文和阅卷人的评论等都是非常重要的。
    AW部分的题目涉及的范围很广——从精细的艺术人文到社会和物理科学,但没有题目要求具体的专业知识。实际上,每一个题目都经过测试以保证它拥有以下的重点特征:
    1.无论GRE应试者的学习领域或自身兴趣,他们都可以理解题目并且很容易讨论它;
    2.题目能够引发负责性的思考和说服力强的写作,这些正是老师们认为在研究生阶段成功的关键;
    3.答卷可以在内容和阐述方式上呈现出多样性。
    为了帮助你准备GRE考试的AW部分,GRE program公布了整个题库,你的考试题目将出自此题库。你会发现复习Issue和Argument库是很有帮助的。你可以通过下列方式得到公布的题库:登陆www.gre.org/pracmats.html 或者写信给PO Box 6000, Princeton, NJ 08541-6000.

AW部分的考试策略

    提前安排好你的时间是非常重要的。在Issue任务45分钟的时间限制内,你需要足够的时间选择一个题目,思考你选择的题目,列提纲和完成写作。在Argument任务里有限的30分钟内,你需要足够的时间去分析argument,列要点和组织文章。虽然阅卷人理解你写作时的时间限制,并会考虑你的答卷是“最初的草稿”,但你仍然希望它是你在考试环境能写出的最好文章。
    在每个写作的最后留一些时间来检查一下明显的错误。虽然一个偶然的拼写或语法错误不会影响你的分数,但严重并且多个错误将会降低文章整体的有效性从而降低你的分数。
    在分析写作之后你可以选择十分钟的休息。在其他考试部分之间有一分钟的间断。你可以在每个预定的休息内补充自己的草稿纸。

AW部分评分方法

    每一份答卷都会根据GRE分析写作评分指南中的标准(见27和27页)整体评为0-6分。整体评分是指每一份答卷都作为一个整体参加评阅。阅卷人不会把答卷分成几个组成部分,并按照一定的标准来给分,这些标准诸如,观点、文章组织、句子结构、语言等。相反,阅卷人会以一种综合的方式考虑答卷的特征,根据答卷的整体质量进行评分。例如,好的文章组织和差的文章组织会成为阅卷人整体印象的一部分,从而会影响分数。但文章组织作为一个明显的特征,并没有具体的权重。
    一般来说,GRE阅卷人是学院和大学的教师,他们在写作和批评思维很重要的课程上有丰富的教学经验。所有的GRE阅卷人都经过详细的培训,通过了严格的GRE资格考试,并且确保他们能够保证评分的精确性。
    为确保评分的公正和客观
    1. 答卷被随机地分发给阅卷者;
    2. 阅卷人不知道任何答题人的信息;
    3. 每份答卷都由两个阅卷人评分;
    4. 阅卷人不知道这份答卷可能得到的另一个分数;
    5. 评分过程要求每份答卷从两个阅卷人那里得到相同或近似的分数;如果两个阅卷人给出的分数相差很大,这份答卷将由第三个阅卷人进行仲裁。
    两篇写作得分的平均分作为最终的报告分数。第29页上的分数等级描述提供了如何去解释AW部分总分的信息。评阅AW部分的重点在于批判思考和分析写作能力。
    你AW部分的答卷将会被ETS的文章相似性侦探软件审核,在评分过程中也会被资深的阅卷人审核。由于独立思考在美国研究生院和大学中的重要性,ETS保留了取消任何一个应试者的考试成绩的权利,一旦有潜在的证据证明答卷中包含(不限于)以下任一情形:
    1. 文章与其他一篇或几篇GRE答卷在本质上相似;
    2. 引用已发表或未发表文章中的语言或观点,但未注明;
    3. 未加声明地使用与他人合作的成果,并未注明他人的贡献;
    4. 答卷中的观点或词汇来自他处或由他人准备。
    当以上一种或多种情况发生时,根据ETS的专业评审,你的文章没有反映独立的分析写作能力,而这些能力正是考试所要考查的。所以,ETS必须取消作文的分数,并且不能报告GRE General Test的分数,因为作文分数是其中必要的部分。
    被取消分数的应试者考试费会被没收,并且需要以后再次申请参加整个GRE General Test。将来寄送到学院和大学的分数报告上不会出现分数取消或是取消的原因的记录。

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在Issue任务中表达你的观点

理解Issue任务

    “在一个Issue中表达你的观点”的任务评估你对一个普遍感兴趣的问题批判性思考的能力和在写作中清除地表达你的观点的能力。引号中的每一个题目都表达了对一个话题的观点,应试者可以从多个角度进行讨论,还可以考虑多种不同的情形和条件。你的任务是为你对论题的观点提出一个有说服力的案例。一定要认真阅读题目并从多个方面进行思考,思考与那些观点相关的复杂性。然后在你想展开的地方做标记,列出可以用来支持你的观点的主要原因和例子。
    Issue任务在你的答题方面提供很大的自由度。虽然必须围绕中心论题是很重要的,但是你可以很自由地用想用的方法论述。例如,你可以:
    1. 完全同意,完全不同意,或部分同意题目的看法而不同意其他部分;
    2. 质疑观点中可能包含的假设
    3. 定义题目中的任何词语,特别是你定义或应用一个词语的方式对你在issue中阐释观点很重要;
    4. 指出为什么题目中的观点在一些情况下有效,而在其他情况下未必;
    5. 评价与你自己的观点相反的观点
    6. 使用多个相关的例子或一个详细的例子来论证你的观点。
    给你的答卷评分的GRE阅卷人不是寻找一个“正确”的答案-实际上,并没有正确的立场。相反,阅卷人评判的是你在issue中表达和阐释一个论点从而支持你的立场的能力。
  
理解写作的内容:目的和观众

     Issue任务是一个关于批判性思考和说服性写作的练习。这个任务的目的是评判你的以下能力:进行一个有说服力的论证从而支持你在Issue中的观点,在写作中有效地将这个论证表达给学术读者。你的读者包括学院和大学的老师,他们都是受过训练的GRE阅卷人,能够应用评分标准指南中的“在一篇Issue中表达你的观点”(见第27页)来进行评分。
     为了能够更清晰地了解GRE阅卷人是如何应用Issue评分标准来给实际的答卷打分,你应该回顾下已评分的范文和阅卷人的评论。范文,尤其是5分6分的范文,可以告诉你很多成功的策略,包括组织文章、阐述、以及传递一个有说服力的观点。阅卷人的评论讨论了分析和写作的具体方面,比如例子的使用、阐述和支持、组织、语言流畅、以及词语选择。对每一篇答卷,评论都指出了特别有说服力的方面以及影响文章整体有效性的方面。

准备Issue任务
   
    因为Issue任务的目的在于评估学习中培养起来的有效写作能力,所以它既不需要学习特殊的课程,也不要求受过特殊的训练。
    你可能会发现许多大学作文课本中都提供的说服性写作很有用,但即使这些建议,对Issue任务来说仍然过于技术和专业化。你不需要掌握批判性思维、写作术语或技巧;然而,你应该运用各种推理、证据、例子来支持自己的观点。例如,一个话题任务要求你考虑政府资助艺术馆的重要性。如果你的观点是政府资助很重要,你可以论证艺术的重要性,解释艺术馆是公众接触艺术的地方。如果你觉得政府不应该资助艺术馆,你应该指出在有限的财政情况下,资助艺术馆不如资助其他更紧迫的项目。或者,你觉得政府只应该在特定的情况下支持艺术,你可能会关注艺术的标准、文化导向或者政治条件,这些因素将决定资助与否及资助方式。你的观点并不重要,重要的是在阐述观点的过程中表现出的思辨能力。
    备考Issue任务的绝佳途径就是练习写作一些已公布的题目。没有“最好的”方法:有些人喜欢开始忽略 45分钟的时间限制;有些人喜欢一开始就尝试计时测验并且一直在时间限制下练习。无论你用什么方法练习,你都该复习任务指南,然后
    1、 仔细阅读题目的陈述,确保自己理解关联事项;如果有疑问,与老师或同学讨论;
    2、 由题目联系到你自己的观点和经历、曾经读过或亲历过的事件、或你认识的人;这些构成了你的知识基础,你可以找出令人信服的理由和例子以加强、否定、或支持你的论点;
    3、 确定自己的立场——你可以完全同意、反对、或部分同意题目的观点;
    4、 确定有说服力的证据(理由和事例)来支持自己的观点。
    记住这是一个关于批评性思考和说服性写作的任务。因此,你会发现通过问自己下面的问题有助于发掘题目的复杂性:  
    1、 关键问题到底是什么?
    2、 我完全或者部分同意题目的陈述吗?为什么或为什么不?
    3、  该陈述是否做出了某些假设?若是,它们合理吗?
    4、  该陈述是否仅在特定条件下成立?若是,它们是什么?
    5、 我解释题目中某些词语或概念吗?
    6、 如果我选取了某一立场,什么理由支持我的立场?
    7、 我能用哪些例子(现实的或假设的)阐述理由、解释观点?哪一个例子最有说服力?
    一旦选定立场,你应该考虑反对意见,问自己:
    1、 别人会用什么理由反驳或削弱我的观点
    2、 我该怎样承认或反驳这些观点
     谋篇布局时,你可以总结自己的观点,并简要的记录你将会怎样支持你的观点。当你做完了这些,浏览你的笔记,并决定怎样组织你的文章。接着写文章阐述你对这个话题的立场。即便你不写一篇完整的文章,你也会发现练习几个Issue题目并列出自己的架构是很有帮助的。在你练习了一些题目之后,试着在45分钟内完成几篇答卷,从而了解在实际考试中怎样使用你的时间。
     向教授批判性思维和写作的老师求教,或与其他同学互相批改同一话题的习作并参照评分指南讨论其他人的文章都将有所裨益。试着找出每一篇文章中满足或不满足评分标准中每一档分数的地方。将自己的答卷和评分指南对照,能够帮你找出自己有待提高的地方和方法。

选择Issue题目

    General Test 将包括两道已公布的Issue题目,你必须从其中选择一个。从你见到那两道题的一刻,45分钟计时就开始,因此别在选题上花太多时间。试着又快又好地选择一个你准备得更充分的题目。
    选题前,仔细阅读每道题。然后判断哪道更利于你展开有效而逻辑性强的论述。你可以这样问自己:
    1、 我对哪题更感兴趣
    2、 哪道题目更靠近我的专业背景或个人经历
    3、 哪道题目有利于我清晰地解释并辩护自己的观点
    4、 哪道题目有利于我提出强有力的理由和例证以支持自己的观点?
    你对这些问题的回答将帮助你做出自己的选择。

答卷格式
    只要认为能够有效表达观点,你尽可以以任何方式自由规划文章。你可以运用(但不一定非要用)英语作文或高级写作课上学到的写作技巧。GRE阅卷人对某种破题策略或写作风格并无偏好;事实上,GRE阅卷人接受培训时,浏览了数百份内容与形式不同的答卷,但都表现出相近水平的思辨与说服性写作能力。例如,一些6分的作文可能首先简单总结作者的立场,然后详细提出将要论述的主要观点。另一些文章可能通过作出预测、提出系列问题、描述场景或定义引言中的模糊条目从而引出作者观点。给出多个事例或一个深入阐述的例子均可获得高分。阅读样例话题答卷,特别是5分与6分答卷,学习其他作者是如何成功地展开并组织他们的文章的
    你可以根据需要使用较多或较少段落。比如,当你转向一个新的论点时,你需要从起一个段落。重要的不是例子数量、段落的数量、或者文章形式,而是你向学术读者传达观点时的说服力、清晰度和技巧

Issue题目样例

“In our time, specialists of all kinds are highly overrated. We need more generalists—people who can provide broad perspectives."

本题策略

     这一陈述提出了几个相关问题:通才和专才的定义是什么?他们对社会的贡献是什么?社会真的需要更多通才吗?专才真的被高估了吗?
     针对该话题,你可以采取以下基本立场:是的,社会需要更多通才,专才被高估了。不,恰恰相反。或者,它依赖于多种因素。或者,二者在今天的文化中都很重要,都没被高估。你的分析可以从某一特定的社会或国家、一个或多个社会领域,或各种情况中选取例子。你可以聚焦于通才和专才在通信、交通、政治、信息或技术领域中的角色。只要你能运用相关理由和事例支持自己的观点,上述各种方式都没有问题。
    在你选定立场之前,花点时间重读题目,考虑以下问题以助分析:
    1、 专才和通才的区别是什么?他们各自的优势是什么?
    2、 这种区别在各个领域和情况都存在吗?是否有可能有时一个专才也需要有非常广泛的知识和能力才能做好工作?
    3、 在你的领域里,专才和通才是怎么工作的?
    4、 你觉得社会如何评价专才和通才?是否专才在某些情况被高估,另一些情况没有?
    5、 社会真的需要比现在更多的通才么?若是,他们有什么用
    现在你可以把思路归为两类:
    1、 支持题目的理由和事例;
    2、 反对题目的理由和事例。

    如果你发现其中一个明显比另一个更有说服力,考虑从这一方面入手。论证时,记住另一面的观点,你可以辩驳它
    如果两方观点都很有说服力,考虑构建一个与题目条件不同,更多限制或更复杂的情况。随后你可以采用双方的理由和事例论证自己的观点。

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