Romanus的作文修改铺 *已结束于2008.12.31~新年快乐!*

amyye94UID: 2577518

先谢啦~~~;)
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-897789-1-1.html

Jodie_310UID: 2439321

呜~~~希望在周五之前排到队。。。。
谢谢LZ了
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-897965-1-1.html

smart08UID: 2549353

12月7号要三战托福了,作文一直没有提高, 麻烦给点意见~先占个位置~

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-898047-1-1.html

oxyzenUID: 2563930

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-898357-1-2.html

weenbopperUID: 2423595

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=898732&extra=page%3D1%26amp%3Bfilter%3Dtype%26amp%3Btypeid%3D280
多谢前两次的修改，收益良多．．．
提前了三分钟，这个星期就要考了，希望能改最后一次

rachel4890UID: 2368107

Hello Romanus:

Hope you can still remember me, or the piece of work that you help revised.

It’s been a long time since you helpedrevised my essay. Night of Dec 14th, just the one before I took theTOEFL, I got your comments which is quiet beyond my expectation and from which I got tremendous encouragement. I never thought that my commonly written piece of work would earn me such high compliments, which as you said, that I’m a superb writer and my wok reminds you of yours in pre-u. I was like intoxicated that moment and this wonderful feeling accompanied me till the whole next day.

My randomly running into you in Gter is surly my best TOEFL experience. My score with a total of 102 came out yesterday.Though not that high, I still consider it a great reward given the fact that this is my first time and I only had limited time for preparation. Therefore, I’m here to give my sincere thanks for your overwhelming supports to all the people    including me, who are on their way to achieving their dream in life.

Your way of life really inspires me and I’m just asking whether we can become friends online? Maybe I can add you as friendon facebook, MSN or skype?

Wish you good luck with everything in yourlife.

Rachel

ock11UID: 2510283

排队。同楼上所言，衷心感谢楼主，改了我这么多的作文，有机会希望和你成为朋友，如果你是女孩，如果你还未嫁人，我倒想认识你。

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-899133-1-1.html

[ 本帖最后由 ock11 于 2008-12-5 17:37 编辑 ]

mpromanusUID: 2565872

111楼：Thanks for your encouraging feedback. I'm glad I was able to help you (and perhaps everybody else - I sure hope so) :) You may leave me a 站内短消息 for my contacts.

112楼：这一周还没有完，你会排到下一周哦。。另外您可以不用认识俺了，条件不符合啊。。;d:

spateUID: 2575795

多谢您了

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=899764&page=1&extra=page%3D1#pid1772137755

wuxu840217UID: 2568019

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-899800-1-1.html

感谢感谢！！！

aphasiafifiUID: 2475704

搜了一下mpromanus的帖子……117的大牛牛啊 跪拜跪拜~
我觉得我写的东西时好时坏。觉得还是思路的问题。尽管列了大框架，但是细节还是习惯一边写一边想，然后有时候就卡壳。后面开始不知道自己说什么………………Lz写文章的时候有没有什么经验。别告诉我你是那种一开始什么东西就都在脑子里的人……

谢谢帮忙了。我知道改我的文章很费劲。
:loveliness:
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-900101-1-1.html

绿草茵茵UID: 2471736

谢谢啦
题目：研究动物能够学到人类的很多特征

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-900235-1-1.html

[ 本帖最后由 绿草茵茵 于 2008-12-8 15:07 编辑 ]

oxyzenUID: 2563930

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-900655-1-1.html

水樱樱木UID: 2342479

自觉排队
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=900874&extra=page%3D1
本人12.21考试
谢谢了:)

[ 本帖最后由 水樱樱木 于 2008-12-10 16:54 编辑 ]

Jodie_310UID: 2439321

mpromanus，我真后悔作文练少了。前几天考试时，作文题看到过，但是没想过。结果考试时脑袋是昏的，什么都想不出来。哎。。。写成了连初中小孩都能写的文章了。。。哭啊

作文还是要靠积累啊。
多亏你好心帮这么多人改作文，大家都有进步。

嘻嘻，很多的感谢。