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zhangheng1020
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发表于 2005-12-13 18:11:09 |只看该作者

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===============zhangheng1020 作业贴链接===================

第一次作业

issue

argument

[ Last edited by zhangheng1020 on 2005-12-14 at 19:43 ]

killure
to kill and to cure

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发表于 2005-12-13 19:01:48 |只看该作者

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发表于 2005-12-13 20:53:46 |只看该作者

快把帖子题目改了吧，人满啦

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发表于 2005-12-13 23:16:42 |只看该作者

我也要参加！！！
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发表于 2005-12-14 16:24:09 |只看该作者

大贴就要沉了,定一下先!
argument去了:)

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发表于 2005-12-14 16:51:34 |只看该作者

===============题目链接帖===============
第1周---周3(12.14)---第一次作业

本次写作的大类：教育

====================Issue======================
【题目】
Issue154（2005年2-9月总频50次）
"Both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools. Education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators."
【翻译】
家长和社会都应该参与到当地的教育中来。教育太重要了，不能把教育单独交给一群专业的老师。
【参考链接】
imong的追星特训之教育类
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=204875
分类讨论-教育题材
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=132579
教育类例子及相关总结
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

====================Argument===================
【题目】
Argument147（2005年2-9月总频47次）
The following appeared in an editorial in a business magazine.
"Although the sales of Whirlwind video games have declined over the past two years, a recent survey of video-game players suggests that this sales trend is about to be reversed. The survey asked video-game players what features they thought were most important in a video game. According to the survey, players prefer games that provide lifelike graphics, which require the most up-to-date computers. Whirlwind has just introduced several such games with an extensive advertising campaign directed at people 10 to 25 years old, the age-group most likely to play video games. It follows, then, that the sales of Whirlwind video games are likely to increase dramatically in the next few months."
【简要分析】
引用Orange&Blue版主的分析：
论点：
the sales of Whirlwind video games are likely to increase dramatically in the next few months.
论据：
1. a recent survey of video-game players suggests that this sales trend is about to be reversed.
2.The survey asked video-game players what features they thought were most important in a video game. According to the survey, players prefer games that provide lifelike graphics, which require the most up-to-date computers.
3. Whirlwind has just introduced several such games with an extensive advertising campaign directed at people 10 to 25 years old, the age-group most likely to play video games.
【参考链接】
同主题写作
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

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热烈祝贺本小组正式开始运营！！希望小组成员认真阅读章程，按要求格式准时提交作业！！预祝第一次作业圆满成功！！！

[ Last edited by kito9695 on 2005-12-15 at 23:44 ]

人生太短
出手要更大
旁观者不需理解

赢得风光
豪得精彩
自己偏偏感觉失败

自尊心都可以出卖
忘记我也是无坏
连幸福都输掉醉在长街
依然是我最大

连梦想洒一地再任人踩依然笑得爽快

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发表于 2005-12-14 17:09:09 |只看该作者

================bas club作业贴链接===================

第一次作业

issue
http://edu.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=378919
argument
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=378960

[ Last edited by leedgen on 2005-12-13 at 20:57 ]
第二次作业：
issue
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... type%26typeid%3D103

[ Last edited by tomatopotato on 2005-12-16 at 22:47 ]
第八次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... ge=1&highlight=
第十次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

[ 本帖最后由 tomatopotato 于 2006-1-31 19:31 编辑 ]

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发表于 2005-12-14 17:46:16 |只看该作者

大家都好用功，有的都写好的，pfpf！
我也要加油啦！：）

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发表于 2005-12-14 18:46:51 |只看该作者

支持一下！大家继续努力哦：）

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By hearing ye shall hear, and shall not understand; and seeing ye shall see, and shall not perceive: people's heart is waxed gross, and their ears are dull of hearing, and their eyes they have closed; lest at any time they should see with their eyes, and hear with their ears, and should understand with their heart, and should be converted, and I should heal them.

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发表于 2005-12-14 21:09:19 |只看该作者

终于完成作业第一篇，写不出来了，继续去写argument......

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发表于 2005-12-14 22:08:17 |只看该作者

成功交作业~

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发表于 2005-12-14 22:18:47 |只看该作者

==================附资料==================
引用“鬼谷子”前辈：

家长和社会在教育中的作用
Parents and Teachers, National Congress of, also National Parent-Teacher Association (PTA), child and youth advocacy volunteer group, the largest of its type in the United States, founded in 1897 in Washington D.C. The organization's stated mission is to support and speak on behalf of children and youths in schools and in the community, and before governmental agencies and other organizations whose decisions affect children; to assist parents in developing the skills they need to raise and protect their children; and to encourage parental and public involvement in public schools. 我找到的这个例子可以说明在美国重视家长和社会在教育中的作用，而且已经有这样一个组织来推动家长和社会参与到教育中。The organization is made up of branches in every state, in the District of Columbia, and among schools for American dependents in other countries. In 1993 national membership totaled about 7 million in some 27,000 local units. 这里说明这个组织很有影响。Headquarters is in Chicago.

by 鬼谷子

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发表于 2005-12-14 23:43:53 |只看该作者

我的第一篇虎头蛇尾的argu

5点开始写argument
中间给饿死了,实在忍不住就去吃饭了.回来发现写了3段,后面却忘了要写什么了:L:L
狗尾续貂了一下!原谅!
以后要好好安排时间了!:)--检讨一下!

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