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issue 34 49/76/79/146
34) In any situation, progress requires discussion among people who havecontrasting points of view.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagreewith the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. Indeveloping and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which thestatement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerationsshape your position.
49) Claim: We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share thanfrom those whose views contradict our own.
Reason: Disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagreewith the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
76) We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than frompeople whose views contradict our own.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which youagree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for theposition you take. In developing and supporting your position, you shouldconsider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explainhow these considerations shape your position.
79) Claim: The best test of an argument is its ability to convince someone withan opposing viewpoint.
Reason: Only by being forced to defend an idea against thedoubts and contrasting views of others does one really discover the value ofthat idea.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagreewith the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
118) We can learn much more from people whose views we share than from peoplewhose views contradict our own.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which youagree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for theposition you take. In developing and supporting your position, you shouldconsider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explainhow these considerations shape your position.
146) The best test of an argument is the argument's abilityto convince someone with an opposing viewpoint.
Write a response inwhich you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statementand explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing andsupporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement mightor might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
原来写的习作,修改了以后用表格修改以后放上来~希望和大家一起进步~~
想知道你写的哪一道题
ISSUE 146~ 第一版忘记说了,SORRY~
句子 | 动作分析 | 内容点评 | 句子点评 | Some people believe that if there are people disagreeing with certain issues in every field, in order to defend the rightness of them, the best way to do is to convince the opponents. | 重复题目 | | disagreeing with certain issues 选词搭配
defend the rightness of them 选词 them的指代
to do what?
整句问题多多
| However, I maintain the idea that this argument is reasonable in science field. As far as politics or religion is concerned, this assertion does not make sense because not being able to convince others with different ideas does not necessarily mean the argument is deficient. | 引入我的三个观点 | | maintain the idea 搭配
assertion does not make sense 选词 | In science field, talking into opponents actually asks us to defend our ideas so we will have a deeper insight of our original idea. | TS1 | | talking into opponents 选词
| The evolution of science itself is a progress of coming across problems, establishing new schools of science, casting doubt on the new theories and the process circles. | 说理~感觉自己写的还蛮有道理 | | progress 选词
这里我想表达“进程”的意思,把progress改成procedure可以吗?我不知道这俩词的区别呃。 | For example, the famous physician Galileo first challenged Aristotle theory of gravity. That people at that time could not believe Galileo's "heresy" forced Galileo to carry out experiments in front of them on the spot to prove the rightness of his theory so by dismissing people's doubt, Galileo, to some extent, put more thought on his idea and even put forward this idea. | 实例
伽利略在说服别人的同时也发展了自己的观点 | 不太确定这个例子能支持你的分论点 看不出来你在写哪道题
146) The best test of an argument is the argument's abilityto convince someone with an opposing viewpoint. | 伽利略的拼写
Galileo | When it comes to the political issues, things get twisted, unlike the scientific theories which is based on facts rather than opinions so it is all about objectivity, the political issues are sometimes mixed with subjectivity, whose opinions overweight facts. | ts2 从上文的科学界过渡到政界,不知道这样区分一下科学界和政界有没有必要?还是直接首句从政界开头就行了? | | 断句问题
mixed with subjectivity 选词 | That is to say, convincing others with the opposite ideas is not the test of an argument. | 重复题目 | | | It's true that the pass of bills means two Parties finally convince each other. Yet, if people take a second thought of it, what's the impetus behind some of the bills? It's barely necessary for me to name all the rules and regulations enacted that are in favor of big companies at the expense of small companies interests. Those powerful corporations send their lobbies in Congress, let the money "talk" so as to exchange unjust priority between both Parties. | 两党合作(convince others)也不能代表argu就是好的,所以convince others 不是best test | | pass of bills 选词
bill's passage
It's barely necessary for me to name all the rules and regulations enacted 完全不知道你在写啥
这里我想举大公司通过法案侵权小公司的例子(这样的例子一定有,可是我想不出来具体是什么法案,只用笼统的说了。。。。)
这样没法说出具体名字的法律是不是当例子不合适呃?
| In the aforementioned case, the bill did make two parties work together, nevertheless it is not a good a test of the bill because the bill harms the majority of business owners in the first place. | 总结例子 | | 断句问题
你说的是什么bill?
| In addition, whether convincing opponents is the best test of an argument also depends on what kind of people we are persuading into for the reason that some people are stubborn and will never change their religious belief until they die. | TS3 | | | Since the day when Darwin published his evolution theory, the debate never stopped. Maybe telling a 90-year-old grandmother who is highly dedicated to Jesus her whole life that humans are monkeys will literally kill her. Another case is that, the crossfire over religious never die down, time changes, while people's strong will to risk their lives to defend their Gods never change. | 展开例子 | | | Personally, I am not zealous about religion but I do believe that although it is very likely that atheists cannot convince religious people regarding the origin of human beings nor can different religions persuade each other about their God, fail to convince each does not one hundred present means their belief is wrong, I believe we can still find a compromise to live with each other harmoniously. | 结合自己经验,总结例子(感觉自己说的太多了。。。。) | | | In science field, it is highly recommended for scholars to share their ideas, debate each other in order to make reversions of their original theories so the science field flourishes. When it comes to political issues, thanks to lobbies of certain interest groups, even two parties cooperate with each other, if the criteria of the bill is not deprived from the benefit of most people, the bill should not be passed. In relation to religion, because everyone is entitled to stick to his or her belief, being unable to convince others does not equal one religion is inferior to another so treating other people's belief with respect is the sensible thing to do. | 三个观点结尾 | | |
你好像6月28号就要考了吧 恕我直言 我觉得你的语言表达问题很大 你写的句子基本上就是凭感觉编出来的 完全不符合英语的习惯 完全没有借鉴平时阅读的文章句型、用词的痕迹 所以写出来的文章完全不通
原来未修改习作:
According to the statement, the best (no other way) way all arguments regardless of they are concerning science or politics is its ability to convince someone with an opposing viewpoint. In my opinion, the statement is partially right and whether it applicable depends on the situation.
As a matter of fact, when the argument is made by certain people, talking into opponents actually asks us to defend our ideas so we will have a deeper insight of our original idea. Take the physics field as an example in point. The evolution of science itself is a progress of coming across problems, establishing new schools of science, casting doubt on the new theories and the process circles. For example, the famous physician Galilei first challenged Aristotle theory of gravity. That people at that time could not believe Galilei's "heresy" forced Galilei to carry out experiments in front of them on the spot to prove the rightness of his theory so by dismissing people's doubt, Galilei, to some extent, put more thought on his idea and even put forward this idea.
When it comes to the political issues, things get twisted, unlike the scientific theories which is based on facts rather than opinions so it is all about objectivity, the political issues are sometimes mixed with subjectivity, whose opinions overweight facts. That is to say, convincing others with the opposite ideas is not the test of an argument. It's true that the pass of bills means two Parties finally convince each other. Yet if people take a second thought of it, what's the impetus behind some of the bills? It's barely necessary for me to name all the rules and regulations enacted that are in favor of big companies at the expense of small companies interests. Those powerful corporations send their lobbies in Congress, let the money "talk" so as to exchange unjust priority between both Parties. In the aforementioned case, the bill did make two parties work together, nevertheless it is not a good a test of the bill because the bill harms the majority of business owners in the first place.
In addition, whether convincing opponents is the best test of an argument also depends on what kind of people we are persuading into for the reason that some people are stubborn and will never change their religious belief until they die. Since the day when Darwin published his evolution theory, the debate never stopped. Maybe telling a 90-year-old grandmother who is highly dedicated to Jesus her whole life that humans are monkeys will literally kill her. Another case is that, the crossfire over religious never die down, time changes, while people's strong will to risk their lives to defend their Gods never change. Personally, I am not zealous about religion but I do believe that although it is very likely that atheists cannot convince religious people regarding the origin of human beings nor can different religions persuade each other about their God, fail to convince each does not one hundred present means their belief is wrong, I believe we can still find a compromise to live with each other harmoniously.
To sum it up, the kind of argument determines whether convincing skeptics is a good test. In science field, it is highly recommended for scholars to share their ideas, debate each other in order to make reversions of their original theories so the science field flourishes. When it comes to political issues, thanks to lobbies of certain interest groups, even two parties cooperate with each other, if the criteria of the bill is not deprived from the benefit of most people, the bill should not be passed. In relation to religion, because everyone is entitled to stick to his or her belief, being unable to convince others does not equal one religion is inferior to another so treating other people's belief with respect is the sensible thing to do.
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