3.23 by annke~

annkeUID: 2605122

3 23
2008.12.5NA
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:) t" D; t& E5 c" ]" O
Sports teaches us lessons about life.

Speaking of sports, there are more and more heated discussions, among them is a belief of sports teaches us lessons about life. Some people asserts it is too ridiculous to attach importance to sports. Nevertheless, I definitely agree with this statement, considering what we learned from sports, like competition and cooperation.

First of all, people develop a sense of competition in sports. No one could deny that individuals have kept in touch with numerous athlete activities since they are children, no matter just simple running or complicated soccer game, and also no matter people just watch or participate in. How do the sports so fascinating that attract people crazy about it from generation to generation? Form my perspective, one of the most crucial elements is competitiveness, which is internal of sports. Take the Olympic Games as an example. Olympic Games attributes from the ancient Greek, which lasts thousands years. Athletes gather at the meeting to compete with each other, who is the highest jumper, who is the fastest runner, who is the strongest weightlifter. It is in this way, people reveal the marvelous power and passion which distinguish from other creatures. Besides, individuals are inspired by the competitiveness of sports, they tend to more optimistic and they attempt to prepare for any possible challenges in the future. Therefore, sports teaches people that life is filled with competition and every single man should prepare for the competition.
Furthermore, there is another significant wisdom sports bring to people, which is cooperation. Many sports deserve cooperation, such as volleyball, football, baseball. It is a main strain that modern sports put an great emphasize on team-work. As far as we know, in modern society, people have to cope with different situations, and without the cooperation, people cannot achieve success. To understand this truth, watching a football game is an excellent idea. In the game, you can figure out how coaches arrange strategies and how field players frequently pass ball for other members to catch an ideal shot place, and you also can find out
they encourage each other when a missing occur and celebrate each other after a beautiful shot. That is a vivid lesson about cooperation, friendship, and life! Whoever absorbed in the wonderful match will unavoidably admire the sports and gratify for the silent wisdom. Therefore, sports filed is an grand stage of life, in which cooperation elaborate.
To sum up, from the popularity of sports all over the world and from the spirits contained in sports, people learned much beneficial in sports. So we should not cast doubt on the statement, and all we should do is providing special thanks for sports.

老王家的小猫UID: 2781258

Speaking of sports, there are more and more heated discussions, among them is a belief of(that) sports teaches us lessons about life. Some people asserts it is too ridiculous to attach importance to sports. Nevertheless, I definitely agree with this statement, considering what we learned from sports, like competition and cooperation.

First of all, people develop a sense of competition in sports. No one could deny that individuals have kept in touch with numerous athlete activities since they are children, no matter just simple running or complicated soccer game, and also no matter people just watch or participate in. How do the sports so fascinating that attract people crazy about it from generation to generation? Form(from) my perspective, one of the most crucial elements is competitiveness, which is internal of sports. Take the Olympic Games as an example. Olympic Games attributes from the ancient Greek, which lasts thousands years. Athletes gather at the meeting to compete with each other, who is the highest jumper, who is the fastest runner, who is the strongest weightlifter（这几个排比的句子和前面的分句衔接有点奇怪诶）. It is in this way(It is the way?), people reveal the marvelous power and passion which distinguish from other creatures. Besides, individuals are inspired by the competitiveness of sports, they tend to more optimistic and they attempt to prepare for any possible challenges in the future. Therefore, sports teaches people that life is filled with competition and every single man should prepare for the competition.( (前面很大篇幅都在讲体育运动中充满了竞争，包括所举的例子也是在说明这一点，不过是不是应该着重讲下individuals are inspired by the competitiveness of sports这部分呀，这样有点头重脚轻的感觉)
Furthermore, there is another significant wisdom sports bring to people, which is cooperation. Many sports deserve (rely on) cooperation, such as volleyball, football, baseball. It is a main strain that modern sports put a great emphasize(这是动词诶) on team-work. As far as we know, in modern society, people have to cope with different situations, and without the cooperation, people(they比较好，显出和上一分句的衔接) cannot achieve success. To understand this truth, watching a football game is an excellent idea. In the game, you can figure out how coaches arrange strategies and how field players frequently pass ball for other members to catch an ideal shot place, and you also can find out they encourage each other when a missing occur and celebrate each other after a beautiful shot. That is a vivid lesson about cooperation, friendship, and life! Whoever absorbed (immersed) in the wonderful match will unavoidably admire the sports and gratify for the silent wisdom. Therefore, sports filed is an grand stage of life, in which cooperation elaborate (is elaborated?).
To sum up, from the popularity of sports all over the world and from the spirits contained in sports, people learned much beneficial(benefits) in sports. So we should not cast doubt(doubt就不需要了) on the statement, and all we should do is providing special thanks for sports.

老王家的小猫UID: 2781258

论证很严密，语法基本没错，单词拼字的错误也很少，诶，我得学习下~